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Overall it's good, but there are a few places that I find unsightly. For example, the entertainment committee will sign up the protagonist without the consent of the protagonist, and the roommate will secretly take photos of the protagonist sleeping and post them in the group without the consent of the protagonist. These two behaviors are what villains would do in other books. The protagonist's personality is too good, but he has no temper with girls?

It's very interesting. This is the best transformation article I've seen so far that suits my taste. There's no intrigue, just fun! There are just too few, please update soon!

A very good novel

Three roommates took photos without permission and posted them online. The entertainment committee member made the decision to sign up for the event and gave 20% of the proceeds from the event to an agent who was not even an amateur. Without these three points, it would look quite comfortable.

It's quite a new type. The only downfall is the behavior of a few roommates. Also, the reviews and impressions of passers-by always lack the works published by the heroine. Isn't this more meaningful than the top scorer in the college entrance examination and the death of the red rabbit?

Yes, since you don't write CP stories, are some things about pursuing the heroine deleted? (Personal opinion)

The writing style is very good. I felt very happy when I read it. I like it, but it's too short and not enough to read. Why isn't it popular? [Thinking] Come on! ! ! Please update!

The faults do not hide the faults. After reading almost fifty chapters, there is only one poisonous point that irritates me. Why does it do no good for the protagonist to deny his identity, and then there is no harm in not denying or saying anything? This is a matter of explanation... You don't explain, and then the protagonist becomes confused and can't understand why he does this... There are no other problems. If I really want to say that this character problem is not a problem, it is a relatively classic problem. It is the kind that is easy to be surprised. Anyway, half of the manuscripts I have read have this kind of problem, so it is nothing. In other aspects, it is still very good. The plot is very smooth, the priorities are clear, and the writing guides me well to continue reading. The author can do it! In short, it is not easy to change the article, so please come on, author.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

The plot of this book seems to be very good. Generally speaking, after being reborn in a parallel world, one becomes a great god by carrying works from the original world. What we are seeing is the collision of civilizations in the two worlds. However, I think it is a little bit unpleasant because the protagonist's system is called [Peerless Talented Girl Training System], which makes me unconsciously think that talented girls should have Our own works should not all be copied, but we all know that whatever the protagonist writes is actually written by the author. We cannot ask the author to write a novel, but also to create various literary works. Therefore, I feel that even if the protagonist's system is called [Entertainment God System], it simply transfers works from the original world, and it will not make me have this strange feeling. The above is purely personal opinion, I hope the author will not be offended.

I wish the author good results with this debut book

It's not bad. Except for what is said in the novel, the novels from the original world are moved to this world, and the author himself also mentioned that it is a novel after the magic transformation. Personally speaking, if it is the original work, it would be fine, but I don't like it very much if it is a bit changed by the magic transformation. But the author has never written a boyfriend for Lin Zhenzhen from the beginning to the present, which I quite like. After all, if a boy travels through time to become a girl and then finds a boyfriend, I quite agree with this mentality.

Keep up the good work. Generally novels of this type. I don't really like adding men to cook. I feel that as long as Yi adds men to cook and women to cook, it will decrease. Instead, don't join. The male cooking could be slightly better. Of course this is purely my personal opinion. Don't like it, don't spray it.

The fact that those three pornographic women secretly took photos of the heroine made me feel that my outlook on life was shocked.

Still need some emotional route, otherwise it will feel dry

I feel pretty good, but if the writing is not good later, I will change the review This gets worse the more you write it.

Very good. I hope the heroine will go all the way to the end. She can have sisters instead of men. Thank you.

It's very nice, but it's a little sparse. There's also a pitfall that the author forgot to fill in. The author's vest, which says my senior brother is too stable, has never appeared at all later.

The plot is good, but sometimes the writing about royalties, film and television copyrights, and song copyrights is not very good. You can buy singing rights for songs, and keep the copyright for yourself, or keep part of the copyright, not to mention the film and television rights. They are sold too cheaply. The popular book sells for 3.5 Million, which is simply for nothing. Apart from these, everything else is very good. The girls' psychology and getting along with the best friends are very good. Five-star praise, super exciting

I won't give this book too much evaluation, because it's a book I found when I was in a book shortage. Generally speaking, it's okay. It's not a slap in the face or anything like that. It can be said that it's more daily-oriented. I recommend it to people who are in a book shortage to read it. Some people may not be used to it.

Five-star praise, I give it to you directly, it is well written, as the title says, the heroine only cares about her career, it was okay at first. Later, when I saw that the protagonist's friends were all in love and got married, it was a bit uncomfortable for the protagonist to be alone. However, I personally think that the author should arrange a younger brother or younger sister for the protagonist. It seems that the protagonist's parents can at least raise a grandson or granddaughter. The protagonist is such a single child [crying] All in all, it's good. The only bad thing is that there is no younger brother or sister for the protagonist, so that the parents will not be so pressurized to get married. When I think of the protagonist's parents looking at other people's grandchildren, The granddaughter should also have a moment of envy. I think the protagonist and Bai Wei are good. I think Bai Wei is somewhat interested in the protagonist. After all, they secretly kissed each other while the protagonist was sleeping. But it is different to arrange a younger brother and sister for the protagonist. When they get married, the protagonist concentrates on his career, and then the protagonist leaves. When the time comes, all her property will be passed on to the children of her younger siblings. Moreover, the protagonist's parents will not feel bored (┯_┯) It's a pity that it's too late and it's over. But there can still be a spin-off or something. I hope the protagonist can get together with Bai Wei and use current technology to create a child.

So why are all the articles written about foreign countries? Logically speaking, foreign novels shouldn't be started at a later stage, and do people really read the Frozen novel? [What] I don't think many people will read it.

Beautiful, this is one of the few books that I can read from beginning to end without stopping.

This book is the smoothest I have read here, and the plot is not awkward. It is the second time I give it 5 stars! The last time I gave it 5 stars, it was because the author didn't give the book a complete set of cultivation levels!

In the first half of the book, the heroine is still in her first year of college. The writing is light and smooth, without any cruelty, and it reads comfortably, like light prose. Probably a female author.

Awesome. So awesome.

Why is it gone? I should continue and write a little more. I feel like I haven't had enough of it yet, so I'm done with it.

Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee

It looks good. It would be nice if the main character is Lily.

Not bad, but the ending is a little rushed