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Asking for skills and moves, elixirs and herbs, names of monsters, formations, and supporting characters... The author is not full-time, but he loves writing and promises to keep updating. He takes one day off a month. It is not easy to code, so please spray lightly! During the new book period, I hope you will support me a lot, comment a lot, like a lot, and give me a good review. Thank you very much!

This is the best family novel I read in Tomato. It has rigorous logic and compact plot. It is very good. I am optimistic about you. Please update it!

The writing is okay, better than a certain family flow. Zhang Zhipeng, Zhang Zhirui, Zhang Zhibao, Zhang Yuntian, Zhang Yonghua, etc. All have character settings. It is not about one person supporting a family or a group portrait. The other members of the family also have their own merits. I personally think it is very good. I will keep updating and look forward to you.

Nice and refreshing article. Keep it up like this. I would like to make a small suggestion. After practicing the Five Elements of Chaos to build the foundation or golden elixir, you can add the five-color divine light to defeat anything of the same realm in the Five Elements. You can protect yourself.

Feiyan Sword Technique, Bai Lie Sword Technique, Golden Light Sword Technique, Thirteen Xuanyin Styles, Drawing Sword Technique, Covering Rain Sword Technique, Canghai Sword Technique... Golden Bell Cover, Vajra Palm, Fuhu Fist, Spirit Snake Fist, Seven Injury Fist, Baji Fist, Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand...

This book is very well written, but I have many questions. I would like to ask: First, the author said at the beginning that cultivation is slow in the early stage and fast in the later stage. When will this speed be reached? Now that the golden elixir has been broken through, the Nascent Soul is estimated to be five Nascent Souls, and then there will be five times of refining the void, five times of joining the path, five times of transcending tribulations, five times of Mahayana, and five times of ascension. I estimate it takes tens of millions of years. Second, why it is necessary to practice five times. Maybe it is because I have read too many fantasy novels. I feel that starting from the golden elixir, there should be thousands of great powers in one body, such as the five-color golden elixir, the five-color Nascent Soul, etc. . . It's not necessary to practice five Third, the Nascent Soul can be taken over and practiced separately. Does it represent the realm of the Nascent Soul? It can be advanced simultaneously without having to practice five times.

Although I criticized the author in the chapter review, overall this is a book worth reading about a family's cultivation of immortality. It's just a pity that the ending is a bit anxious. I could have continued writing or even started a new book to write about the spiritual world and immortality. At least I would have written about becoming the top family in the world of immortality. It only ended at Nascent Soul. It's really a pity.

It's just that after Zhang Yongping's breakthrough, except for his parents, other people didn't know that Zhang Yongping was already at the ninth level of Qi training, and they thought Zhang Yongping was a monk at the fifth level of Qi training. Zhang Yongping is currently nineteen years old and has reached the seventh level of Qi training. What the hell is it the 9th level or the 7th level?

It's okay. Family cultivators should pay more attention to the supporting roles of family members. There is new life. There is an end. Only then can there be development. The development of family members is somewhat lacking. There is enough space for hostile supporting characters and foreign supporting characters.

Very well written. Five-star praise. There is no cheating cheat, it is not a brainless article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and make breakthroughs. At present, the fighting scenes are somewhat similar. The pig's feet are turned over and over with the Drizzle Sword Technique and the Green Lotus Sword Technique. The group battle scenes are also somewhat similar. One side begins to gain the upper hand, but suddenly a master appears on the other side and immediately reverses the situation. . I hope that the author's subsequent writing will be more exciting and that each copy will have a unique impression.

It's a pity. I liked the movie "Sword Array to Immortality" very much, and I followed it to the end. Now I'm looking for new books, 5-star reviews, the author should work hard to create!

I came from the previous book. Is it possible that this period of transcending the tribulation is Li Zisheng from the previous book? Is it the author?

This is the fastest and most written book on family immortality that I have ever seen with the most dead people. It's... Quite real.

The writing is very good, but they are all swordsmen. It would be nice if there was a protagonist who can use double hammers.

It's very good, but the updates are a bit slow. I've read other novels during this period, and this is the second time I've read it.

Come on, well written

You can take a look at Shuhuang

Good, good, good, good

Big cheers for the author

Okay, very good

Wouldn't it be nice to be the elder or ancestor of a family when one has reached the golden elixir level?

It's very good and beautiful, with rich content and exciting plot. It's a good novel about cultivating immortals.

Very exciting, with ups and downs of the plot and delicate characterization

This book is very well written

Big cheers for the author

Well written by the Zhang family

Fortunately, it's okay to watch the highlights while dancing.

This author's book is pretty good

It's not bad to look at if you're bored

It looks great, keep up the good work!