Girl from the Apocalypse

Push it yourself, come on, I will try to keep updating The previous author was eaten by me, and now I can't write with a more natural feeling no matter how I revise it. It's deviated as I write, so let's just update it first. I try to write two chapters a day. Maybe it's a little different from the previous article. It's been so long that I've forgotten some of it. I will change it if I mention it. Later I will read other articles and mention my own words. I will revise all the things I am not satisfied with during this period. Of course, it's almost the end. Hehe, write down the current ideas and outline, emmm, maybe about a million words?

The main character changed her gender and became a little lolita. She has a CP and is the second female lead. She has a first-person perspective. The overall feel is not too abrupt. The writing is excellent. I prefer the extra chapters. The main text is too depressing. The plot may be because the author is a novice. It is a bit messy and needs to be read carefully to understand. I have read it twice and almost understood it. I will sort it out and post an analysis when I have time. All in all, it is very interesting to watch. There are not many emotional lines, but there are swords and sweetness. The plot is more daily, and love is the main line? Lily Tie Tie is also very interesting, but I don't know how the author will deal with other consciousness bodies. To summarize, the whole thing is worth reading, and it also needs to be cultivated. The word count is not that many, but depending on the pace, it may end in a million words? Anyway, keep going! (The following contains some spoilers) There are too many chapters about amnesia, and the length is a bit long. The author's writing style is stream-of-consciousness, which is difficult to read. Sometimes it is not only the protagonist but also the reader who falls into the illusion, because I really didn't realize it was an illusion at the time. The first person is correct, which gives the reader some hints. The foreshadowing may be a bit long, but the length is less than a million, so we will wait and see in the future. The main perspective changes, the perspective of the protagonist is not fixed, and there is also the perspective of the second female lead. Why, because the protagonist died during that time, the perspective can only be that of the second female lead. I have to say that there is something I don't quite understand. The protagonist only has an immortal soul and a body that does not die. Why can the soul withstand so many attacks? I hope subsequent authors can fill in the gaps. Oh, by the way, I hope I can give it a thumbs up for writing this long, thank you. If you're interested, take a look. Overall it's worth reading.

The writing style of "Bianbai" is excellent, but it is partial to hydrology, and there are almost no descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies and women's degeneration. It is a transformation novel with a sci-fi apocalyptic background. The composition and identity of the heroine are very complex, and there is also a reincarnated second heroine. There are many settings, and the emotional line is not bad. After all, there are all kinds of buffs including amnesia and life and death. The perspective of the protagonist is not a fixed heroine, but a first-person perspective. Overall it's not bad and worth watching.

Come on, I understand the story in the prologue, but your expression is very mysterious. Readers may feel that it is out of context, or they may have to think for a long time before they can follow the plot. [Laughing] I'm coding.

When will my memory be restored? The first part is pretty good, but the second part is not very clear.

3Rd person commented

Come on, come on, come on

It looks really good so far

Author, I really have to control you.

Edible, delicious More updates, author Junjun

Come on, come on, come on

I don't know what to post, but I think it's pretty good.

The content is exciting, the story has twists and turns, the characters are rich and unique, and the writing is exquisite. It's just that the description of some of the supporting characters is a bit lacking and is brushed off.

I read it in one go, but I didn't understand it🤯

Top quality, Loli Apocalypse is okay, the narrative is a bit jumpy, and it's a bit confusing to watch.