The end of the world is coming, and highly civilized human beings have abandoned all dignity in one day. Panic, struggle, helplessness, the collapse of social order, and the distortion of human nature have made humanity, the former master of the earth, become the lowest. Zombies, mutated beasts, and zombie beasts are running rampant. There are even more powerful alien civilizations peeping in the secret, whether humans can survive this catastrophe!
The protagonist Jiao Luo, by chance, merges with the origin of a mysterious alien creature to gain powerful devouring ability. Where will he go in the face of this broken world?
Reader comments
Let me put it this way, novices in post-apocalyptic novels should avoid writing about pro-human beings, as they can't control themselves. If the protagonist wants to find his sister, he can just write a few sentences. There is no need to write a few paragraphs every now and then if he can't find something, it's redundant. The family relationship between the protagonist and his sister is not highlighted, and the emotion of her and the protagonist's dependence on each other since childhood is not felt. In addition, the mentality of always wanting to find her and indispensable to her makes it very speechless to watch. The writing style is jerky, and the punctuation seems to be lacking a lot. It needs more practice. In addition, in the first few chapters, I did not feel the tension of the coming apocalypse. There are too many descriptions of psychological activities (too many about my sister). I hope the author can work harder.
Let me put it this way, novices in post-apocalyptic novels should avoid writing about pro-human beings, as they can't control themselves. If the protagonist wants to find his sister, he can just write a few sentences. There is no need to write a few paragraphs every now and then if he can't find something, it's redundant. The family relationship between the protagonist and his sister is not highlighted, and the emotion of her and the protagonist's dependence on each other since childhood is not felt. In addition, the mentality of always wanting to find her and indispensable to her makes it very speechless to watch. The writing style is jerky, and the punctuation seems to be lacking a lot. It needs more practice. In addition, in the first few chapters, I did not feel the tension of the coming apocalypse. There are too many descriptions of psychological activities (too many about my sister). I hope the author can work harder.
Well written, but a bit short