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Come on! Don't give up! The writing is very good, even the writing style and imagination are comparable to 9.1 Points or above. It's just that there are too few people who read this kind of book, so I won't say anything else, but if there is even one reader, don't give up updating it. This is the first time I have given a book five stars and written a review of more than 10 words. Don't let me down! Don't give up! Come on! Come on! Come on!

Awesome, this kind of writing is the best in Tomato (my humble opinion, no need to start a fight)

It's a very good book, but you have to be mentally prepared. If you can accept it, you will see the charm of self-cultivation. If you can't accept it, don't do anything. Turn right from here and there will be a period.

It's good-looking and well-organized. It's not a mindless remake of the timeline. The author is very active. I commented on it before he gave me likes. Hehe, it must be too easy. I have this time to not code and even dive secretly [laughing] It seems like I need to send some razors.

Yes, it's a very good book on Tomato. It's much better than some mass-produced books rated at 9:00 or so. It shouldn't only have a rating of 7:00 or so. I wish you will get to 9:00 as soon as possible [Blow kiss]

It's very beautiful. I recommend everyone to read it when eating, especially when eating [laughing] Still good looking.

It's a very good book, whether you read it or keep it on the bookshelf. At first, I thought it was just a mindless novel that follows the trend. It can be seen that the author is also a book lover of Tao Wei, but it is good to add some passion to the weird and twisted world view of Tao Wei style. The update also seems to be very secure. It is not a brainless and refreshing book. The plug-in of the protagonist "Entropy" is very powerful but not invincible. Another plug-in, the Xuanyang worm, will backfire on itself, which also shows that in the crazy world view, all power has to pay a price. It can be seen that the author wants to create a big world view. I hope the author can master the writing skills, come on! (PS: The protagonist has a bit of a hellish start. Although Danyangzi who Huo Wang meets has a bad personality, at least he still cares about his apprentice. Wenzhen just wants to eat the protagonist... Will Wenzhen have a big role in the future?) Another small suggestion, you can consider changing the title of the book. A title in this format can easily make people think that it is a mindless white text, and it is easy to discourage new readers. Thinking of a more concise title may increase some readers🥰🥰🥰

The style looks good, and the protagonist's goal is quite clear, but this one is less passionate. The strength game between the protagonist and the enemy was in the first volume. I felt it was quite obvious and it looked good. Now that I saw "Get Out", my curiosity has been aroused again... [Learned] I don't really like novels that are too brain-burning, but now the popularity is just right [I learned]

It's a great book. I hope the author can write better. Also, this type of Cthulhu-style writing is not suitable for a female protagonist. After all, it is easy to die suddenly in this style.

Author, the book is very good, [face covering] Don't be a eunuch, write slowly, add more events to enrich the world view and increase the thickness of the story [laughing], I personally feel that the pace of the third volume has become faster, and it is closer to a fast-food novel (not sure, I will read it again [thinking]) Come on [send heartfelt] Use more emphasis on heavy words [smile], which can stimulate imagination and bring a sense of involvement. (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

The writing is very genre-defining, the storyline is also very good, and it's beautiful to watch.

Because I just watched a part of Dao Wei Xian recently, it is inevitable to cross the channel. This article is indeed somewhat similar, but the characters and story lines are different, so I gradually broke away from the sense of déjà vu and let me talk about my feelings after reading it. Although the protagonist has some flaws, his IQ is that of an ordinary person. He will be plotted by others, and he will plot against others, but generally even at the first step (I don't know if he will grow up later), it feels a little depressing. The author is very powerful in describing the weirdness. Because the protagonist has been walking in a strange background, it feels tense the whole time. Therefore, the article is good, but it is better to read in a relaxed and happy state. The writing style is good and suitable for reading slowly.

Write slowly. The world view can be expanded a little. The plot at the beginning is not interesting, but you can continue to watch it step by step. Later, you will slowly add more plots. Fortunately, the time is ripe. The appearance of Huang Fugui not only seriously injured Wen Zhen but also accelerated the death of the protagonist.

The world view is grand, and a lot has been written so that you can read it all at once. Of course, there is room for improvement. Personally, I feel that the description of the environment is not interesting, and the plot line is not very clear. Overall it's average

First of all, I think the previous plot is very good and compact. I think the first volume and the second volume are very good. The foreshadowing is very good and deep. The characters are also described with flesh and blood. Especially the characterizations of some supporting characters I think are very good and profound, but I also have a little doubt. The first is that I feel that the protagonist is already in the Walker realm. Even if he is tired from the continuous battles, he should not resist. He was taken away without resistance. It is understandable that he was restrained in the place where he was captured and could not use his strength. At that time, he was playing Dao Renda with Wenzhen and Epidemic Daoist. After the battle, they were captured easily, but Taoist Epidemic and Taoist were so good in the Walker Realm before, and the strength of the protagonist was obviously not up to this level. The plot later made me feel that the strength of the protagonist fluctuated up and down. Apart from external forces, the protagonist did not have any real skills that he practiced in the Eight Classics. He only had external forces such as a knife, bugs, God of Disaster, and Lian'er. He only had one field. Of course, I was watching and sometimes listened to individual details and might not have paid attention to them. I just had these doubts.

This is a grand bloom of literary imagination! The author's unique style and creativity create a lifelike story kingdom that is so real that readers feel as if they are invited to step into it and have a soul-deep dialogue with the characters.

It's great, every character is unique and the plot is engaging. The characters' inner activities, thinking, the entanglement between interests and human nature, and the pull during confrontation are all very police and fascinating to watch.

Don't be fooled by the title of the book. It doesn't kill people randomly, and it doesn't have insight into everything. The author not only pays attention to the protagonist, but also shapes the supporting characters very well, and also lays out the foreshadowing well. Overall, it is very good.

It is a very good book about cultivating immortality in the genre, at least better than most. I really have to admire how clear the author's brain circuit is. It really expresses horror and suspense vividly. It does not make the protagonist particularly highlight his cheats, but also shapes the image of each character. It is reversed after reversal. Although some routines are old, overall, it is highly recommended. And why did you stop updating it? ?

The storyline is never boring. It also has a lot of ups and downs. The emotions of each character are delicate and vivid on the page. It is full of details. As you think about the plot, there will be a lot of interactions and struggles between characters at all levels.

Personally, I feel that except for the poor writing in some details and the thin and pale description of the emotional level, the plot of the whole book is pretty good (btw 🍅's ratings have always been pretty bad). Good luck to the author.

It's okay, reading the time is a book about cheating corpses. I guess the rating was discontinued for too long, so I bought a little bit and scrolled forward to review a lot of comments for two hours, all at the same time. The content is quite good, but it needs a bit of immersion🍏. The main storyline of the stages is long, so it is not suitable for readers who are looking for timely and exciting feedback.

Md's writing is really good, whether it is the characterization of the characters, the description of the scenes, the design of the movements and images, it is unique and the description of flesh and blood is very appetizing [like] The author is very talented and hopes to continue to work hard.

How can I put it this way? I have been reading novels for three years. It's not that long. I read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality last year and couldn't stand the kind of trivial novels. Then I read this book. I found it very interesting. It's not that kind of trivial novels. The protagonist is also very intelligent. I highly recommend it. Why can't such an interesting novel get a score of 9?

The author uses his magical words and endless creativity to build a highly immersive exotic world. Its strong sense of realism makes readers feel as if they have traveled through a dimensional wall and can truly listen to the characters' voices and feel their struggles.

It's not confusing to watch in "The Immortal of Ke". Although it's a bit slow, things are explained clearly. The plot develops step by step, the story has ups and downs, the framework is well established, and the characters are also established.

It's good to read and the author has to write a good book slowly, don't give up halfway. In addition to the main character's IQ being above average, I think another reason for the low rating is that your writing is too heavy-handed. And why did I feel compassion for that woman when I saw her? She was cruel before, but she died seven times. The plot should be strengthened. After leaving the temple, I didn't like the plot very much. The protagonist's character is problematic. I can change it a little earlier. It's quite interesting.

The writing is pretty good. I just hope it's not too dark. I know, darkness is also a style. But too dark is not good-looking after all. Everyone must have a piece of pure land in their heart.

Another potential stock of Tomato, with great imagination and world view. The taste of weirdness is very strong, and the description of weird things is also very detailed and delicate. I felt so happy watching it.

It's good-looking, and the logic is clear. It doesn't blindly reshape the timeline, and not every backtracking can be successful. The villain is very strong and has many trump cards, like Xiaoqiang who can't be killed. The protagonist is also under a lot of pressure. It's tense and exciting to watch.