Mysterious Invasion: I Build the Old Church

I seem to have seen it somewhere?

It has been almost three hours since I read this book. I found that the protagonist, Light of the Old Days, has a rather powerful personality. He can always pop out when unexpected and can turn the tide. The second thing is about the plot in this book, the words of the characters are more emotional. I checked and found that there is no such language on the Internet. It should be the author's own creation. The first is that the old days return to the church, and the evening bells praise the dawn.

I like the setting about the Old Church better. I prefer the second-grade vocabulary in it Especially the character Twilight Shield who never sleeps From the beginning to the end, he has always been a relatively mysterious one. I don't know where he comes from. I feel that the author should give a certain introduction later. Also, I feel like the author has included a lot of foreshadowing. If you search for each piece in advance, you can find the reason.

Judging from the subject matter and concept, it should be a behind-the-scenes flow, but the plot development cannot be understood at all. The two brothers, Hu and Jiang, are completely divorced from the concept of coaching. It's a very good subject matter. Logically speaking, coaching should be about orphans who like to be alone or are not liked by people around them, or are subject to great social influence. You can write it out slowly based on the plot, and then select a few teachers to write it. The church should have that sense of mystery, where its members are not known to outsiders, their code names are known but not their identities, they are not connected with social institutions, and members do not reveal their church identities in real life. The Tremorers, Wise Men, etc. That you mainly write about are already known, especially the Tremors who want to bring people in. You don't want anyone to know your identity even if you draw people in. My personal opinion is that I hope the author can write a better novel based on the opinions. This novel has a good concept but a poor plot. I suggest you read more behind-the-scenes stories of different types to learn from and remove the shortcomings while retaining the essence.

The temperature has dropped, the wind has come, the sun has turned cold again, it has become cold, frost has come, the clothes have to be thickened again, the days have become shorter, the nights have become longer, and the work and rest are confused again. Strengthen your body and protect yourself from the cold, otherwise the cooling will be over. Remember to add more clothes when it is cold, warmth and warmth are sweet. The overall content is very good, the author should update it soon [laughing]

Very nice! Big cheers for the author! Is there a female protagonist? @

A very good book, good luck to the author

Meow meow meow? Hurry up and update. It's not enough to read in a day. It only takes a little while to update. Donkeys don't rest like this.

It's good-looking and really good-looking, but sometimes it's really embarrassing. Especially when I read the lines, I feel inexplicably embarrassed [facepalm]. However, as long as there's a good plot and the writing is good, that won't be a problem. All in all, it looks great [like]

It's been well written so far, so good cheers to the author!

This book has been banned. Please click on this account and I will open a new one [Mystery Comes, I Found the Old Church]

They're all good but the twin brothers are annoying.

Oh ho ho ho, it's so good to watch it all night long [adoration][adoration]

Author: As long as you keep improving, you will be my god🥰🥰🥰

It's beautiful (♥∀♥), thank you to the author!

It's not that I looked at it and found out that the update has been discontinued. I'm sorry for the author.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, there will be more benefits during Double 11 [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

Looks good, cheers for the author [Like][Like]

This is a good book

It's over as soon as it's said to be over, without any feelings at all.

Update quickly, it's not enough to watch, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

I feel good-looking [admiration] [admiration]

Apart from being short, there is nothing outstanding [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, but the content is a little short. Can it be faster?

Come on update! ! ! I just can't understand the timeline, and the sentences are too awkward.