I, the Lord of Heavenly Dao Palace! the Disciples Are All Rebels Against Their Master.

This book is light-hearted and humorous, without any plot of bitterness and hatred, and is updated steadily! In addition, the author is extremely considerate. If readers are not satisfied with what they read, they can just turn around and read what they like. There is no need to waste your precious time and leave negative reviews. If the author's words cause discomfort to the boss, please seek medical treatment as soon as possible.

This book can be of a high standard and is worth reading

I think it's good if this book follows this trend, which is the development between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. I can't say it's slow, I just look anxious. Reading is about reading stories in other people's minds, not reading stories in one's own mind. If you really want to read it but don't like it being written poorly, just write one yourself.

I've read 50 chapters, and it's pretty good. It's an innovation to a certain extent. This book combines the invincibility within the sect at the beginning with the return of disciples. The overall style is relatively relaxed. No matter what the conspiracy is, it can be broken with force. The female disciples of various styles indeed increase the watchability and gossip value. Come on, author, keep writing in this style. In the later stage, there will be more Shura field and harem competition, and the level will be slightly suppressed. It seems that it will be written to the immortal level soon, too fast! The first story was raised by three levels. It is easy for the system to collapse later. You can set the early, middle, late and half steps of the same level to increase the writing space. In terms of geography, you usually go through the east, west, south, north, and middle. Finally, before flying to immortality, there will be a race confrontation or something like that. Write down the hot blood points. I use my For example, Blood Recommends Xuanyuan, the female protagonist sacrifices for the sake of national justice. After the male protagonist learns about it, she rushes to the scene and burns her own cultivation to resurrect her. This way, once the male protagonist loses his level, he has writing space. You can add a copy to write about the female protagonist going into a special space to treat the male protagonist. This can also be a foreshadowing if necessary. That's all I have to say, mainly because I sincerely hope that the author can write a long and well-written article, and I hope it can be helpful to the author.

This book is very well written... I like to read master-disciple love harem stories, they are all pretty good [Cool][Cool]

I really like the character design of the third disciple. The ending is also perfect. I gave birth to a pair of twins with Chen Xuan. The hole in the Pangu ax was also filled in. The author is really attentive. There are many people saying what happened to the second disciple and her sister. In fact, I think it is okay. The character design in the early stage is slightly lacking. After all, ordinary people's vision is the same in the long term before they have seen a wider world. Before she knew Chen Xuanqian didn't know how powerful he was. In the fantasy world, it is normal for the survival of the fittest to follow the strong. She was not familiar with Chen Xuan at first, so she rejected the offer to become a disciple. Nuo knew that Chen Xuan was powerful from the beginning and would naturally accept the apprenticeship. However, if you miss something, you will miss it. This is normal. The first, second, fourth and fifth disciples each have their own independent characters, which are very vivid and vivid. The character descriptions of other important supporting characters such as the Emperor are also very vivid, and each one has its own character and personality. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. Sometimes he is very characterful, but sometimes he feels a bit... (Can't go into details [laughing evilly]) But he is not brainless, and there is no drama like pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. He is strategic and has a harem, but he has less interactions with his disciples. The above are all my own thoughts after reading it [currently in the process of finalization] If you don't like it, don't blame it. Otherwise it will rebound! Bounce! Bounce!

This is the better regional invincibility article I have ever read! ! I have seen before that once you leave the invincible zone, you become a mortal! Even though I have no strength, I still like to go out and have fun. Then use some more embarrassing plots to round it off. Add a master-disciple relationship! It's so damn hard to watch. . This book is great! Spend some system points! Still invincible outside the area. Really invincible. . . It's very comfortable to look at. .

I'll give five stars first. The author writes very well. I support it and hope to keep up the good work. This book has been on the road while driving. It is astringent and very delicious.

One, it's really invincible. It's really fun to watch, and the style has overflowed the screen. Second, it is really humorous and really exciting to watch. Sometimes when my wife looks at me giggling, her eyes are similar to looking at Chi Yun. Worth a look!

This is my first review to give five stars! ! I have to say that this book is indeed worth reading. I accidentally read it all night long. The protagonist's invincible fighting power is really to my appetite. Come on, the author should update five chapters a day. Thank you! (Although I feel like I want to eat shit)

I only saw a few pictures at first, but the writing was not very good. I like the relationship between master and disciple. So don't say anything else. Five stars start. Great love! The further back I look, the more I like it.

So far, I don't have any faults. If I say there is one thing, the plot is still a bit lacking. You have played tricks on the invincible novel + harem novel. It's a good idea. Unlike other novels, harem has a lot of stories and various descriptions. Although male book lovers like to read it, harem, as the name implies, requires you to spend time on each plot. Go and conquer, come on, the author, I'm optimistic about you. By the way, don't cross the realm of the characters too much. There are more main tasks for recruiting the protagonist in the later period. Fortunately, Tiandao Pavilion also recruits some handymen. The more plot and story lines, the longer the novel will be. It's not to make a little money, but to go further for this book and let readers enjoy it more.

I have finished reading. It will be difficult to find a book like this that suits my taste. However, I can still see that the author's shortcomings in writing novels are still a bit hasty, which is still a bit regretful. He also pays too much attention to his direct disciples. The expressions of other beauties are not full enough. In fact, it is quite in line with the title. I only express my personal opinion. In fact, I still like this book very much, but it is too short! ! !

Not bad, not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, the master-disciple relationship still needs to be done a little bit, after all, it has been laid out in the front, and overall the writing is very good (✪▽✪) It's just a little short, and the second disciple is a little stupid, but nothing else.

The writing is imaginative, and the protagonists in the play are vividly represented with flesh and blood. The story plot is okay. It gives people a feeling of reading slowly.

It's well written, but the reason why I didn't give it 5 stars is that the protagonist's character is a bit dark. How can a time traveler destroy other people's families at every turn [face covering] It's difficult to cultivate people with such a perverted mentality in today's education. It's normal to have revenge. I'm not a great Buddha. I just need to kill a few. The protagonist is also a little arrogant because of his invincibility, and the system has no sense of existence... Just a counting machine. Basically, all the system points are exchanged for cultivation level, and I am now invincible. I am just hanging on there. What is the use of running into the invincible field outside so much... [Smile] I feel like it would be great to get some modern weapons, magic, technology, etc. In cultivating immortals. Enough with the bad, now let's talk about the good The characterization is vivid and fits the image in my mind. The sentences are also very fluent and the wording is appropriate. It feels very immersive when I read it, and I hope the author will work hard. As long as there is no supervision, I will continue to watch [Like] [Like]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

It took me a few days to read it, so I will briefly describe it. (Possibly minor spoilers) Advantages: 1. The early and ending writing is okay, and the filling of a few pitfalls is also okay. 2. The plot descriptions of the first three disciples are relatively full, and the plot of getting along with the protagonist and becoming a master makes people laugh endlessly. 3. The protagonist's character is stable. Disadvantages: 1. There are some problems with the world view in the middle and late stages. The description is large but not substantial enough. The realm is very vague. I don't know why many realms are called this. The ones that have been impressively explained include Yukong, Qihai, Human Immortal, and True God (igniting the divine fire). 2. The plot is a matryoshka, from Tianxuan to Fallen Immortal to the Great Thousand Void to the Sea of ​​Chaos, the villains or supporting characters (Xiao Xiami) all have similar paths. The saints, Taoists, and gods who have lived for so long can only kill, force marriage and then kneel down, which is not much different from the low-level monks of Tianxuan (also related to the first shortcoming). Although it is all to make the protagonist happy, I also hope that the plot will be more exciting and fresh. Overall, I give it four stars, with good ending and raunchy plot. [Think]

After reading it, hahaha, let's spread the flowers, the author is great! After the protagonist started struggling for a while, he immediately took off with an invincible rhythm and was immediately picked up. Invincible and refreshing articles, leading disciples to practice, interesting things, daily life, it is simply intuitive. Keep up the good work, Oli!

I watched most of it in one go and still haven't slept yet. It's a good work with the same theme. The writing style is nonsensical and sophisticated, the rhythm is well controlled, and the viewing experience is perfect. The number of female protagonists in the content is not overstuffed, but some are marginalized. However, I saw that except for one, none of them have entered the harem so far. I wonder if they will be added later in the plot and there will be no poisonous points at all. Moreover, the author has a very good attitude. When I read the review and his comments at the end of the article, if there were basically any problems, he immediately changed them. Even the completely indifferent state of address was changed when many people were dissatisfied with it. Moreover, the whole article was changed, not the kind of sudden change after reading half way. I can't find any major faults, but there really aren't any explosive points in the book, because the male protagonist is really invincible, and I enjoyed reading it all the time. After watching it, I became a bit tired of aesthetics in the later stage. Moreover, the pace obviously accelerated from the Sea of ​​Chaos, and the plot was also a bit matryoshka. As a result, the reasonable plot arrangement of the heroine I mentioned before disappeared. The character of the male protagonist also changed later, and the funny attributes in the front and back were basically gone. The hole has been filled, but there is one thing I don't understand. Should only the apprentices be accepted in the wedding or all the important female partners should be accepted. Logically speaking, they should all be accepted, but only a few apprentices would be accepted. Moreover, if they are all accepted, it doesn't make sense to send Yueshen and Li Shenruo to work in a remote place like Bai Yujing.

As a refreshing novel, it can be regarded as excellent. The plot is a standard template in invincible novels. Except for some details that are not handled very well, everything else is very good. I hope that I can write something new in the fairy world and don't want it to be unfinished!

After reading more than 570 chapters, I felt it was very interesting at first, and I waited for updates every day. Later, maybe because I haven't watched too many of this kind of stories, I felt that the plot really had no highlights. Except for some emotional lines that were a bit twisty, others were very clear. The supporting characters all had grudges with the protagonist's disciples. After a conflict, they were instantly killed by the things given by the protagonist, or were instantly killed by the protagonist's arrival. Or become a younger brother who worships without thinking. The emotional line is pretty good, the writing is pretty good, and the setting and foreshadowing are pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. From my personal point of view, there are still some shortcomings.

The overall plot is relaxing and interesting, and it is interesting to incorporate various memes and vocabulary into it. The daily life with the apprentices is very exciting. The roles of the apprentices are not repetitive and have their own characteristics. However, apart from tea, there are many plots, and Lei and Guo seem a bit redundant. The story of the supporting characters is rich with NPCs and Chi Yun, but like Wang? There are too few small supporting characters, and there are as few small plots as secret realms and competitions. The plot and foreshadowing of the first Ascension were richer, but the second and third times were too similar. There are too many realm divisions, especially the four realms at the beginning, which have to be written in two rows. To sum up, the story is very rich and not boring. It would be better if we adjust the subplots of the minor supporting characters and the ascension plot [Learned]

Overall it's pretty good, full marks for being cool. Although the writing style is average, it is very smooth overall. Zhang Chi handled it well and received good reviews. Compared with most online articles, the thinking of the characters in this work is indeed better done and closer to reality. The various conflicts are not like some works where the author just keeps explaining them, but they are really reflected in the plot. This alone is enough to give it five stars. A lot of people are criticizing the character Li Shenruo. How should I put it? The contradictions and many clues in this book are revealed in this character, which can be said to be the finishing touch. I personally think this is the most successful character in this book, both in terms of setting and related plots. So, it gives me a feeling that many children on this platform have never experienced severe beatings from society? Why is it her fault that she didn't become a disciple? What is this idea? Is your boss wrong if he doesn't support you in vain? I hope the author will not change the setting because of these idiotic remarks, and never forget his original intention. Come on

After reading this book, I felt a little disappointed. It felt like an adventure ended like this. The people in it were very vividly written. The protagonist has 5 apprentices in total. The whole book is invincible, except for the boss fight, which is not so invincible. It may be the last boss in the book, so the writing is stronger. The whole book has filled in all the holes that need to be filled in. Although the word count is sometimes low, the character who impressed me the most in the whole book is Chi Yun, who is a complete comic in the book, and Dongfang Han and Second Senior Sister. "Among all the characters, I feel that Li Shennuo is a pity, just because I chose the wrong one at the time. I read the comments. Many people hate this character, but I don't think people make many choices in their lives. It is normal to make the wrong choice, for example, someone offers you 3 million. And a lottery ticket worth 100 million. Which one will you choose? I will definitely choose 3 million, just like this. Overall, I feel that the early and middle stages of the book are quite enjoyable, and the later stages are quite good. The ending is pretty good. The others are quite boring, but I have to say that this book is really good, among them. The characters also have illustrations to look at. I think this is very good, so let's not talk about this book. I personally think so. He is worth 4 points. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better, and I wish everyone who sees this comment will be happy every day.

It is indeed an invincible and enjoyable novel. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist is injured no more than 5 times. Let me introduce some realms to those who want to read this book. Tianxuan Realm: Tempering the body, condensing Qi, Qi sea, controlling the sky, connecting to the Xuan, returning to the ruins, annihilation, immeasurable distraction, refining the void, combining the body, Mahayana Tianmen, overcoming the tribulation, scattering immortals Fallen Immortal Realm: Human Immortal, Earth Immortal, Celestial Immortal, True Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, Golden Immortal, Immortal King, Immortal Emperor, Immortal Lord, Immortal Lord, Immortal Emperor Daqian Void: Realm of the Venerable (belonging to the transitional realm between immortals and gods) Real God Realm True God God King God Lord God King Semi-Saint Saint Taoist Master (also known as Buddha Lord and God Lord) Sea of Chaos: Ancient Gods, Supreme Gods, Transcendent Gods, Self-gods, Chaos Gods, Supreme Realm Hongmeng Dao Realm: Hongmeng Realm Taichu Realm The Tianxuan Realm and the Fallen Immortal Realm merged, the Fallen Immortal Realm merged with the Great Thousand Void, the Great Thousand Void merged with the Sea of Chaos and were renamed the Divine Realm, and the Hongmeng Dao Realm did not merge.

After reading so many enjoyable novels for so many years, this one is the most comforting to me. It doesn't have those cookie-cutter nesting dolls, nor does it have those old plots that can't be aged anymore. The characterization is perfect, the plot is very relaxed, the author's writing style is better than others, and he doesn't repeat a certain sentence all the time (for example, xxx naturally doesn't know). The ending is very satisfying. The only shortcoming may be that the pace of the second half of the book is too fast (although the author himself said that it will be speeded up). Generally speaking, although it is not as good as those literary works, it is already at a superior level in terms of online writing. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to better works! !

Brother, the author, come on and write. I personally think it's very good. Take your time and don't rush. I hope you can write well. I prefer reading this book. [Making faces] [Making faces] Come on, come on, come on, come on, hahaha.

I haven't seen such a good book on Tomato for a long time. The early reading was just a normal refreshing article. It was very enjoyable but not annoying. If I had to say it specifically, I don't know what is good. Maybe it is the author's writing style. It is very detailed and fresh. I have read thousands of interesting articles and it is not enough to pass the time. This is a refreshing article that makes me want to read it. I don't read it just to pass the time. The author is really great. Not only is it enjoyable to read, but it also makes you feel like you are taking a long breath after reading it. It is not like some in-depth works that are a little bit poisonous, which makes you not want to read in some places and makes you feel happy in others. This whole process is very enjoyable hahh. Really awesome! Come on, author!

It's so beautiful, but I discovered it too early and it was gone soon, and it became wild again.