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I like the protagonist very much, because he is a truly sober person and a real protagonist. He is excellent in every aspect. I like it very much. The current chapters are excellent and have five-star reviews. Is there any plot that will slap my face in the future? I also hope that the protagonist will not join the Wuhun Temple. I always feel that the people in "Douluo Dalu" are a bit poisonous.

Although Douluo Fans are basically banned, this is one of the few high-quality books. He at least has good reasons to criticize Tang San. To be honest, let's complain here ㄟ(▔,▔)ㄏ Those who started to kill Tang San as soon as they came up, killing so and so, were not the reasons you gave me, it was because you thought Tang San's three views were not correct, so you killed him, but can you have correct three views? Alas, maybe I took the novel a little too seriously. Anyway, this book is pretty good (´∀｀*). I think he is very good. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง. I really don't want to think about losing a good book.

Pursuit of happiness conditions: One of the necessary conditions, the substitute who guides the situation wonder of you u The second essential element is a trustworthy friend. He must be able to sacrifice himself for others and trust the partners behind him. The third necessary element is two souls that give to each other. The souls of people who sacrifice themselves to save others have strong spiritual energy, which promotes the fusion of new souls to generate new power. The fourth necessary requirement is 14 code words, "Racecourse", "White Rat", "Peak", "Abyss of Fall", "One-horned Fairy", "Way of Suffering", "Past Sins", "One-horned Fairy", "Detour", "Lady Luck", "One-horned Fairy", "Curse", "Ginkgo Leaf" and "Flying Fish". In order to remind myself, I engraved these 14 code words on my DNA as a permanent reminder. The fifth necessary element is "courage." I must have the "courage" to give up my life and my past. When the two dying bodies undergo equivalent exchange, the two selfless souls merge again to give birth to a new starting object "a brand new soul." It's about a new self-awakening. The last element is the location, towards the eye strait fault of the southern coast of Morio Town. When the next time the rokakaka matures, "happiness" will be opened for me.

Yes, the whole plot is very smooth.

Wow, author, where did you die? Have you forgotten that you and your readers have a baby who is less than 1 year old? Obviously our relationship was so good before, but you ran away cowardly Wuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu...

It's pretty good. Compared to other Douluo fans, cheating is really not that serious, and I don't lick Shrek either. Is there any other fan fiction adapted from Shuangwen that the author would recommend?

The writing is really good. Even though it's a eunuch, I wanted to give it one star, but after thinking about it, I'll give it five stars. There are very few good Douluo fans, so this book is considered a good one in my mind. Personally, I think the problem with this book's performance is that the title and cover are not attractive enough. The title and cover are very important here on Tomato.

I already felt great after reading the first six chapters. The beginning was well written, and I didn't follow the crowd with Tang San or be around him. As an adult college student, my three views are also correct. The setting is also very good, but the classic language is not accessible Eye-catching, a plot that Tomato has never seen before It's a pity that the author stopped updating😭👊 After reading Chapter 12, I feel that the main character is too miserable. He has no background and no identity when he physically travels. He can only accept being scolded. In Chapter 21, I thought the plot would continue with the master, but I didn't expect to become a person again. It's great. The group fight in Chapter 29 was still very exciting. Chapter 39: Playing and exposing myself in front of Tang San [face covering] In Chapter 43, the protagonist finally couldn't help it anymore. The BYD protagonist group was too abstract, which was a bit satisfying. Unfortunately, the protagonist was too weak and there was no golden finger. This kind of plot is not bad. I've reached chapter 106. There are still a few chapters left and I'll stop updating. The style here has changed, and the author can't edit anymore. It's normal to stop updating, it's a pity😥

A very good Douluo fan, compared to those mindless people who recruit girls and join groups.

The writing is very good, better than the dozen or so fanfics I have read, and makes you feel comfortable reading it. Later, it started to become poisonous, and the wisdom-reducing halo was often turned on.

It's good-looking [learned], but just not good enough [grieved] I have a little question, why is this book only rated six points despite all the high-star reviews?

Okay, I quite like watching it

It's good to read, I like it. The protagonist has our current thoughts. I feel very good. I like this kind of character. I hope there will be no CP. After all, the protagonist does not belong anywhere. The protagonist knows that this is a book. He is a reader. He is just entering the story now. He wants to live. If he is tied, he will slowly be assimilated into this world. It's good to read. Finally found this kind of book

It's really nice to watch, I know it's a trap. But after thinking about it, most Douluo fans would get bored watching it, and it probably wouldn't matter if they were fooled, so I still watched it. The result was out of control, it was really beautiful, but it's a pity that there is no follow-up. I feel that this setting is really novel. The protagonist is a very normal person, who advances and retreats, and has a normal mind. The secondary designs of many characters in it are a bit cute. I really like Qian Renxue and Qian Daoliu, and the Shura God and Poseidon are both very cute. It's a pity that there is no follow-up. I originally wanted to see if there was any daily life between master and apprentice. The protagonist has a golden finger, but it is not a brainless novel. It may be mediocre at the beginning, but it gets better and better as you read later. I really want to know how this kind of ability can develop in the future.

I'm thinking about whether to give you a star rating. Douluo fans can hardly be found on Tomato now. Author, why do you think that is?

It looks much better than ordinary invincible articles.

Pretty good, not many flaws

It's beautiful, but the author couldn't bear to write it.

If I read it correctly, the protagonist should take the path of a humanoid soul beast, right? I hope Qian Renxue will become the heroine

Damn it, author, you update one by one every day, when will you update?

It's not invincible. It's very comfortable to watch if you have the brains. I personally think it's the T1 level in Douluo.

The rhythm feels good, the protagonist does not take off, and the character design is consistent with the reactions of normal people. The plot didn't drag on too much.

Don't say it's okay. Neither a saint nor an indiscriminate murderer. I didn't deliberately lick anyone.

It feels okay, at least it's not stupid.

Why don't you continue writing?

I didn't sleep all night and watched them all.

You can't be a eunuch anymore, can you?

For me, I like it more, come on

Not bad, not bad. It's just not enough. Give me a dozen first.

It's not stupid, it's pretty good-looking. Clear logical thinking [blowing kiss]