Please Retire Soon

It is a relatively good e-sports article, and the content of the competition is also relatively rigorous. You can play e-sports in the early stage, and gradually switch to life in the later stage. However, everything depends on how the author writes it. The only disadvantage is that the pace is relatively slow, and the update frequency is not high. It means that you have to wait for at least a long time to win the championship. It is easy for a large number of people to promote the book, and then the book will die. I hope the author pays attention to this. It looks good. Now I have changed my mind. Two chapters a day will be enough. The daily e-sports content is interspersed very well. It is just that the lack of team awareness may be a poisonous point in the eyes of some people. I think it should be a small foreshadowing. Overall, it has surpassed most of the e-sports articles I have read. Keep up the good work. The author [punches hard]

The author's pacing is very good. I am a senior reader of e-sports games. This is the only one that Tomato writes about e-sports. The details are in place, and the version and content are worthy of scrutiny. The last time I saw a road map at the end of the chapter, it was still a hexagonal jungler. Come on, author, I think it can be compared with Kebao at a certain point. I will add your book to follow three league articles now. Come on, write more, and don't be an eunuch.

It can only be said that this is the most touching league article I have read recently. The plot is gradually advanced and interesting. Unlike some games that try to defeat the entire league, and the game operation turns other professional players into bronze and silver. Come on! Update quickly! ! !

Detailed and long-lasting, a good book with good conscience. There aren't many off-field events depicted, just enough so that it doesn't give people a bloody feeling. The control of the depiction on the field is very natural.

Apart from full-time work, this is the only serious e-sports article I've seen. It has a lot of values, and the main line of career is interspersed with a small side line of love life and daily life. The only work I have seen on Tomato that is of relatively high quality and that suits my taste. I just didn't notice it was a serial before reading it. I prefer to finish the story, because good stories are so difficult to wait for and it's so painful. Recommended star rating: 💓💓💓💓💓

The most interesting LoL system text I have ever read. (Actually, I haven't read a few lol books in total) [laughing] The proportion of daily life and competition is equal to 28%, and the writing of the competition is exciting and reasonable. However, in terms of system writing, the performance of the protagonist is slightly insufficient. After all, you only focus on playing games in the rebirth + system. Your future achievements will make you worth tens of millions and become famous in the lol circle. This is somewhat regretful. (The old father sighs) If a little more words could be spent on developing the protagonist and highlighting a rich and handsome man who plays games just for fun, I would personally feel that the story would be more enjoyable. I have been following it to the end. After the above evaluation, I would like to add another sentence: wonderful and pure. [Learned]

It's very good. The team and the battles are written very delicately. The only thing that makes me feel inadequate is that the heroine appears too early. It is completely unnecessary to be 17-18 years old. After two years of fighting in the e-sports field, it is great to have a double harvest of championship and love, so it is four stars. Tomato says League of Legends is the best

I have read a lot of lol novels on the top of the rankings, and this one is the most realistic, with the most professional writing content, and the accompanying pictures, making it understandable to even a basic lol audience. The charade that is enabled is not the invincibility charade. In fact, this charade is the digital protagonist's growth, which is not as suspenseful as the charade. Nice

Good book. Although I don't play League of Legends, I can understand the train of thought. I know most of the heroes because I've seen them through videos. Those who don't understand are similar to those who read the comments section. It's interesting to understand a little bit. One thing I have to say is that I have read a particularly good game novel. I can't see that I watched it for a few hours, so I'll check it out after reviewing it [face covering] Let's take a look at the comments again [laughing crookedly]

It's so good. Even people who don't play League watch it with gusto. I hope the author can turn into a ruthless coding machine. You can do it [laughs] It ended before I knew it, see you in the new book

This author is an absolute king. He can clearly show you how to catch people in each game with pictures, including various insidious eye positions. The protagonist is also very suitable to my taste. He has a correct outlook on life, not pretentious or sentimental, and his writing style is also very good. He deserves a five-star rating! As someone who rarely gives reviews when reading books, it deserves a five-star rating! Come on!

This rhythm is very comfortable, Like mountains and flowing water, it rises and falls like a painting. Very true. It's like a dimensional dream. Come on! At that time, my brother and I were arguing about who should play first. Nowadays I can only read competitions and novels. There are not many novels with such a sense of aftertaste.

To be honest, among the articles describing LOL, this is the closest to a masterpiece I have ever read. The author's ideas are very clear and the emotions are captured well, but there are too few updates. Great author, come on😊!

This book is the most detailed and immersive of all the e-sports novels I have read. Although the writing is good, there are still many details in it. There are very few errors in this book. The author is either a real professional power leveler or his writing is very careful and serious, and he can I have learned enough about the past and secrets of so many professional players. When I watched it, I really felt like I was back in S6. The barrages, live broadcasts, and competitions at that time were just like what the author wrote. It was so restored. I would like to thank the author again for writing this novel. I will keep following it. Come on.

I don't want to brag about it, but the writing style, rigor, and ideas are all top-notch T0 level at the moment. If I can keep it up, I will be the God-killer in e-sports writing (e-sports writing is a niche after all)

I have also played King of Kings before. Now that I have seen it, I really feel that the author has written very well. The various details are very real and visual. It makes me feel like I have watched a real game. The old version written also touched me, an old player. The description of life and online public opinion is also quite interesting. It is really beautiful. Please reward me.

Come on, I hope I won't have eunuchs. Even if I do, I'll at least make it to the middle and late stages. I'm quite comfortable reading it at the moment. It's a relatively unconventional e-sports article with a unique portrayal of characters. This kind of heroine makes people like it very much. But maybe for some reason, some details are summarized in a general way, which makes it a bit confusing. In general, there are advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the plot presentation and character setting are pretty good. They have their own characteristics among countless e-sports articles. The disadvantages are also quite obvious. In order to promote the development of the plot, some details were skipped, which resulted in a rush. The story was a bit difficult and a little jumpy.

The writing is very good, the details are appropriate, and the description of the game is very fascinating. It's just that the title is very thought-provoking when compared with the current time period. [Look at it carefully] Right, s6 and s7 [laughing]

I really love it. Not to mention the wonderful content, the author will not be lazy and will make explosive updates in key games. After watching the championship, I feel like I have returned to the night iG won the championship. I was really excited. Although it has been so many years, the enthusiasm is still the same. I look forward and hope that an all-China class can win the world championship.

Five-star praise, the best alliance article I have ever read

It's a very good book. I've read more than 70% of it now. I didn't expect it to be a book that gets better the more I read it. The content written by the author is relatively rigorous and interesting. It's suitable for daily reading. I didn't touch the computer all afternoon while reading this book [laughs] I hope the author will write it faster. I don't want to keep a book. The writing is very nice, keep following it

The writing is super good, and the author writes it very carefully. There is no inconsistency in the data, and there is nothing wrong with the emotional line. Anyway, from my personal point of view, it is fine. It is one of the best League of Legends fanfics I have ever seen. No kavin! Short is enough, no more clumsiness! Otherwise, we will pay for the five-star installment.

How can I put it this way? I have read so many LoL books, and among so many systematic and non-systematic articles, this book ranks at least in the top three in terms of overall rating. The author has solid professional knowledge, and his writing is also quite excellent. Even those who don't understand League of Legends can understand it. Moreover, there are quite a lot of jokes about this book. I spent more time reading the comments than reading the text. Believe me, adding it to the bookshelf won't hurt.

Personally, this book is the most exciting e-sports article I have read on Tomato. The competition and life are well integrated, and it is also very appropriate to start from S6. Winning the championship now will make this game unprecedentedly popular in China, capital will flow in, and there will be a better professional environment. But after reading it all at once, I still felt a little uncomfortable and was ready to watch it again. The quality and quantity are maintained. It would be great if I could see two updates every day. Come on, author! I will always generate electricity for love, haha.

I can only say that the author is really strong, the writing is good, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not all nonsense. Although it is a systematic novel, it is not as big as ordinary systematic novels, and the description of Kledinabo is really handsome.

The writing is very good and the author is very professional. He is worthy of being the king of Season 9. This is one of the best novels about League of Legends that I have read so far. But it is not enough. I hope the author can write more while ensuring the quality.

It's okay, it's worthy of being a novel written by a king, and the details are enough to open the eyes of someone like me. It's just that the interaction with the heroine is a bit awkward, but it doesn't matter, I will skip it [laughing evilly] Anyway, I can give it a nine or more out of ten. I give it a five and I hope you won't stop updating. Isn't it →_→ You've written the main plot slowly enough, and now you're adding the branch plot of the female apprentice? The way you write about daily life and the way you write about competitions are completely two extremes. One is in heaven and the other is on earth. The way you write about daily life is the one on earth! ! ! Since you want to start, I can't stop you. I'll give you two points to calm down. [Awkward laugh] If you find this girl on the roadside after the protagonist reaches the top at the end, and the protagonist takes her as his apprentice on a whim, I won't say a word, and I will even look forward to your next book. Now you suddenly insert such a character, and you immediately find out that he is a genius? Do you want her to be the world champion? Then you might as well write about the reborn Rhubarb taking TES to win the championship [awkward laugh]

Very exciting! Excellent overall rhythm control. You won't feel visual fatigue due to playing games all the time. I won't say that like other novels, every small situation must be written clearly. This book has skipped and detailed descriptions. It feels great. One of the most exciting settings is that you can directly enter the lpl and play professionally without wasting much time in the early stage. I just love this. The teammates don't stretch their legs, and the protagonist is not the one who comes out to save the whole game every time. Every position can be promoted. It's very comfortable to watch. It would be OK to change the mid laner when the time comes. You can bring the poison coin over [Thinking] The mid laner should be able to change, and there won't be much of a role. Come and have more fun. Four packs of two are also better. As for the emotional scene, I didn't understand it a bit [face covering] Maybe the author doesn't like this type of description too much. I looked a little confused. The writing is a bit far-fetched. Looking forward to future developments. Come on!

The beginning and middle are really well written. Although the writing style is simple, it is more concise. It looks a bit like a full-time job, but the group portrait description is still not as good as a full-time job, but the cool writing takes care of it! The ending was a bit rushed. In fact, the entire second half was spent on rushing ahead. It also seemed like I wanted to focus on describing the key matches. Maybe it was because I wrote too much about the good-looking matches in the first place, but the later matches always felt a little less flavorful. Well, the S6 Juggernaut is probably the most enjoyable in the book, and it has slowly started to decline since then.

It's very good. I can keep watching it. I just don't like some parts for personal reasons. Forget about the female protagonist. Bai Xuan is inexplicable enough. Later when I go out, I meet a female genius. I haven't played the game yet. I directly recommend the youth training. Goodbye my friend.