Global Virtual Reality: I Can Devour the Protagonist's Halo

It's a very good book. Can the author let the protagonist go to the world of "Once upon a time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain"? I like the heroine in it. I like harem novels. Long live the harem novels. Come on, author!

To be honest, the little demon at the beginning of your book is a failure. If it weren't for his identity, his identity would not be exposed.

This book is so well written.

I was speechless. The identity of the male protagonist was leaked out very quickly, and it was also leaked by the woman. The key is that you can come up with a normal reason. When the family members of the woman asked who the male protagonist was, the woman told the family members. How could this not be leaked! After the leak came out, the woman ran into the male protagonist's arms and cried and said she was sorry to the male protagonist, it was really green tea, and at this time, the male protagonist still left her mouth without touching him, and her head was full of yellow garbage😠😠😠

From my point of view, the subject matter of this kind of book is good, but Xiao Yao is indeed a big failure. Not that you people like to write about female protagonists. It is very difficult to write a female protagonist. The blood is not good, which is a big failure. Good writing is the icing on the cake. If you are not an experienced author, don't touch the female protagonist. It is really difficult to write.

The writing in the early stage was quite good, but later on it started to write nonsense. The Four Swords of Killing Immortals on the Tianbang were outrageous. Can those things be touched by mortals? It can't be so outrageous to give it by force, right? With the current master's cultivation level, he is still practicing martial arts, and he doesn't know where he is as an immortal. He may only be in the first three realms. How dare you touch the innate treasure? No matter how strong Tianbang is, it can't be so outrageous, right? Already an immortal? No one below the Golden Immortal level dares to touch it, right? Let alone refine it, just open your mouth and come. If it is, who do you need to be afraid of? Moreover, your level of magic power cannot use a sword, and other people's magic weapons will not recognize you. Secondly, the pacing at the end is obviously too anxious, both in words and actions, so fast that it destroys the coherence of the plot. It makes people feel inexplicable when watching it. He just does this and that, and directly takes action. There is no other description. It feels like the author is confused, doesn't want to write, and doesn't want to write properly. It's a pity, the subject matter is good.

What the hell is written at the end? In the middle section of Wolf Warriors, the author himself admitted that it was a low-civilized world and could see ghosts. I just treated this as a little bit of a nuisance. Then I just let myself go. How could I be so happy and brainless?

At the end of Chapter 7, when the charterer hits the protagonist, she says, "Don't think you are handsome, so I won't hit you." The eighth picture says it again at the end Unfortunately, he forgot that what he was wearing now was the face of the clerk who worked in the drugstore. Even if this face was not miserable, it was definitely not associated with the word handsome.

It's okay, the routines are all the same, and the details are a bit lacking, and it's okay for a man to love a woman... Oh, I don't force you, after all, it is your product, so you can do whatever you want. But for someone like me who focuses on emotional foreshadowing, it would definitely be annoying. Let me give you a suggestion. You can open a harem at will, but there must be a certain emotional line. At least it will give people better senses (except of course some diaosi who are dominated by the lower body), so Liu Na is really a failure and can poison me to death (let's put it this way, even if the setting is a close childhood sweetheart without an emotional line shown in front of the reader, it will still make people feel uncomfortable)

I will always support you if you can make the main character and then you can also organize the harem a little bit more