A stranded white whale, on a lonely moonlit night, a white boy, like an invisible breeze, walked towards the white whale through light and darkness...
Reader comments
The story is generally good, and the writing is pretty good, but the dialogue seems unnatural, with too many repetitions of "said" and "said", and the dialogue is too long, and the title of the article is not very good, making it difficult to attract readers. I'm still looking forward to the author's next update.
The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it (if you really can't delete the comment)
The story is generally good, and the writing is pretty good, but the dialogue seems unnatural, with too many repetitions of "said" and "said", and the dialogue is too long, and the title of the article is not very good, making it difficult to attract readers. I'm still looking forward to the author's next update. The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it (if you really can't delete the comment)