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In order to quit being addicted to novels in high school, I will spend all of my six dollars as a reward. I love reading novels, but there is someone I love more, and I am going to chase my dream. Gentlemen, see you at the top!

Your readers, I am very angry now. You are too slow to update. I read it from the first page to the present in just two days. Come on, update! ! !

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. .

A very good novel, but a bit short. . Much like the author, short and concise. .

Continuation: The protagonist travels through time, and then is roped in by Lao Lu, taking over the Taoist temple until he is invincible, and by the way driving the development of the surrounding economy, and then the chaos in the 108 world, and then the plan to ascend to the fairy world that cannot keep up with the changes, and the series of plots that follow to save the world are quite exciting. The focus of the whole story is two words - to protect, mainly to protect everyone. There is not much description of the small family. It may be that the author feels that writing about the relationship between men and women is more laborious and unflattering. It is understandable. After all, no one is in love these days, and even a two-dimensional wife cannot pamper him [laughter] Hua: This is not a simple novel. The author has an outline. I see that there are basically no poisonous points (there are some that can be ignored, such as unexpected scene changes and the protagonist's rough nerves). The characters also have their own characteristics. Many supporting characters can be singled out to write a book. The type of story is not happy, but more emotional, and is more suitable for middle-aged and elderly people or young and artistic people. Posted: I'm sleepy, the beeping stopped, and I don't know why the score is so low. Maybe the author didn't hire a robot? If the author can see this comment, please promise me not to be so short every time! Also, don't think in your mind, "Where is it short?" After all, it has been growing so little for so many years, it's hard for my sister-in-law!

I opened it in the afternoon and stayed up all night until around four in the morning. I was caught off guard and found the latest one. The author will add more updates soon! !

It's very beautiful. Immortality is meant to be lonely. I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is not casually emotional or too ruthless. Nothing is rushed or regretful. I am destined to live forever. I hope my heart will never grow old.

This book is really great. It has foreshadowing and foreshadowing, and some of the characterizations are well done. Although the protagonist makes me feel stupid from time to time, it does not affect the reading. The writing is so eye-catching that I stayed up late to finish it.

Come on, author(ง •̀_•́)งAccording to your own ideas, it's super beautiful It feels pretty good-looking! Why is the score so low?

I like the author's style very much. It has a leisurely and contented feeling. It looks very relaxed and very literary. I feel very good when I occasionally see poems and inlaid scenery. Five-star praise! [Laughs][laughs]

It's well written, don't be put off by the title. I quite like the character of the protagonist, and as of now, there is no harem, and the author is very hard-working. It's hard to find such a hard-working author [please update]

This book is pretty awesome. You can fly with a sword only when you are in the stage of becoming a god [face covering]

Five-star praise. I read it all night and finished the latest chapter. It's really good. The plot is okay. The protagonist of this book is also humane. Immortality is not to be ruthless and desireless, but to make one's life more exciting. If you start to reject the seven emotions and six desires as soon as you live forever, what is the difference between it and a stone? I don't really like the immortality of the Juesheng style. Maybe you can watch the hard work in the front, but there is nothing to watch in the back.

Must give a five-star rating! It is a familiar division of realms that is easy to remember: Qi training period, foundation building period, golden elixir period, Yuan Ying period, spirit transformation period, void refining period, integration period, Mahayana period, and tribulation transcending period. See Chapter 30! I can't stand it anymore! And 48 years have passed all of a sudden. Jin Dan is such a rookie, Nascent Soul is so crotch-stretching, and Transformation Master is so flamboyant.

It's a good-looking longevity novel. There is currently a heroine who is the clone of the empress, but her whereabouts are unclear. I feel that the enemies the hero encounters are getting stronger and stronger, and the protagonist can't even defeat him [Thinking]. At the beginning, he was always invincible and then semi-invincible. There are many interesting things. There are many places to be curious about. I am a curious baby. The author can fill in the extra story at the end [flying kisses] [flying kisses]. 1. How does the protagonist spend his time in the same place at the beginning? 2. The heroine Song Xianhe's growth experience includes the process of becoming his servant with the martial arts master Li Gui. 3. The growth story of the male protagonist Master Lu... I can't think of anything else, I recommend it to be good-looking [AM][AM]

Is this really a serious longevity article? Really not One Punch Man? [Laughing evilly] It gets more and more toxic later on, with a lot of brainless characters.

It's okay. It's slightly different from the general longevity novels. If you like longevity novels, it's worth reading.

It's very interesting, the story is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping. The story of each plot is layered, and it's easy to tell your relationship. In general, it seems that this book has been followed from May to now, and it is a bit sad to end suddenly. But I also hope that the author's next book will be released soon. There are many highlights of this book, and book lovers can look for them on their own, so I won't mention them here. [Learned][Learned][Make faces]

This book is generally very good, the characters are well created and not brainless. But there are still many holes left unfilled in the book 1. Who are the old beggars encountered in the lower world and the fairy world, and what is their story background? 2. Who is the traitor among the correctors? 3. How did the crack in the protagonist's small world come about, and why is the opposite side of the crack the earth instead of something else? 4. Source of the system 5. What exactly does the Death of Bliss and the Snow of Destruction refer to in The Plan of Nothingness? 6. There are 99 floors in the Freedom Tower. Currently, the protagonist has only gone up to the 72nd floor. So where did the native creatures in the tower come from and what is the scenery above the 72nd floor like? 7. The Demon Prince is obviously stronger than the Heavenly Lord, so what is the realm above the Heavenly Lord? 8. The protagonist practiced physical training, why didn't he become the strongest in the end? The above may be written by the author but I didn't pay attention to it, so it is for reference only.

The writing is very good, but unfortunately, there is a common problem with this kind of writing: it ignores the basic rules. There is a saying in the model aircraft industry: A brick flies with great strength. If you are strong, you can jump high. If you get yourself a wingsuit and finally a cape, you can glide, right? You can even fly by turning the propeller by hand and fanning the steel bionic wings by hand. In the martial arts style, you can step on water to cross a river, and in Wudang ladder, you can move up and down the clouds, with your left foot stepping on the right foot. However, when the protagonist is so strong that he has reached 200 levels of Qi training, he can step on the air and the reaction force can increase. A punch from the hand also has a huge reaction force. In other words, the protagonist can swim in the air. After getting stronger... Superman, you know, with strong body and supernatural powers, he can naturally resist gravity and fly.

The plot feels pretty good, and there's nothing special about it. Overall, it's much better than some of the books I've read. Other books may be the same process after reading too much. This book doesn't have too many repetitions, it's very novel, and it's pretty good.

Thanks for this book I learned a lot. Goodbye, troops! Well (*￣m￣)

Leave a comment, I've finished reading it now. The overall feeling is a little below average. First of all, the setting of this book is very complicated, such as: system, immortality, cultivation of immortality, multiple worlds, great annihilation, etc., But this is a classic operation of Tomato Shuangwen. The writing style of this book is pretty good in the early stage. From the comparison between Su Qi's immortality and the aging of people and things around him, we can feel that the author wanted to write about longevity. Of course, there is a permanent problem here, which is Su Qi's handsomeness. Because he only mentioned handsomeness without describing it, the rest of the writing is about the same, and the writing style in the latter part is very average. For example: Su Qi went to After the Immortal World, the description of the human world is too simple or too little, and there are only two times in my impression. The first time Mijie was possessed, and the second time a small part of the long river of time was confused, and the problem of interweaving multiple timelines, but these two times were not the protagonists, they were Li Taibai and Lu Changan respectively, and the second time was obviously to add settings to Dashan Mountain. Of course, we should also focus on the ending. The ending is too sudden. Generally speaking, some descriptions and the like will be added. Also, there are too few ascensions in the human world, and in the last section of ascension, people are still talking about how awesome Su Qi is. There are also some holes that he didn't fill in, such as the old beggar's life experience, and the background and purpose of the final boss. Overall, this novel is considered average, and it is considered average among cool novels. It's average among longevity novels, average among cultivating immortals, and average among system novels. If you like novels with more settings, you can read it. [Cover face]

It can be seen that the author is still more careful when writing, but there are many pitfalls that I don't know if they will be filled in later. For example, the little boy selling maps in Feixue City can only see that the boy is in the preliminary stage of "recruiting friends in the novice village". The description of the characters can be more detailed. For example, in the fairy world, many things about the protagonist are about the protagonist. After four or five hundred chapters, readers may have forgotten all kinds of characters in the mortal world. On his birthday, he pulled out friends from the mortal world to write. I don't know if it's a remedy, but the feeling is just fleeting. Overall, it's not a particularly brainless article, but it needs to be strengthened. The combat power system currently has no problems at all. It's just that the protagonist's combat power feels a bit collapsed when the protagonist practices Qi at the beginning. Considering that it is to attract readers, I won't comment. This book can give a mid-to-high rating. In terms of description, there is no eye-catching feeling every time I write about the protagonist. He is handsome, but how handsome is he? We don't know this. If the author can describe the appearance in more detail, I believe many readers will be willing to read it. In fact, what makes me more concerned about Qinglian's plot is that I want to know in the next second whether the male protagonist has rescued her. As a reader, I am very much looking forward to the next work [top post]

It's good to watch, but it's too little. Looking at the current plot, is it a single heroine or no heroine? I hope you won't write too much (*^ω^*)(*^ω^*)

After reading a book for so long, this is the first time I comment on this platform. This book is a little different from other books I have read. Since I started reading novels a few years ago, except for the very beginning, I have read some of the rich novels at that time. Since I used the Tomato platform, reading the novels for the first time will trigger feelings in my heart, and I can clearly understand the scene that the author wants to express. From the beginning of reading the novel The delicate, emotional characters and stories in the book have now become "routine novels" that I have been reading all the time. Some of the stories in this book seem to take me back to a few years ago. At that time, there were not many so-called "routine novels". Many authors would carefully describe each character in their writing, polish the plot carefully, and bring us many unique stories, as if they can allow readers to experience a different life. Give unlimited room for imagination. The author of many chapters will add one or two verses at the end of the text that match the emotion of the chapter, which further enriches the emotion of the book. Although the author's world may not be so perfect and rich now. But I believe that from now on, if we slowly polish it, we will eventually bring us a novel worth recalling. Even though there are thousands of years, there are eight desolations. The future is like an ocean and the days ahead are long.

Yes, it is indeed good-looking, but there are also bad ones, and of course this is inevitable. What should I say, come on! Nice novel!

This book has a compact plot, distinctive characters, and humorous language. The author conveys a positive attitude towards life through Su Qi's growth process. At the same time, the book also involves many discussions about human nature, morality and values, allowing people to gain certain inspiration and thinking during the reading process.

It feels very good to me. First of all, Su Qi knows that he is immortal and has never tried to associate with a mortal, knowing that it will bring sadness and low self-esteem. Second, never be reckless and be self-aware. Third, the plot is not boring, with ups and downs.

You can read more than 100 pictures in this book (I think it is good that the protagonist is not trapped by love, and the women around him are not just saints) until the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is exposed (one of the seven immortal emperors in the immortal world (one of the 3000 avatars who has experienced the mortal world and practiced the way of forgetting love)). I have already thought out the plot for you. The big villain boss Cholera ascends to the immortal world and beats the seven emperors in the immortal world, and the protagonist becomes the immortal emperor and suppresses it with one hand ~ Complete