[Won the second prize in the Tomato Essay Contest, ordinary people are flown, unsystematic, not brainless, and not invincible]
The protagonist aspires to become an immortal, but unfortunately, the master who takes him on as a disciple is a demonic cultivator who wants to kill him.
The protagonist has to kill his master, but he doesn't know that the new master he worships is a soul cultivator who treats him as cannon fodder.
None of the subsequent masters were really good to him. There were ghost cultivators, corpse cultivators, evil cultivators, and righteous monks. They all wanted the protagonist's life without exception, and they all died at the hands of the protagonist.
He stepped on the bones of countless predecessors, experienced countless dangers and hardships, destroyed groups and sects wherever he went, and was like a disaster star in the three realms.
Reader comments
Looks great, looking forward to new works.
It's clean and neat without being pretentious, and it can be a good meal when you're short of books.
I saved up for a few days and finished reading it in one go.
Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode
Beautiful and well written. I have always wanted to read it. Very good👍👍👍👍👍
Yes, the article has great literary talent, beautiful rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid description, fascinating and strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking and long-lasting.
The article has a clear theme and rich writing. Deeply touching and resonating
It's very delicate, not trivial, the characters are distinct, and not stereotyped.
Time is like this. It is difficult to write about it if you have not experienced it. Sometimes envy is also a luxury.
I'm still reading it, although I don't understand some of it. After all, it's a novel about cultivating immortals. I hope that the author can explain it a little more clearly.
The protagonist is decisive and decisive in killing, and the author's writing style is delicate and not naive. This book is just right for reading.
I had nothing to do. I watched it for several hours at a stretch. It was very enjoyable.
Beautiful (○｀ε´○), exciting
This book is easy to understand.
After reading one, you will know that the author's writing is smooth
This book is good, the characters have clear relationships, and the logic is good. It is a good novel. However, there are some minor problems in the later chapters, which are harmless.
This book is good, the characters have clear relationships, and the logic is good. It is a good novel, but there are some minor flaws. In the chapter of the killing spree at the end, there is a confusion of family names. I hope the author can correct it. Although these minor problems are harmless, they are awkward to read. In short, this is a good novel. I recommend it to those who are not in a book shortage. It is also good to put it on the bookshelf if you are not in a book shortage.
Not bad, first-class writing
Not bad, worth a look.
The writing is good, why is the score so low?
Step by step, with a beginning and an end, it is very different from what some people write now.
It's a good thing to have different opinions
This book is very well written. The author is rich in thought and imagination.
The ending was beyond my expectations and is part of an increasingly fascinating plot. So beautiful! 👍
The writing of "Bad Immortal" is indeed eye-catching. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Still worth seeing
Not bad, you can take a look
Good books are rare to find.
The writing is more serious and there are few typos. Lack of ancient Chinese, more modern elements
The writing was a bit messy in the early stages, but it gradually got better and more engaging!
Looks great, looking forward to new works.
It's clean and neat without being pretentious, and it can be a good meal when you're short of books. I saved up for a few days and finished reading it in one go.
Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode Beautiful and well written. I have always wanted to read it. Very good👍👍👍👍👍
Yes, the article has great literary talent, beautiful rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid description, fascinating and strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking and long-lasting. The article has a clear theme and rich writing. Deeply touching and resonating
It's very delicate, not trivial, the characters are distinct, and not stereotyped.
Time is like this. It is difficult to write about it if you have not experienced it. Sometimes envy is also a luxury.
I'm still reading it, although I don't understand some of it. After all, it's a novel about cultivating immortals. I hope that the author can explain it a little more clearly.
The protagonist is decisive and decisive in killing, and the author's writing style is delicate and not naive. This book is just right for reading. I had nothing to do. I watched it for several hours at a stretch. It was very enjoyable.
Beautiful (○｀ε´○), exciting
This book is easy to understand.
After reading one, you will know that the author's writing is smooth
This book is good, the characters have clear relationships, and the logic is good. It is a good novel. However, there are some minor problems in the later chapters, which are harmless. This book is good, the characters have clear relationships, and the logic is good. It is a good novel, but there are some minor flaws. In the chapter of the killing spree at the end, there is a confusion of family names. I hope the author can correct it. Although these minor problems are harmless, they are awkward to read. In short, this is a good novel. I recommend it to those who are not in a book shortage. It is also good to put it on the bookshelf if you are not in a book shortage.
Not bad, first-class writing
Not bad, worth a look.
The writing is good, why is the score so low?
Step by step, with a beginning and an end, it is very different from what some people write now. It's a good thing to have different opinions
This book is very well written. The author is rich in thought and imagination.
The ending was beyond my expectations and is part of an increasingly fascinating plot. So beautiful! 👍
The writing of "Bad Immortal" is indeed eye-catching. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Still worth seeing
Not bad, you can take a look
Good books are rare to find.
The writing is more serious and there are few typos. Lack of ancient Chinese, more modern elements
The writing was a bit messy in the early stages, but it gradually got better and more engaging!
This book is very good, top notch.