Immortal Emperor Hongmeng

To be honest, the writing is very poor... If you can't write something funny about driving, just give up. It would be awkward to force it on The article is very messy and rough, just like tap water, no matter how hard it is, it is still tap water. I can't read it anymore.

It's just so so, the writing style needs to be improved... A pig's trotters who have been born in two lives have no different ideas from those of a man born in one life! There is also the issue of the technique. Since it is a needle, it should not be able to condense only one! In just a few dozen chapters, he has already completed two levels of cultivation, which means that his technique is only average! And the description of the characters is really... I am also speechless [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

It was going well before, but suddenly the devil appeared. It was really the beginning of rubbish works. It was unbearable.

Good looking, not bad