Maid Illustrated Book, Start as the Lord of the Crystal Palace

The writing is clean, the content is relaxed, and it is charming but not vulgar. It is a rare novel. Judging from the current writing style, framework, plot and other aspects, it can be called the ceiling level of the harem in another world. What brings us together here? That's right, it's a girl! All kinds of girls! A girl who covers most of the beautiful types of XP! The "big harem" mentioned by the author himself, wait and see~🥵 Here are the serious reviews: First of all, it refreshed my stereotype of many young novelists with "wrong words, characters, and formats" and gave me a very comfortable look and feel as a slightly mystical person. Although I didn't deliberately find fault with it, I didn't find any errors after looking at it for a few days. It is no exaggeration to say that this alone has defeated 99% of the authors, and this is also the place that best reflects the author's literary background and writing skills. The novel is light-hearted and joyful, and at the same time has a reasonable setting, a complete structure, and is full of details. It can be read happily, and you can also dig for Easter eggs carefully. Some readers even discussed with the author in the comment area how many patterns there are. (?) It can be seen that the character's image portrayal is not "labeling and hating", but gradually enriches the character's image through the interaction of chapters. The advantage is that it is more three-dimensional and plump, but the disadvantage is that it is more expensive for the author [laughs evilly] If you think about this "big harem", there will only be seven or eight girls, not to mention ten or so. The amount of work is huge when you think about it. I look forward to describing the details later when they are surrounded. I am a close reader with an eye for detail. I often even build simple scenes in my mind to recall the wonderful moments. The hazy beauty under the delicate writing style is especially suitable for letting your imagination run wild. It has potential, I hope to see various types of adaptations in my lifetime🥰 Finally, let's talk about some shortcomings: it's fine but not detailed enough. Anyway, it's not as detailed as mine [laughs evilly] but there are still details that can be optimized. Now that I have caught up to the latest chapter, be prepared to accept my scrutiny and training! ๑V๑hehe The subject matter is feasible, the author is reliable, and the future is promising. Appreciate both refined and popular tastes. Enjoy it with all of you. PS: Can the author reveal which character the avatar is? [Think]

Very good, I hope the author will send me the side job and give it to me Kangkang [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Note: (harem novel) Don't bother if you don't like it - I first met the author in Qd last summer, and it was also a harem novel. When I first read it, I felt that the author's emotional descriptions were more delicate, and the sense of substitution was very "silky". The character's personality also covers a wide range, and it caters for people with various hobbies (ps. Like me). Later, due to various reasons, I lost contact with him/her, and after a long time, I found him/her again here. Closer to home, my current thoughts on this book: 1. The writing style is not naive and the words are standard. There are currently few typos and the wording is not childish. 2. Original text. The author is active in the comment area and works with me every day. I guarantee with my personality that this is not computer sketching or copying of text. 3. Diverse character settings. With diverse races, diverse personalities, and evenly distributed roles, I believe it can satisfy book lovers of all kinds. 4. The male protagonist's design is quite satisfactory. Not a holy mother, not a scumbag (according to the previous urine), not distorted in three views (the author's three views are not bad in side reaction), not pure Long Aotian, he is a talented growth player. 5. Emotionally rich. There are many descriptions of inner activities, making it easy for readers to immerse themselves in the story. Each female protagonist will have her own story line and emotional line with the male protagonist, and the stories and emotions between the female protagonists will not overlap. Summary: I have made the above evaluation so far. As for the shortcomings, the more I write, the more the shortcomings will be exposed. So far, there are no problems. So, if you like reading harem stories, hurry up! If you like harem stories, collect them first and then read them, don't forget them! Yandere, lolita, royal sister, you name it, bro, cute, one last thing, don't give me nicknames anymore [crying] [crying]

Teacher, if you could tell me where to read your other works, I would really appreciate it. Really, I was almost moved to tears when I saw a stream of magical clarity in the Tomato novel QAQ

I feel that when Japanese light novels are translated, their writing habits make me uncomfortable when reading them. But this book can be written like a light novel. Although the protagonist is extremely talented, he will not feel invincible and bored. The foreshadowing of the book's feeling is also endlessly memorable. The most important thing is to have a sense of déjà vu when watching it.

Not bad, not bad, a serious harem story, not mindless, it is logical, the emotions burst out very reasonably, without a knife🔪, I really like it [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It must be very good-looking (◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩. First of all, the character creation is very unique. Different from other harem novels, the female protagonist has a very delicate emotional line. In short, I think it is very good-looking. The male protagonist does not make people feel that they have lowered their IQ. The overall plot and world view are very big, which is worth looking forward to✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿), but I feel like the updates are a bit slow. I wish this book will get better and better, keep up the good work!

The subject matter is novel and I think it is a relatively good harem story. I believe I will follow it until the end.

Not bad [laughing evilly] This is the first time I read this type of book. I feel that this book is good among this type (๑> <๑)

The story has just begun. The advantage is that the writing is fluent and comfortable to read; the subject matter is novel and not cliched; the characters and personality traits are vividly and impressively described. It can be said that Teacher Shenlai's character description is unique. Of course, this is from the literary perspective of the article. From the story content, it is closely related to the tags on the homepage and does not deviate from the theme. In short, I will not regret reading it.

It looks good so far, there are no bad points, and it feels like it has great potential! ! I like the female characters that have appeared so far, and they have their own attractive features (I feel that the author has done a good job in shaping the characters) The setting of the male protagonist is also very good, not brainless. There is no poison in the plot at the moment, and the benefits are okay too I am very satisfied with the setting of the maid illustrated book, I like it very much It can be seen that the world view is huge (probably?), I hope the author can seize the future (Do you feel like reading a light novel?) And I'm pushing Olivier alone, come on! ! ! To be added later...

There are many elements! The plot is not nonsensical and the heroine is also very unique. I like it.

In terms of plot and character description alone, the teacher's writing style is extremely delicate, and the shaping of the characters is also unique. He can highlight the main part of each character and highlight the character characteristics of the chapter through the description of other characters. Due to the weak setting of the protagonist, there is no stallion problem that will appear in harem novels, and the original intention of the male protagonist has not changed. The purpose of the opening chapter is to collect Genneng Ji. It is clearly stated. I really don't understand what is wrong with those blacks? Because the hidden dangers have been eliminated? Because I didn't see anyone pushing one? Because I'm not invincible enough to kill everyone all the way? If you really want to watch this kind of thing, you should quit early. No one is forcing you to watch it [laughs awkwardly]. However, teachers also have shortcomings. What they write is too advanced, and it is difficult for ordinary people to understand it. Come on, teacher, readers who understand you are hard to find, but you would rather lack than overfill. [Please update]

Very exciting, the content is very good [laughing evilly] The veteran driver loves it the most

Five stars [top post] This book is a harem light novel. If you like no heroine or single heroine, you can also read it. It is really very interesting (ฅ>ω<*ฅ). The male protagonist prefers the Japanese Asashi style and is a growth-oriented protagonist. There are also foreshadowings/pits, the main plot is clear, and the heroines have distinct and vivid personalities (Lysa is mine~\(≧▽≦)/~). Light novels are definitely not too exciting~~~ but reading light novels in your spare time is really a great choice. I hope Mr. Hoshino will continue to update, but for the sake of the author's health, I don't ask for updates. [Eat melon]

It's a good book. Some of the plots were not well controlled when writing. Overall, it's good. It's a bit like a light novel, but it's an original fantasy. The background is similar to Western fantasy. The world view design is okay. I look forward to the follow-up performance.

I found this book by chance. I had kept it on my bookshelf and hadn't read it. I suddenly opened it a few days ago and couldn't stop reading it. The author's writing style is good, and the selection of materials is different from the ordinary world of fairy tales, and is more biased towards the Western magical world. This is also very attractive to me. Of course, the most important thing is these girls. Whether they are the "main character" or the eldest lady, their characters really poked at me. The pace is brisk and comfortable to read. The depictions of the girls are delicate, thoughtful and interlocking. There are also contrasts between before and after, making the reading exciting. As for Xiao Longnu, I think she should be the first one I know and the last one to be included in the palace (personal feeling [shy]). Generally speaking, it is very attractive to me. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's a very good novel. The author's logic and foreshadowing are very good, and the writing style is also good. The car is very fast (either while driving, or on the road). Each heroine has an independent personality (hobby), vivid and suitable for her identity. It is also impressive. However, she was locked up in a dark room for a while, and since then The ending was too hasty (but I can understand it). The better part is that a dozen energy girls appeared and they were accepted. The ending is relatively good (not as bad as some people said) ps: It can also be regarded as a magical book that was ruined by Tomato (a certain third young master). I give five stars to support the author and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

The writing is really good. The writing style is far beyond the level of Tomato. The article mentioned "The Spiritual Envoy Development Plan". The author must be the author of that book. I also liked reading this book at the beginning, but it has been discontinued. I didn't expect to see it after going around and around. It is also a special fate.

It's very interesting. Each chapter is very substantial, but it's still not enough to read. Please come on, author, and update quickly. I can't wait. Xiaoyang people use novels to divert attention from me. The significance of this novel is that it effectively alleviates my pain. I give the author a big [admiration][admiration]

The content is interesting, the pace of the plot is moderate, and the protagonist's growth feels slow. I can't say how good it is. You can check out the brother who has written the most in the reviews. It's the same as what he said. In addition, I hope the author will stabilize the plot and update it, and I hope he won't rush to start a new book (some authors say it is difficult, but after opening a bunch of books and then cutting them off, the writing was quite good) [Blow kiss] Come on, author. If an artist draws it, it must be a long comic, and it will still be that kind of astringent [love]

It's very good. The interweaving of the story is very interesting. Now that you have a good start, you must stick to it. You don't want to have an appendix. It is recommended to drive less, do more daily, give out more candy, and create more characters. Don't be too single.

The writing is pretty good, the characters have distinct personalities, and the writing is great. But it's a bit too unfair for Lysa, and the female character is given away a bit too quickly. But the emotional scenes after Bai Gai were pretty good. Overall, it is one of the top books in Tomato, and the background of Western magic is also well written.

The setting is nice, and the female protagonists are also pretty good. The author's writing is exquisite. The biggest shortcoming is that the male protagonist is not so much a god as he is called the Holy Mother, and he is almost played to death by most of the female protagonists. If the female protagonists were not all so-called true love, the male protagonist would have died countless times.

Coming from Yuye, I feel that it is not as good as Yuye. It should be that the author's writing has become more sophisticated [laughs]. This book also ended early due to some reasons. The ending was very hasty, but it did not affect the impressive ending. In addition, the content in the middle and later stages is very substantial [laughs crookedly]. Some aspects of the protagonist's character in the middle and early stages make me feel a little uncomfortable, that's my personal feeling. But I still give 5 to express my love for Teacher Shenlai [salute][salute]

It is by no means comparable to the writing style of other Tomato Primary School authors. I believe that the author must have a relatively complete world view and setting, and coupled with sophisticated skills, this novel is indeed very exciting and eye-catching.

It's so good. I haven't seen a book of this quality on Tomato for a long time. The character creation is simply perfect, and each female supporting character has a distinct personality. Lysa the Dragon Girl is soft and cute, Jessica the eldest daughter is sinister, and Catwoman is obedient. More importantly, the detailed descriptions of these female supporting characters seem to be the protagonists. Without anyone else, it cannot be called a perfect work. For example, the description of Lysa the Dragon Girl: cute, cute, innocent, kind-hearted, and easy to cheat. Each character makes me feel a unique personality and serious qualities instead of just brushing it off. Maybe it's because I live with a mask every day in the real world. When I read this novel, I felt really relaxed and happy. I hope the author won't be too harsh. I like every character very much.

The content is rich, the concept is unique, the images are novel, and the early plot is perfect. Vera's "Pollution" has pushed the novel to its peak. It is the most praiseworthy book I have read so far. But there are also some shortcomings. 1. An Xiao is too passive and has no ideas of her own. 2. Lysa, who suffered so much for me, is really pitiful. She was the one who came first [crying]. The wedding that had been promised was also rejected. 3. The ending is hasty and could have been made longer. Wait for the shortcomings. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Don't worry about it. I still like this book very much. Laila and Vera are my two favorite characters. They will never be forgotten until now or even in the future. Finally, I wish @ good health and a good rest. I also hope that Shenlai can be more colorful every day in the next book. Don't end it hastily. [Like][Learned]

Why do you only have so much enthusiasm? Why? It's obviously written so well, why? This is one of my favorite novels I have ever read. Every character in it has its own characteristics and is made of flesh and blood. If you put yourself into it and feel it, it is a masterpiece. You can feel the delicate emotions of the characters and the author's intentions. Although I saw your complaints in the small notice and knew that it was about to end, I still felt very reluctant to let go, as if a girlfriend who was always by my side suddenly left me... Finally, I wish the author a speedy recovery, and you must get well!

Four stars. The pace is slow in the beginning and ends in a hurry in the later stages. I thought it was a stream where the protagonist upgrades, but I didn't expect it to be a casual stream. Generally speaking, the speed is quite fast. There isn't much story in the middle. Most of them are covered in one go. It's still very good.