Traveling Through *********

I hope the author can stick to it. I have read several dragon novels, but none of them were to my liking. I've read this book before and it's fine, even if I read one book a day. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The biggest shortcoming is the first-person perspective of the protagonist. When the writing is not up to par, the third-person is suitable. Otherwise, it will make people unable to accept it and make them disgusted. I personally don't care about this (although it is still uncomfortable to watch). In short, keep going! [Praise]

I think it's very well written and I changed all the knives.

Not bad, but what's up with that narrator? Sometimes it's "I", and sometimes it's the third person "Mo Wushuang"

I give you five stars for the author. I hope you can change the word "I" in the name to the name of the protagonist.

You must work hard. The most interesting novel I have ever read is "Don't Break, Don't Break the Roots, Don't Break the Roots. Say important things three times."

The author should update soon. You don't want to see one-star comments either [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty well written [smile][snicker]

Very good, four stars to encourage you.

Except for this first person, everything else is good.