Entering the Escape Story, I Cut Off the Heroine's Space

I have also thought about how the heroine lives a free life, with a space, martial arts, and the ability to cultivate immortality. It's great, but it can only be a dream. Reality doesn't allow it. It's too difficult for me.

It looks great. The heroine is also very powerful even if she is not the Virgin. The author has worked hard to update it [Adoration][Adoration]

On the whole, it's pretty good. There are very few alternative stories about escaping from the wilderness and cultivating immortals. It's just that some of the sentences are difficult to read and it's hard to read. The heroine fits the character of a cultivator. She treats things as she pleases, and is both good and evil.

I like this subject very much. Who said you must raise step-sons and step-daughters? Moreover, the female protagonist has great views. This is a non-CP novel. The female protagonist has a very good attitude towards men and does not involve other feelings. However, the reason why the male protagonist likes the female protagonist is very strange. He suddenly likes the female protagonist and talks about liking without experience. It can be said that this kind of love is admiration and appreciation. It is acceptable to stop the loss and not disturb the female protagonist. The bad points are that there are too many typos, the relationship is too confusing (I skipped all of them), the language is not refined enough, some can be abbreviated, and the character design can be improved. She is aloof and smart after cultivating immortality, and has the idea of finding a new way. I'm looking forward to the conclusion of Ascension or the transfer to the Immortal Field in the following chapters.

The heroine is Huainan in the human world who is sober and has a good brain

If nothing else, the heroine is definitely not a virgin, and her character of doing whatever she doesn't want is very likable. The disadvantage is that there are too many typos and sometimes names are typed incorrectly, which somewhat affects the impression.

[Laughing evilly] Although there are many typos and some of them are illogical, but! ! ! The heroine has neither a love brain nor a holy heart. I must support [thinking] that the key is not to feel aggrieved and not to be angry with others, which is great!

The heroine is very good, the plot is very attractive, but the author's writing style is hard to describe, but there will be improvement in the future.

The writing style is delicate, the pear is cut together, the bottom of the pen is fireworks, the pen is full of ink, neither vines nor branches, and the conception is clever. The writing style is smooth, the plot is soothing, and the logic is strict. It is so exciting and beautiful! [Like][Like][Like][Love][Love][Love]🌹🌹🌹

The story is quite good, relaxing and comfortable, but the audience needs to have strong writing skills, because you always have to decipher the garbled codes released by the author's bacteria, [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I think it's pretty good-looking. There's no stereotyped hard work. The heroine is chic and lazy, but she works hard when she should work hard, and enjoys when she should enjoy it. I envy this kind of attitude towards life [laugh][laugh]

Good-looking, the heroine is not a holy mother, her early cultivation is low, her emotions are very rational

I love this book, it's so exciting, thank you so much for the author!

It's a very nice article about cultivating immortals. It would be better if the writing style could be more clear. After reading the whole article, I made a lot of thoughts [laughs] I wish the author a better writing style.

I don't know if others like the heroine's character, but I do…

It's been three years. The author has grown up. Come back and reorganize your book, correct typos, fill in the missing words and publish it again.

It's not bad, but there is one drawback. Sweet potatoes are grown in cubes, not slices. The article is very good, but the author, can you type more clearly when typing? I think there are a lot of typos in the article, and sometimes people's names are wrong.

It's quite good-looking. The heroine goes her own way, but within the bottom line. She sees clearly that she is not a white lotus flower, and she doesn't accept moral outsourcing. I like it.

Ade must have reached the point where the aunt is satisfied.

It's okay, but the typos and wrong names are too graphic to read.

I like novels like this that don't have too much nonsense. The novel is not a long essay [like] [like]

The heroine's temperament is really clear about love and hate, and she is not indecisive at all. There are too many people kidnapped morally in the story, and the heroine's ability to cut through the mess quickly is quite impressive.

It's very beautiful, but there are few. I suggest you keep it in your collection and keep watching ￣ ￣)σ. Really too little.

I like this kind of female man/not a virgin/uncompromising/live out himself/

It's a great book, why is the rating so low?

I thought it was Tian's article, but when I read it later, it turned out to be an article about cultivating immortals. Or the article became more and more to my liking the more I read it, [Like] [Thinking]

Very novel, very special, very thoughtful [face covering]

Not bad, very good-looking. Women should strengthen themselves.

It's quite interesting and the plot doesn't drag out.

It's pretty good, the heroine is amazing