Yun Huan traveled through time and obtained an automatic training system. However, is there really any martial arts secrets in this world? ? ? The pit wall system doesn't even give me any martial arts skills? How can I be a hero?
Reader comments
How can I put it, the first part is mediocre, but the second part is really good. The author changed the writing style several times, and finally seemed to have settled on it. It has a bit of artistic conception without losing humor, and also contains the principles of life. I feel very comfortable reading it. Come on, update it, don't stop it, it will become more and more popular!
It's not easy for a newcomer to write a book! The book you write must have selling points and novel ideas, be updated consistently, interact with readers more, and be lively and interesting, not toxic! Also, the cover and title of the book are important first impressions.
I haven't read much yet. How can I put it? The idea is not bad, but the writing is a bit immature. As far as I can see from the previous chapters, the writing method is not like traditional martial arts or mainstream online literature, but it is a little bit both. It's okay. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง
It looks okay, but the main theme of the story is "Shuang". I hope there won't be any plots that abuse the protagonist.
Well written, the male protagonist is very comfortable
How can I put it, the first part is mediocre, but the second part is really good. The author changed the writing style several times, and finally seemed to have settled on it. It has a bit of artistic conception without losing humor, and also contains the principles of life. I feel very comfortable reading it. Come on, update it, don't stop it, it will become more and more popular!
It's not easy for a newcomer to write a book! The book you write must have selling points and novel ideas, be updated consistently, interact with readers more, and be lively and interesting, not toxic! Also, the cover and title of the book are important first impressions.
I haven't read much yet. How can I put it? The idea is not bad, but the writing is a bit immature. As far as I can see from the previous chapters, the writing method is not like traditional martial arts or mainstream online literature, but it is a little bit both. It's okay. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง
It looks okay, but the main theme of the story is "Shuang". I hope there won't be any plots that abuse the protagonist.
Well written, the male protagonist is very comfortable
It's very well written.