Super Beast Arms: I Saved the Phoenix at the Beginning

The writing is okay. If there is no problem with the writing, it will be a good book.

This is the best Super Beast fanfic I have ever seen. The protagonist is well portrayed. Watching him become stronger step by step gives me a feeling of cultivation. I am looking forward to the emotional line with Feng Ying and the ending of Pluto and Snow Queen.

This is the best one I've ever read among Super Beast Arms fanfics. I hope it won't stop updating [Salute]

It is almost the best among Super Beast fanfics. The world view and plot are quite consistent, the system has a weak sense of presence, and the plot is exciting. I don't know why the rating is so low.

This book is quite good. To be honest, there is very little fan fiction in Super Beast Arms, and some of them are not good to read. This one is pretty good, and the system is not too abnormal. Simply put, it is just like copying a wind medicine.

When I first read the comments, some people liked it and some people disliked it, which actually made me a little worried. After reading it, I personally feel pretty good. Five stars. Only if you are not a holy mother and decisive are you worthy of reading. If you are not a mother-in-law and are not literary, then you are a good author. The last sentence: Update quickly [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It's well written, very good. At least it looks good to me. Everyone has different preferences. If you don't like it, don't read it. There's no need to shout about it, it's like there's something wrong with it. Author, this book is pretty good, keep it up [Upvote]

This is one of the more interesting Super Beast fanfics. The overall character of the characters feels good and full. However, the character image cannot be written in one piece. It must also have its shortcomings to make the characters flesh and blood. Generally speaking, the writer's writing style is very good.

Brother, I'm here to restore your health. The character design is fine, but what's wrong with the cool protagonist being awesome? Just look comfortable. It's normal to be trolls. The more ignorant a person is, the more inexplicable self-confidence they have (taken from teacher Luo Xiang) [laughs]. I don't comment much, the worst is 3 stars. I also mentioned the advantages and disadvantages of the three stars, so everyone should treat them rationally (the desire to survive is very strong)

This book is the best super beast fanfic I have read so far. Although there are many stories about Pluto's brother and relatives, I don't know why your book stood out to me. Your book may be a good handler of details, or something else that I can't say, but it may also be that the current chapters are a bit short, because everyone knows that some novels are very exciting at the beginning but become very ordinary and boring at the end, so I can only give my current evaluation. Your book is very good. Let's talk about a topic that has nothing to do with this. Author, have you ever thought about the limitations of writing fan fiction? Super Beast only has more than 60 episodes. These sixty-odd episodes have been written, plus your imagination. I have seen fan fiction written in no more than 500 chapters before it is finished. One suggestion I would like to make is that the author should consider finishing this novel perfectly, and then write a novel that is completely thought up and written by himself. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. Finally, I would like to say a word of encouragement to the author! Come on! Come on! [Praise]

Well written. The content is very good. Too bad it's not the harem type. Goodbye. Five stars for delivery

I saw the part about killing the Snow Emperor, and I skipped and read some more later (it seemed like there was content about the second setting in the back, so I didn't read it). I personally like to read cool fan fiction, and I think the previous part is very interesting [Sending my heart to you]

It's really good, except for the ending that may be a little off-putting, a little bit off, and a little bit off, that is, it's simple, but the rest can only be said to be too perfect. Highly recommended, really, and it has a very blue arc style, which matches the original style of Super Beast Arms very well. Recommend! Recommend! Recommend! I was very touched after reading it, but (why didn't you take Long Ying in for a pinch?) Just kidding, the author must have his own ideas. Summary: Recommend, highly recommend, not trust. (Read it on January 25, 2025, and the flowers are finished!) [Learned]

It's great, I want to go in and beat Guigu to death [angry][angry]

(I read the whole novel on my watch) It's really good to read, it's very consistent with the original work, and I'm particularly surprised by the final continuation. The author's writing is very logical, everything follows an organic process, and it's laid out layer by layer. The more I read, the more I get hooked. After reading this, I looked at other similar fan stories, and I couldn't eat pig food anymore. The attack on the ghost clan turned out to be all a conspiracy by the Heart of the Universe. There was no system at all. The god took off his mask and it was the same as the protagonist's, and the original body was a copy of the god. It was so shocking. I highly recommend it to the best novel. After reading it, I became the author's dog [shy]

It's very interesting, the plot is very interesting. I give it full marks. The author doesn't need to thank me. But, why can't Snow Emperor be Tianyao's fiancée? I don't know, good-looking girls should be with people who match his looks. Only in this way can one really be called a talented man and a beautiful woman. It's just a pity. Author, why don't you let Snow Emperor and Tianyao be together? Because they are really talented and beautiful. What a pity, come on, author!

It feels so much like Super Beast. When I first watched Super Beast, I liked Pluto the most. However, when reading this kind of book, you cannot read it as a so-called refreshing article. Otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch. You still have to read with your brain in mind.

It's not bad. I haven't read many Super Beast Arms books. The plot of Super Beast Arms itself is a closed loop of time and space, so it's quite rigid. Sometimes I can't understand the protagonist's operations, but it's still pretty good and highly recommended.

Super Beast Arms is really a childhood drama. When I was young, there were no entertainment projects. I watched Super Beast Arms over and over again. I loved it. At the same time, I didn't understand the philosophy in it before, but it's really good to read it and read it again now. Author, I am very optimistic about you. It may seem a little awkward to say it, but after all, Super Beast Arms is a closed time loop. This is normal, so come on, author.

This is my first time watching a super beast armed genre. I have a comment that the author's writing is really good, and it fulfills my childhood dream. The character descriptions and the finish are not bad, it's very good! Okay, there's not much else to say, you'll know it by yourself after reading it, I'm going to find something else hahahaha But I think it's okay [laughing]

It's really good. I read it in one sitting. It's not enough. I'll update it quickly. Thank you to the author. Come on, Oli! ! ! ! !

5 Stars. Many places are forcibly restored in order to restore the plot. They are just slightly modified from the original work. It is a bit toxic. I don't know what will happen next. I give up decisively while I still have fantasy.

It's very interesting. This is the first book I've read about super beast weapons. I think it's very interesting.

Good reviews, but in the end it's a bit of a pity that the original protagonist group didn't have any scenes. But overall, the characters are plump and reasonable (in line with everyone's understanding of the characters in the original plot), and the plot is full of suspense (for those who are in the story, the protagonist is synonymous with surprise). The ending is also satisfactory.

The previous chapters are all very good. I saw the place where Gui Gu was written, and I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist knew exactly what Gui Gu would do, so the easiest thing to do was to take someone to see it. It wouldn't be great. He always went alone, and he went to fight Gui Gu alone. Gui Gu was also a fool. The villain died because he talked too much. It was well written. Come on, the mountains and rivers will meet [cool]

The overall story is well written. The protagonist Tianyao is a person with a good personality. The overall restoration of the original story is very good and makes up for some of the regrets of the original animation. The framework of the story becomes larger and larger as it is written, the layout is grand, and the story is highly complete. Friends who like books can read it

This book is really good to read. Ever since I found Super Beast Arms and read it for a while, I felt that I no longer had the feeling of childhood. However, this book gave me enough imagination to help me find the feeling of childhood. Although it is a fan book, it is really worth reading to find the feeling of childhood [full] [full]

This is the longest super beast fanfic I've ever read, and the quality is pretty good. It's a big deal [shy]

It looks pretty good. I'll wait until I finish reading the ending before reviewing it. I can only say that it's difficult to write a story about super beast weapons. I can only say that a large part of the bad points mentioned in the review come from the animation itself, which is really difficult to write. As a fanfic, this article is really good, and there is a reason for the high score. After Chapter 219, it is a continuation of the original plot. It is quite satisfactory and not too bad. You can watch it. If you don't like it, you can skip reading it. To be fair, it's a good book and worth reading in this circle.

It's rare to see a book about Super Beast Arms, and it's very interesting! Wow wow wow Pluto's quotes are really cool.