Reincarnation: I Carry Out the Industrial Revolution in the Magical World

Now that she has become a girl, it is better to be cute. Personally, I prefer the plot where the protagonist is a girl ᗜ ˰ ᗜ, but the writing is great, come on

I saw someone talking about the problem with the author's writing style, but I want to say that most tomatoes are like this... And the plot, I still like this kind of daily story, occasionally interspersed with some main lines so that people don't know what they are doing. Then, I think the heroine's reaction to seeing blood is too small and should be more serious. If it is because of the influence of her original identity, it is best to add some hints or something... Finally, I like it, but I can't read it enough. I want to stock it up. I advise the author not to be ungrateful and update it quickly!

So far, it's pretty good. It's just that there are 100 million, 4 stars, and I'm waiting to see how the author will fill in the gaps later [eating melon] Such a great alternate world story and an author who speaks so nicely must be a five-star writer (

In fact, the writing is quite good, but the author's writing style is a bit weak. I personally think the plot of the story is very good, and I like the tone of it. I don't care if I am married, Lily, or single. However, the author had better confirm the character setting. It is a bit broken in some places, but overall it is still good. Then there is the development of the story. The writing It is best for the author to strengthen this aspect. The main character cannot always be meddling in his own business to develop. In this way, some people (those who are aggressive or looking for trouble) may have opinions and abandon the book. Finally, I hope the author will not finish the book. I like this type very much. This type is also quite rare in Tomato. I hope the author can work hard and continue writing like this. Don't live up to my long review.

Kids, I had to start reading again because the author's update interval was too long. If you, the author, have seen it, remember it for me. Next time I play Disappearance, I will definitely not be as good as you.

There are so few people reading it. I feel like no one reads the normal articles now, but strangely, there are a lot of people following the cool articles😓

Six months have passed. When will the God of War return? Great, alive again

I feel like it started well, um, I'll comment after 30 minutes, um, why is the protagonist always called him? Shouldn't it be her? Is the author not careful about the details, or is it? I haven't changed into a woman yet. I haven't read the rest of it. I'll come back after watching it. Not bad, not bad (´∀｀*) I feel that the author's writing style has been slightly improved, but not much [please taste carefully]

The plot is really okay, but the pace is quite slow. I hope that the unique beauty and no cp can be implemented. Personally, I feel that the relationship with the opposite sex is indeed a bit close, especially the prince. Also, I take the liberty to ask if there is no extra marriage (personally, I feel that the relationship with the prince is too close). If you have any, please reply so that you can avoid lightning in time. If not, I will keep chasing you. Come on, author [Chigua][Chigua]

It feels like there are so few people That's why he always appears as a man. You might as well just write it as a man.

It's very interesting. It would be nice if the author updated it quickly. Also, you must be a little close to that prince, right? Congratulations to the author for winning the resurrection competition. I almost thought this book was bad. Author, please give me a boost and update it. (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's pretty cool, but why is there no one there?

The book is good, I give it five stars, cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The quality is mediocre, but it appeals to my heart. The writing is poor, short and weak, and too concise, but considering the author is a newcomer, it is excellent.

In fact, you can just put a Lily tag on it. Most of the current Lily novels have a little bit of Lily in them, and their popularity is pretty good. If you add a little Lily plot in them, it will be fine. But I don't recommend doing this. It's better to do it without CP.

It's so good-looking, it has to start at 9.0, Right?

It's very good. The daily stories are light and humorous, the characters are well drawn, and the plot has ups and downs, but it's a bit watery. It's really a good otherworld novel. I hope the author can stick to it and let us see the ending.

Why don't the author write a side story about getting married [laughs]

Very good I hope the author can keep writing Five stars [eating melon]

Good books are not popular (wrong Those who are able will be rewarded first (yes

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that like other similar books, the protagonist has some strange attributes added to it.

To be honest, I read this book a long time ago. After reading it, I didn't wait for many days for the author to update it, and then I threw it on the bookshelf to gather dust. In fact, this book is not bad, but the author is too slow. I hope the author will not abandon the book. To be honest, this novel is the one I have kept for the longest time.

This urge for updates is very, very small, so I have to join in. This urge for more updates is a beautiful thing.

Congratulations to the author for winning the resurrection competition (I'm sorry I only found out now) I lost my phone number after I changed it, so I'll write another book review [Chigua] The book is really beautiful and all the settings are good (✪▽✪)

I'm very curious why the score is so low. In short, after reading it, I feel that the author's handling of the characters is beyond reproach, the background setting and plot lines are also handled appropriately, there are almost no logical loopholes, and it really feels like a light novel. In a word, there's nothing wrong with it, and it's quite to my liking.

If you are alive, you can give points.

Just came to check it out for a few hours (

Come on, come on, hahahahahahaha, it's so hard for Tomato to find books [crying]

Come on, it's not bad. The author's writing quality can be improved.

It's rare that a certain wooden prince has enlightened [face covering]