Player Storm

It's okay. The transition at the beginning is a bit weird but not a big problem. The sister in the back is a little bit poisonous but not a big problem. The main character's character is very abrupt to me. There are some typos but very few. I hope the author will continue to work hard and strive to do better. [Understood] [Note] (My own feeling, but I hope readers will make their own comments after reading it)

It's okay 😊 Come on, author, I hope the author writes better and better