The Senior Sister Became a Crazy Critic After She Failed to Show Off.

It's super good-looking. I like this kind of united team to explore the world. Each has its own merits. The characters are very three-dimensional, the plot is compact and ups and downs, and the language is also very humorous. [Love][Love][Love][Love]

Regarding the CP issue: I haven't thought much about it yet. It depends on the specific direction in the later stage. I won't deliberately not have CP, and I won't write too many sticky scenes. I will write emotional scenes in the later stage. If you don't like it, proceed with caution. [Blowing kiss] There is no CP in the text

It's great, very interesting. The interaction between the heroine and the chiefs is very interesting. The author's writing is very good. I personally don't want to have a male protagonist. I want to see the friendship between each other.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I still want to review it first. The book written by the author is very good. In this book, everyone is their own protagonist. There is no so-called protagonist halo. Ning Ran does not have the golden fingers of those heroine novels. Everyone is very powerful. They are all the geniuses of that era. Although they are noisy, start fighting when they disagree, and never say that they are friends, they can give each other the back. For example, If you are greedy for money and have trouble, you will go to love. If you don't go to hell, who will go to hell? I always think that Nao Yuzi is really good at telling fortunes for me. The venomous Luo Meiyu Bu Qing who likes to deceive his own people There is also little Ran'er Ningran who speaks in a calm tone and is very simple. (Representing only personal views) These are troubled times, and geniuses are emerging in large numbers. Who can desire to be higher than the sky?

It suits my taste. The characters in it each have their own characteristics, and the plot is also very interesting. I think it can be used with or without CP (nothing is better). As long as those few people are together, the joy will continue. It is very interesting and I like this novel [][][][] I hope the author can read more. I can't get enough [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's really super good-looking. It can be said that all the chiefs of these seven sects have their own images. Although it is mainly written with the senior sister, everyone else can be regarded as a novel and the protagonist in it, and their feelings and feelings towards each other. The character of trust is very distinct. It is really a super, super, super good-looking novel, but the only disadvantage is that it is still being serialized, and you need to wait every day. It is not finished, and it is not a loss to invest in it. Ahhhhhhhhh, it is so good, the author will update it quickly!

I really love this book. It's very interesting so far. A group of people with different personalities come together. It's the kind of group portrait I want to see (not completely, but at least for now). I hope there won't be any break-ups. Also, is there a cp? (Personally, I think friendship is very good) I look forward to the update and the follow-up. I love you so much [blowing kiss]

I really like the setting of this book. I have been looking for this kind of book recently. It is really beautiful! Support the author, I hope there will be more, because it's not enough /(´∀｀)♡ Both the heroine and some of the characters appearing now have very distinct personalities. In fact, I hope there won't be a male protagonist. Although I don't know if the author has been decided yet, but if the book is good, none of this will matter.

It's really good-looking, the characters have distinct personalities, I don't understand why so few people have read it, it's really a clean book on immortality, there's not so much intrigue, everyone is practicing hard, the heroine is not a virgin, she takes action when it's time, she doesn't say too much, and the little monk is so fun, it's really not a loss to invest in it, sisters.

Very nice. Every character is well portrayed, but Lu Xiao is a bit annoying. The first time I watched it, I thought he was very good. After watching it a few times, I found him annoying. If there is a male protagonist, I hope it's not him.

I especially like the daily routine of the protagonist group practicing together and bickering. The male protagonist is not the common strong type, he is a growth➕talent➕smart type The heroine is cold yet gentle. She died saving people in her previous life. This is not a conspiracy between senior brothers. The male and female protagonists are not always together. The male protagonist has always been silently in love with the female protagonist. There is no sugar. In the end, there was no kiss and the relationship was not revealed. Disciples from famous sects also have an upright character, and it's not just that they're just as good as they are on the outside. These books mostly talk about friendship

So far, it's okay. I really like the adventures of the friends, but I don't like the emotional line. The scenes between Lu Xiao and Bai Zhi are a bit boring and I don't want to watch them. Compared with other characters, the designs are not exciting enough. I feel that the main cast of the heroine, Huishan, Bu Qing, Ao Yuzi, Luo Meiyu, and Xu Yang are actually enough. I just found out that Lu Xiao and the heroine are together in the extra story. It's so weird. It's annoying enough that Lu Xiao chases after the heroine and clings to the heroine. I can't stand it at all. The pure sister-sister relationship is not as comfortable and natural as this. It's not even as good as having a romantic relationship with Luo Meiyu. I can't stand it anymore and ran away.

Love this book so much! The sects written in it are all very loving, and each character has his or her own characteristics, especially Monk Huishan, who is responsible for the laughter of this book. Several friends fight with each other, which is the world of immortality that I yearn for😘

How come there are so few ratings for such a good-looking movie? Woohoo (눈_눈), it's so beautiful. Huishan is like the soul in it [laughing] [laughing] Bu Qing is a trap that everyone avoids, Lu Xiao is the only normal person, Ao Juezi is a madman, and Ning Ran is also one Luo Meiyu is a madman, Luo Meiyu is half a normal person, Xu Yang and Xiao Wangchuan are also normal people, Wan Wuya is a fool, Bai Zhi is half half Ningran and is still a Bai Qiehei, and soon there will be new ones (Yun Fan, Zhai Er). As expected, those who are close to Zhu are red, and those who are close to Mo are black [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Nice! Very impressive! I originally read it for the group portrait article, and I was not disappointed! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The chiefs of the three sects and four sects all look like senior brothers and sisters in front of them, setting an example for the disciples of their sects; in person, they will get into fights from time to time when they get together, but if they really encounter trouble, they will trust each other and make progress together. Every character in the author's works has his or her own soul. A Buddhist cultivator like Huishan is not like ordinary Buddhist cultivators who are pure-hearted, have no desires and desires, and are very greedy for money [laughing and crying] Personally, I feel that the story ends in the world of cultivation. The story of ascending to the fairy world is a bit too fast. For example, why did Miaomiao not come to find them but they were in the west interface... I feel like there are some parts that I can't react to. As for the extra story, I think the story line about the older generation is quite interesting, but it's a bit short.

Friendship yyds, this kind of funny and non-bloody story about teaming up with friends to travel around the world and get into trouble everywhere is really good to watch. The plot is interesting but not procrastinating, the characters don't talk too much, and the fights are never forced. Even the secondary characters are very delicate and great. I like the little monk the most, it's so interesting! ! ! !

It's so beautiful, the characters are so distinct, with strengths and weaknesses. The writing is very good and humorous, and every plot is unexpected. I really like the little monk Huishan, he is responsible for half of my laughter. I don't understand why the rating is so low and the number of viewers is so low.

Nice! Master Huishan is really responsible for the laughter [send heart] [smirk]

Finished reading, spreading flowers٩(๑^o^๑)۶ This book should be read in two parts, before ascension and after ascension. Before Ascension is very interesting, with a bunch of "crazy" funny and heartwarming daily routines. Although there are typos and omissions, it still deserves five stars. After Ascension, the story is very sloppy. I explain who and who and who reincarnated and why inexplicably, but it actually has no meaning to the book. There is no sublimation theme and no filling in the holes. The things in Luo's previous life really feel dispensable. The classic overlord story misunderstands the sense of déjà vu. Personally, I feel it is even worse than nothing. It kind of lowers the grade of this book. Yeah, and there are more typos and omissions after ascending, so I don't understand why we have to rush this part. I don't watch the extras for personal reasons, which have nothing to do with the article. My complaints above may be mentioned, but it's not important () Overall, this article is good. It is a very relaxing and interesting article. The length is just right. You can read it in one go.

Except for the later stage, I watched the whole process with a smile! Really good! For me, the following extras are unnecessary! [Laughing][Laughing] Just write about ascending to the fairyland! Or come up with a sentence: "Since then, a group of madmen have appeared in the fairy world, and they have made the fairy world crazy!" [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Very good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking I really like this kind of novel novel. I can find like-minded partners, fight as a group, fight together, and play crazy together, and each one is more crazy than the other. This kind of novel is really beautiful, and it is the best I have read about cultivating immortality.

It's very interesting and real. Shanhui is very fun and interesting. There are also some unique routines in the article. Sometimes I don't even realize it. It feels like I have really had a happy journey of cultivating immortality. There is no intrigue and it is very pure. But it is a pity that the author just wrote a novel about cultivating immortality. I hope that the author can write a better novel about cultivating immortality [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Many books are written in a way that is not the same as that of the Holy Mother. In fact, even if it is annoying, it is quite the Holy Mother. But this book is really beautiful. The heroine has strength and friends, and she is not reborn because of any hatred or grudges. Moreover, it is not the same cookie-cutter model of growth in many fairy tales. I recommend all new book friends and old bookworms to read it.

It's so beautiful, so exciting, and the main characters are so funny and cute, but it's just too short. I hope there will be more.

I personally like this article very much, and I really like the various sparks created by the friction between several friends. You can surrender your life if you have something to do, and fight if you have nothing to do, hahaha, it's funny. I haven't watched the extra chapter. I read it as a friendship story. I feel that the cp of the extra chapter will affect my favorite characters.

It's quite good-looking. The heroine is devoted to the Tao and has a cold spiritual root. She speaks without emotion, is cold and cold, and has a bit of a naive aura. The way the companions get along with each other is also very different. They are not the kind that are more gentle, but the kind that tends to be funny and slapstick. Each person's image is also very vividly described. The writing style is also relatively mature, quite good, over

This is the first time I have seen this kind of ending. There is no protagonist who becomes the strongest or does anything that will be passed down through the ages. However, I still like a group of people who are happy and don't have any big worries. They grow up together, soar up and enjoy the world together. Damn it! So envious! ! !

It's a great group portrait book. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses. I like their relationship very much. They share the same hardships and not necessarily share the blessings [laughing]. My favorite is Monk Huishan. Although he is very greedy for money, the fairyland part in the back is too small and not enough to read. It would be better if there are some fairyland extras [blowing kiss]

A group portrait, with clear logic, everyone was crazy about it, the plot is compact, the heroine is not a brainless virgin, it is super beautiful

It's really good to watch. The main cast is really funny. But the rest of it feels a bit rushed. It would be nice if there were more. It's still unfinished. Also, the author was kind and helpful. Many of the typos that were noted in the comments were basically corrected by the author.