SurvivalFarmingStruggle for HegemonyPetLogical Reasonable
All selected humans are forced to participate in a challenge called a survival game.
Start with a thatched house!
Tall buildings rise from the ground, and glory can only depend on oneself!
When everyone is collecting supplies to ensure survival
Our protagonist has already lived a fulfilling life!
When everyone is busy dealing with life and death challenges
Our protagonist has already started eating hot pot!
My pet is mighty, my pet is weird, my pet is just a weak chicken.
Our real protagonist:
Strange, this is obviously a pet summoning coupon.
How was it summoned? . . . .
Reader comments
The writing is okay, but there is a bit of forced wisdom. In the opening scene, it was said that the profit obtained from water was 37%, but it turned out that this big fool only needed to [cover his face]. The data analysis alliance in the back was more fun. It gave you the drawings and materials for free. You just need to help make it, and the drawings are yours, so how smart are they? Then there are so many people and none of them can cook, which is outrageous. Also, there was a person who gave fifty pounds of flour to a pig's feet, but was asked to just give it a try? ? ? Do you know how long it would take a person to eat fifty pounds of flour? And the most poisonous thing is when you summon a pet, and an Internet celebrity is summoned, you instantly don't want to watch it. Even if you summon an anime character or a TV series character, you can accept it. Internet celebrities really can't accept it, and they are also Internet celebrities without makeup. Do you think it can be watched?
The book is not bad, but it's not an invincible and refreshing article. Pig's feet have persecution delusions, so I'll just read half of it as a business and strategy article.
Just summoning a pet and summoning a cat made me scratch my head for a cup, but it didn't help much and felt like it was just a vase.
It would make sense to summon Li Ziqi. After all, her craftsmanship and cooking skills are great. She doesn't have to work hard to cook the food herself. She can also take good care of the shelter when the pig's feet are out looking for supplies.
No comments from anyone? Don't panic, brother, I support you, full marks 💯, it's well written, and I have some suggestions. Survival flow, when it comes to development, don't be too fast, don't be too big, what kind of explosion flow, what kind of goblins, what kind of survivors gather to fight, basically there is nothing to write about, if there are elves and the like, it will be even worse. The writing is nondescript, so remember to be careful.
The beginning was good, but until the first reward ended, I thought the summoned pet was a cat lady! It turned out to be a real Internet celebrity, but it was of no use at all. It was really outrageous, and then it became more and more outrageous. What kind of star life master or something? Do you have to gather all the major Internet celebrities to become a lord in the future? The protagonist is still a eunuch. You have summoned Internet celebrities. I still don't know what readers want to see. Do you want to watch you perform as a young diaosi?
Cooperation for what? ? ? ?
It's too verbose. There is an explanation after each item or task. Just forget about the task. And why cooperate? Is it just bad sales? This book obviously has a bad word count
The writing is okay, but there is a bit of forced wisdom. In the opening scene, it was said that the profit obtained from water was 37%, but it turned out that this big fool only needed to [cover his face]. The data analysis alliance in the back was more fun. It gave you the drawings and materials for free. You just need to help make it, and the drawings are yours, so how smart are they? Then there are so many people and none of them can cook, which is outrageous. Also, there was a person who gave fifty pounds of flour to a pig's feet, but was asked to just give it a try? ? ? Do you know how long it would take a person to eat fifty pounds of flour? And the most poisonous thing is when you summon a pet, and an Internet celebrity is summoned, you instantly don't want to watch it. Even if you summon an anime character or a TV series character, you can accept it. Internet celebrities really can't accept it, and they are also Internet celebrities without makeup. Do you think it can be watched?
The book is not bad, but it's not an invincible and refreshing article. Pig's feet have persecution delusions, so I'll just read half of it as a business and strategy article. Just summoning a pet and summoning a cat made me scratch my head for a cup, but it didn't help much and felt like it was just a vase. It would make sense to summon Li Ziqi. After all, her craftsmanship and cooking skills are great. She doesn't have to work hard to cook the food herself. She can also take good care of the shelter when the pig's feet are out looking for supplies.
No comments from anyone? Don't panic, brother, I support you, full marks 💯, it's well written, and I have some suggestions. Survival flow, when it comes to development, don't be too fast, don't be too big, what kind of explosion flow, what kind of goblins, what kind of survivors gather to fight, basically there is nothing to write about, if there are elves and the like, it will be even worse. The writing is nondescript, so remember to be careful.
The beginning was good, but until the first reward ended, I thought the summoned pet was a cat lady! It turned out to be a real Internet celebrity, but it was of no use at all. It was really outrageous, and then it became more and more outrageous. What kind of star life master or something? Do you have to gather all the major Internet celebrities to become a lord in the future? The protagonist is still a eunuch. You have summoned Internet celebrities. I still don't know what readers want to see. Do you want to watch you perform as a young diaosi?
Cooperation for what? ? ? ?
It's too verbose. There is an explanation after each item or task. Just forget about the task. And why cooperate? Is it just bad sales? This book obviously has a bad word count