I've Been an Oiran for a Long Time, What's Wrong with Being a Qigong Practitioner?

Very nice! The book is a good book, but I feel that the main plot is a bit too tight, giving people a stormy and breathless feeling. Each small volume can be connected with some gentle plot transitions, but it does not rule out that the author did it intentionally and wanted to bring us such a world.

The rating of 9.0 Is indeed buried. The weird and wonderful story is well written and the plot is compact and fast-paced. It is a rare good resource. Now there is a follow-up that will unfold the true appearance of the world and the mystery of the protagonist's life experience. If you like ts, you can check it out if you are weird.

It looks like a transformation story, but it's actually a weird story, which is pretty good.

It's very interesting, and it fits my style of liking ghosts. What can I say after watching it all the way? The first 40 chapters where the protagonist fights ghosts gave me a sense of a fragile woman in troubled times. It gave me a sense of insignificance and despair, and the oppressive atmosphere brought by a small place. Anyway, I felt a little bit the same way. The feeling in the latter part is a bit weak, but it is very beautiful [heartfelt]

The writing is very good, and it can be said to be among the best in Tomato. Especially the theme of transformation and this weird theme, I like it even more. I hope the author will work hard, this book is really promising. I think the atmosphere inside is very good.

Wonderful! But it doesn't fit in with the transformation story, but I happen to like this style too. One plus one is greater than two.

This book is really interesting as a fairy tale type, but I feel that the ghost setting is too frequent. Basically, after one ghost is solved, it is followed by the next ghost, and there is basically no excess in between. I suggest that some daily or other casual chapters can be interspersed between the two weird ones. Another point is that this article is also a transformation article, but I always feel that the transformation component is too weak. I always feel like I am wearing a layer of transformation skin when I always dress up as a man. This is my opinion. I hope it can provide some help for your writing. If possible, I would still like to have more transformation elements. It's a bit boring to keep dressing up as a man.

I have read the latest chapter. The protagonist of this book is defeated in the early stage, grows up in the middle stage, and is invincible in the later stage. It is still very interesting. The protagonist has no emotional line, only someone else's unrequited love for her. The plot is filled with a series of weird stories. She spends a lot of time traveling abroad, both as an official and as a ranger. The plot is remarkable and the content is not procrastinating. It is worth watching. Those who don't like it will leave if they can't stand it in the early stage, but those who can keep watching it will be very interesting in the middle stage of the heroine. [Working on draft] The score can be 8.8 And above, probably around 9.2. The author is awesome.

The paper is filled with bitter tears and absurd words. People and ghosts dance together, and the weird and bizarre things are always inseparable from the ugliness of people, the collapse of the world, and ghosts running rampant. Ghosts are especially terrifying, not as poisonous as the human heart. This book is excellent and deserves five stars. The book is a good book, but there are so many typos that it looks like the author is possessed by Shinto.

It's good to watch, but I stayed up late watching it and fell asleep while watching it. Suddenly I saw a yellow scale-like object that scared me. I was still sleepy at first, but I suddenly became energetic and finished watching it. [Understood] I hope the author can use the time in the world of the world, because the time of publishing the article is too time in the world of the underworld.

It's very interesting, the writing is very good, and the storyline is also good (a combination of thriller and folk tale) but I haven't seen the tentacles yet (maybe I haven't seen enough yet, whisper bb) Come on, author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a very touching book. It reminds me of the feeling I had when I first started to read online books. I haven't felt this way for many years. But there are a lot of typos. There are more and more typos, and the author does not correct them. It seems that he was confused by Su Shinto.

At the beginning, the author's writing was okay, but after leaving the county, the writing went up to a higher level, or the inner description of the protagonist was reduced and became less obtrusive. This book is great. It was just a greedy setting at the beginning. I didn't expect it to give me a big surprise [shy] [shy] [learned] a bit like the feeling of gods and ghosts [full] Update soon, can the author give me a brand name? [Blowing kiss][licking screen]

It took me a long time to write a book review because I was afraid that a few words would detract from this excellent work. This is a rare or even rare Cthulhu-based fairy tale. The author has a brilliant writing style and uses "pictographic techniques" to satirize the ugly phenomena in life and even in officialdom. This is more shocking than writing a plot in a shell! The book not only explores the unsolved mysteries of the world, but also contains concrete descriptions of human nature's greed and desires. The only strange thing is that the author still does not break out of the common framework of immortality writing, which makes the novel less fresh, but overall it is still very good despite its shortcomings. You can roughly read the first dozen chapters, but the rest will be exciting.

It's very good. Except for the ego part, which is a bit messy, everything else is very good, especially the protagonist's psychology. It's neither pretentious nor rigid.

It's just very good. It just feels a bit scary. It's this exciting feeling that makes it interesting. [Laughing evilly] I really don't know how the author wrote it. [Think]

It feels very good. Compared with the transformation, this story about gods, ghosts and strange things is more interesting. And there are so many weird things happening in this small county alone, it's hard to imagine what the scene is like outside [I'm about to cry]

A good book worth reading. The plot is interesting. It has a strong sense of weirdness in the early stage. It begins to develop in the middle stage. It faces all kinds of weirdness. The protagonist leaves the "newbie village" and experiences a lot of events. In the middle and later stages, it begins to reveal the nature of the world and begins to save the world. The later stage is mainly about salvation. Except for some typos, it is generally very good. The heart of salvation conveyed is also very touching. However, there is a problem in the handling of combat power in the later stage. Many things are mentioned in one stroke, but the main plot and a large part of the details are very attractive. (I am not good at commenting. I am saying this because I like this article very much. If there is any opinion that is inconsistent with your opinion, it is your opinion. This is my reaction after reading it. It is meaningless)

It's so beautiful, I think I can watch it several times. If it doesn't end badly, I really love this novel, and it will become a masterpiece that I can't put down. The strange chaos in the novel is very interesting. I can understand the character and behavior of the protagonist in the chaotic world and find it very charming. After reading the novel patiently, the writing is smooth. There are some typos and overlapping words, but I can understand it. As a standalone novel, this novel combines exactly the elements that I like. I also hope to find more articles of this type. I will continue reading this novel and its author with respect and expectation.

A good book, the story of Li Yuebai is very charming. The author's pace is tight in the early stage, and the sense of oppression is overwhelming like a tide. It is very comfortable to watch. To be honest, you have also read the comments of book friends, and then you slowed down the pace, but I feel that the dangerous pressure and the atmosphere of the villain's pressing step by step are indispensable. The author's conception of monsters and monsters is indeed very good, and there are new tricks. Whether it is the long-cherished wish at the beginning, or the twelve gods of Youzhou later, they are all original and innovative, so everyone will come to read it. However, the author should continue to study how to write well. A big problem is that the detailed description is not very good. This is considered a flaw, and it should be polished carefully. The characters are well drawn, and the four main characters each have their own characteristics. I heard that the author started to slack off later on. We still don't know the story about Li Yuebai's life experience, the story of Fatty, how the scholar contributed to the team, and how Pei Sanmei gained a foothold. We still don't know the right story, so that's the pressure. I hope the author can write a story that satisfies both you and me.

Awesome, the author can combine folk ghosts and immortality themes so well, and the writing style is also very good. It is a rare masterpiece.

It's quite good. It's more like a supernatural novel than a transformation novel. But it's pretty good. It doesn't emphasize transformation too much but uses it as a moderator to neutralize those brain-burning plots. It's pretty good.

It's so well written, it's the first time I discovered that Tomato has so many good books [Sending my heart] After reading it, I wanted to read more, but I was afraid that the book would be gone, so I just stopped reading.

It feels to me like a novel that starts low and moves high. The character and personality of the protagonist are well developed, and it is highly recommended. I hope Nan Bei can write better and better in the future [blowing kiss] It's a pity that there are not many people watching here and there is no enthusiasm [rolling eyes]

The best work in Tomato. The strange cultivation of immortality caused the protagonist to do some irrational things in the early stage, but it fits the setting. The writing is smooth and logical. However, there are few descriptions of big scenes and the macro world is not written. The description of people's hearts is also one-sided. Overall, it is worth reading.

It's very good. Even if you read this book without thinking, you may not be able to understand it. The content is also very good and relatively novel. If there is a better title, you can consider changing it. Of course, this title is also very good.

Little me! Love this novel. The author is still so diligent(?). I feel very energetic haha! 5 Stars! Who dares not to criticize things like crazy this time~ Well! 5 Stars! Hahaha! 5 Stars! 5 Stars. Mine……

This book is very well written, because most of the novels I read without Pomodoro before were at a certain point. And I am still an old bookworm, so this book is a good book that I have to read even if I stay up late. Each supporting role has its own personality and persistence. The protagonist is the main character, but the protagonist's brilliance does not overwhelm all the supporting roles. The plot setting and fighting scenes are all top-notch, especially the big scenes are well drawn. Compared to those popular books, I prefer this relatively unpopular book. I think I can catch up to the end of this book.

The overall storyline is very good, it has the feeling of strange power and chaos, and the details are also good, but some plots are slightly embarrassing, but overall it is a very good book The back part is really good, there are ghosts and ghosts, and the value is real. It's not that mindless and cool. The protagonist has also been enhanced. It's not as aggrieved as the previous part. I have to say it's really good.

It's very interesting. It should be one of the best in this genre. [Like] [Like] (There are still more than 300 chapters that I haven't finished yet. I'll review it again after I've finished it. I feel like I'll grow tentacles if I read it again [laughing evilly]) Also, please come on, author! ! I really think the author writes better and the content related to "self" is vividly portrayed! Typos become more frequent as you go to the end, but they do not affect reading very much. All in all, keep going! !