I Cloud*****

This book is relatively confusing at the beginning. But when I got to the back, it was easy for me to let people go. Immerse yourself in a book, especially. The darkening part of Yunshan shows the brilliance of human nature and the love people have for their families. Family affection.

One thing that needs to be noted is that the Yunlan Sect has always been inherited by the bloodline of the sect leader, so Yun Potian is Yunshan's ancestor. Also, in the official setting, the great elder Yun Ling is the son of Yunshan.

It's very beautiful. Come and take a look. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Very interesting, thank you to the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Try to update three times a day as soon as possible! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Some people say the pace is fast, and I think it suits me just right. I've finished writing it, and I thought there would be a follow-up, but I haven't seen enough yet.

The process is fast, the writing is average, and I personally think it looks good.

Overall, this novel is well written, but the pace is too fast, there is no foreshadowing or process, it is just the result [smiles] A lot of things are mentioned in one stroke, but overall it is not bad.

Author: When will Yunshan and Caiyi have a baby?

That's pretty good, good luck to the author

It's okay, but Xun'er's ending is a bit tragic

It's a little regretful

Battle through the sky speed pass

Overall it's pretty good, but it's a little too bloody at the end.

It's okay. Although it's a little messy at the beginning, it's normal at the end. It's a cool article. The author may have just started writing a book, so he can slowly improve it. Come on.

Rich imagination, plot twists and turns, fascinating!

Is there no Chapter 8?

Good, good, good

Oops, not bad