Western Crossover: An Unconventional Romance

The semi-protagonist Riddle is really well portrayed, but I didn't expect the rating to be so low. But I'm so angry! ! ! Why are the heroine and that cute, strong, brave, just, good-looking and talented boy with blond hair (forgot his name for short) the one who is fighting? ! ! ! Seeing Riddle makes me very angry, and I really want the heroine to regain her memory quickly. It must feel terrible to be kept in the dark! ! ! ! Seeing that the profile looks a bit yandere, is that quite reasonable? The horror of a yandere never lies in shouting "Let's see who is killed with hands and feet", but in you unknowingly destroying all you rely on, leaving only yourself, and then standing in front of the collapsed lover to protect you from the wind and rain. "You only have me left."

This is the most beautiful Riddle CP novel I have ever read. It is so real that I can only say [facepalm]. Tom's possessiveness is very tempting, and the heroine is also very powerful. Even if she doesn't surrender, she still resists. It's so bad. I hope it can be longer. I can't bear to finish it.

After reading Chapter 140, I couldn't help but comment. It's so good that I read it in one sitting. The writing style is really rich, and the heroine and the whole story are written vividly, but it doesn't feel too sudden. Moreover, the heroine has a natural and independent personality. Even if Tom changes some memories in order to retain the heroine in some processes, the subconscious will never change. The heroine will always be like a bird, yearning for the sky and freedom. Maybe the heroine sometimes thinks about the true meaning of life, but she also leaves a passionate kiss for love. Always pursue your goals firmly. She is Lilith in the Garden of Erie, not Eve in the Garden of Erie. Really, it is a heroine-type work. My wife also wrote a lot of ink for Tom. She also loves the heroine, but she will not give up her career. This article really touched my senses! I always love works with female protagonists.

The writing is very delicate, and the characters of both Riddle and the heroine are very in-depth. It is rare to see a heroine with two sides. She can be brave but also cowardly, and she is also very simple and silly. From the beginning, I did not skip a chapter, but later on, the heroine began to trust Riddle, and her friends began to be afraid of hiding it because of Riddle. Hesitating, the heroine doesn't dare to know the truth, it's really frustrating. Everything Riddle did to the heroine is really worthy of the crematorium. I always wanted to watch Riddle torture, but I kept jumping to see two people getting married. The heroine's memory was tampered with and she looked like a precious doll. I feel that the heroine has no real friends. They all have two sides and it is difficult to see a pure friendship like the original novel. , It's not easy to stay away from the heroine or die for various reasons, and the foreshadowing that the heroine is Dumbledore's sister was buried early. Before reading Chapter 140, there were two Dumbledores. They had a slight affection for the heroine, but I didn't feel the attention. It was well written, but I was really a bit frustrated. I will continue reading because I want to see Riddle's crematorium. To be honest, I don't feel that Riddle has a deep love for the heroine. It's just because of his paranoid personality that it's very extreme. I feel that the halo of the male protagonist should be greater than that of the heroine. I rarely see this style, but I really feel aggrieved for the heroine and her friends. Ahhhh, I hope I can see the Riddle Crematorium quickly. I really saw the obsession of 140. I skipped the Silent Hill part and went straight to the duel part. How can I put it, emm, the heroine should have grown up in Silent Hill. You can see the difference in the heroine in the later parts. Maybe because of the skipping, I felt that the heroine was very separated, but I still keep the same thoughts as before for Riddle. The halo is really great. I feel that based on the previous development, the description of Riddle in the duel section, and the shaping of Riddle in Hogwarts, I feel that Riddle will be more mature than in the original text, with a higher control over the wizarding world. It is more suitable to enter the dark era of domination, and then delve deeper into the plot. I feel that the latter part is actually a bit sloppy. After giving Riddle a very deep portrayal, the plot shows that Riddle is actually not that controllable, which feels a little unreasonable. However, it may also be that I want to write about the changes of the heroine after she grows up and her gradual rationality, as well as Riddle's deep love for the heroine. I feel that the first half of HP is really well written, and it can be regarded as a slow time. The shaping after skipping the Silent Hill part in the later stage is not very in-depth. Maybe it's because I want to move on to the next story quickly, and more of the description is about the heroine's psychological growth than the love between the hero and heroine. The later period really feels like a growth story of the heroine, and there will be more love content in the middle period. However, because the heroine herself doesn't love the hero that much, the love that comes from Riddle's tampering with memory makes me feel aggrieved, so I skipped reading. But it's really innovative, and some parts will point out deeper meanings. Those who like to read it will probably like it, but in the early stage, I felt that the writing was really amazing, and it is super beautiful.

Super good-looking, not OOC at all. Although Tom Riddle is perverted, he is really real. The heroine is not that kind of weak dodder flower. She is sober, rational, and very courageous. She is a true Gryffindor

The writing is good, and the author writes it with care. It was really good to watch when he was a child in the early stages. It's not that it's not good to watch later on in the main plot, but he doesn't want to accept such a plot. In the original work, Tom Riddle himself was a tragic villain, and that's still the case here. It's not a redemption story. You treat him as a family member, and he treats you as your lover. Then if you run away from him, you can't fly. The male protagonist wants to be loved wholeheartedly. He wants the female protagonist to think of himself in her heart and is extremely insecure (she is still a villain when she grows up, and the remaining tenderness is given to the female protagonist). It's hard for the female protagonist to say love. When she was a child, she took the initiative to get close to the male protagonist and gave him hope. Call it love or not, she did fall in love with a blond boy, which caused the male protagonist to become even more paranoid and modify the memory of the female protagonist. After the heroine regained her memory, she couldn't bear it and lurked next to Tom Riddle and wanted to kill him. Moreover, the combination of the Snake Yard and the Lion Yard was indeed difficult to live a stable life. After the heroine was assigned to the Lion Yard, it was destined that the main plot would not be too good. The two people's ideas and behaviors were not the same. Of course, stories vary from person to person. Personally, I prefer Tom to be happy in the fan fiction. Mrs. Riddle is quite interesting in the extra chapter. I have to thank the author for giving Tom a happy ending.

It's great to watch, I really like it, and I'm curious about the future development. To be honest, I think the relationship between the heroine and Tom should not end in he. After all, Tom has really done a lot of things that are excessive. The relationship be or he is not very important to me, but I hope that the heroine will have a happy ending.

The writing is very good. I really want Yurika to be with the beautiful Riddle (not forced). Finally, I hope the author will update it more and not give up [please update]

Five-star praise, don't be fooled like the last book. I hope you don't change your mind just because Heizi is jumping around. After all, the opinions should be based on those of book fans, not those of Heizi.

Each of your books is super beautiful, I support you! (O^^o)