穿成魔头亲妹，谨慎一点怎么了？

2022-11.12 The book discovered [note]/very novel plot. I hope I can grow up quickly, because there are too few, and if I chase you, I may lose my pieces [laughing and crying], I will give you more fertilizer, and you will grow more quickly [full] [full] [note]

It's pretty good-looking. The heroine's personality is very good. She's cold and has no part in the heroine's team. It's perfect~ Especially the brother. The real brother-sister relationship really pokes me. Is there no cp? I just want to see the sweetness of brother and sister, and I don't want to watch love. Author, please update

I have been watching it for about two hours now, and I have seen the latest chapter without skipping a chapter! I really like Shu Shu [love]. I really like her character, which is neither humble nor overbearing. She is low-key and cautious in her words and deeds. I am really super super super such a girl. Even though all the comments in the barrage were scolding her, she tried hard to find important plot clues and cared about the safety of her family. Some of the people she met were very good, and some were very bad. Maybe because people themselves are a body of contradictions, and some of them had very expressive reasons... Or maybe it was about their personalities! But I think it's quite normal [shy] After all, in my mind, the characters in the book can be as vivid as human beings, and I don't think they should be defined [a bit of nonsense hehe (´͈ ᗜ `͈)]] In short, cheers to the author! Pay attention to your health and take rest (´`p[💕o｡ιον∈｡o💕]q

I love it so much. This kind of subject is really interesting. The heroine is not told directly about the plot, but is made to speculate little by little through the barrage. It is not a blindly enjoyable read. Who doesn't love the growth story? Also, the heroine's brother is in love! The goal of doting on the sister is to protect the sister, but the heroine's cultivation seems to be higher than her brother (Brother: "I want to protect my sister" Heroine: "Brother, calm down, let me protect you~") Finally, I hope the author writes better and better!!! Come on, author!

It's really good to watch, the plot is exciting, and it doesn't feel boring, and it doesn't feel boring. It's very good to watch. The heroine really has a good outlook on life. I hope the author will continue to be [shy][shy] and not do anything artificial in order to highlight the character of the heroine. I also hope that the character can be maintained, so don't write it down. It's really nice to watch. [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Admiration] [Admiration] [Admiration] I highly recommend you come and take a look. There is a sister-controlled brother and a master who dotes on his apprentice, Ao, and there is also a senior brother Ao who really loves [Admiration] [Admiration] [Flowing kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Smirking] [Smirking] [Smirking]

So far, it's pretty interesting. The storyline is pretty good. I just hope the author can write less barrages that insult the heroine (personal opinion). I recommend you give it a look [Note]

It's been a long time since I've seen such an eye-catching novel about cultivating immortals. The heroine is really awesome and careful enough not to leave any clues to others. It's rare to see a heroine in a novel about cultivating immortals who is so careful. I really love this writing style. This heroine in cultivating immortals is at least in the top three in my mind. Author, cheers for more updates

Looks good, update soon Regarding what people say about the original heroine and the current heroine, the character of the original heroine is kind and so on. The current heroine is a modern fetus, and what should belong to her becomes an opportunity for others. It is normal for the original heroine to be angry and have inner demons, and she also knows that the inner demons will affect her practice. Not surprisingly, the original heroine in the plot of the original book should be such a kind, scheming, and just a very small Bailian. The characters of the current heroine and the original heroine are completely different. I don't think there's anything wrong with discrediting the original heroine. I think it's pretty good. Let me express my opinion. First of all, if you don't like reading it, don't read it. Who would be disgusted? After ten years of reading novels, first praising and then denigrating, I will really laugh. I won't say who it is, just to make the ratings funny. I am a freshman in high school and I have been reading romance novels since the first grade of junior high school, mainly fantasy fairy tales, time travel, etc. This book is very well written, please don't make the comment section so chaotic. I feel so comfortable after finally finishing a book. I am waiting for updates. It depicts the heroine obtaining what she has through her own hard work. She is calm, careful, beautiful but low-key. She is kind, but she doesn't know how to measure and know what to choose. I know that everyone doesn't like to read articles where the original heroine is outwitted because of the new heroine. However, in this article, the original heroine is not outwitted. The original heroine has her own scheming. She is originally kind and half-hearted, but because of the surrounding environment and I don't have any likes and dislikes with the current heroine, and I even feel a little disgusted with her. This is normal. Everyone has jealousy. If I am someone who is often praised, but one day someone else takes away what originally belongs to me, I will be angry. What's there to say? I want to say that not everyone is perfect. For example, many people hate love brains, but sometimes they do some things without knowing that they are one of them. Everyone can't smile and say congratulations after their things are taken away by others, right? The original heroine didn't become wise because of this, which I think is pretty good. This book made me feel that the heroine can live a good life even without a male protagonist. She changed her destiny, got a master who loves her, and has a group of friends, which is pretty good. Some people say that other people's heroines are disgusting when they can't appreciate them themselves. Can I understand that you are even more disgusting if you don't abide by their rules in other people's worlds? I can't even let out a bad breath without scolding.

I quite like it [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] The writing is really good, some plots are written that I really hate, which just shows the author's good writing skills [Flowing kiss] Jiang Yunnuo, the original heroine, the more I read it, the more I hate it, it's really written vividly, otherwise I wouldn't hate it [face covering] I really like the outlook and character of the current heroine [Love] It's good. Some of the barrages are so bad that I skipped them while watching. Some of them don't need to be skipped to know the plot. [Sneaky laugh] I really like it. Although I haven't seen much, it suits my taste very much [shy] Even though rice balls are mythical beasts, they are so cute [sending my heart] Now the heroine's brother likes them so much, it would be great if my brother did the same [shy] @ I like them very much [making faces] [shy] Oops, it's really too little. I've been saving up for several months [grievance] before I can save 100 chapters. I need more chapters [grievance]

This book is really good. I have never read a novel with this kind of setting. The barrage is really novel. I was attracted to it. Then I read the content. Wow, it's really good. 🎉Recommendation index:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 🌈💫1. The heroine is ambitious, neither silly nor sweet nor Mary Sue, very nice 🌈💫2. I think I haven't seen the male protagonist so far, so I begged the author not to have a male protagonist. 🌈💫3. Secondly, I want to say that the mythical beast White Tiger is really cute, and I really like it very much. My brother is so kind to the heroine, right? 🌈💫4. The plot is also very good. The heroine's outlook is really good. I look forward to the follow-up. 🌈💫5. Finally and the most important point, I want to express my gratitude to the author. I love you, author. Thank you for writing such a good article. Anyway, I will definitely follow it to the end. 🌈♥️Love you mum٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

It's really good-looking. It's the first unique book I've read. It's really good-looking, and the heroine is smart and calm. Ahhhh, it's so good-looking (at this time, I was like [admiration] [admiration] [blowing kiss] [shy]), but when I saw that it had only been updated to chapter 70 (I was like [crying] [crazy] [crazy])

It's pretty good. Among the many books with original male and female protagonists, it's a good and excellent book. It focuses on personal growth. The original male and female protagonists are not the kind of mindless plots. And even if the framework of the original male and female protagonists is put aside, this book is also a good female protagonist who cultivates immortality. It's just too short. I finished it in one go [laughing and crying] Is there CP, or does the heroine have many emotional lines?

Nice! The subject matter of this book is novel and fascinating (●´ω｀●)ゞThe heroine's character is not pretentious, she is not a virgin, and she remains wary of everyone and everything. He is also very friendly and generous to people who are firmly on his side, but he will not give away things for free, but will sell things that others need for profit. When there are people or demons that threaten you, you will cut through the mess quickly without dragging down those around you. If you encounter something that you cannot solve yourself, you will decisively challenge others and will never take risks alone. The brother also cares for the heroine very much. He always thinks of his sister first when he encounters anything. He is a real sister-controller. Also, I hope it will be updated soon and more updates! Not enough இдஇ

It's so beautiful, the heroine is pregnant. Suddenly found that he was in the world of cultivating immortals, and changed the tragic death of his family being exterminated. I went to the Immortal Sect with my brother to cultivate immortality, and I really took it seriously. They are all about the daily life of cultivating immortals, which are very ordinary and very immersive. [Shy][shy]

I have read many similar articles about female supporting characters cultivating immortality, but this one is unique. At first, I watched the heroine get the system. The system protected the heroine like a cub, and I felt confused. But both the subsequent development and the character of the heroine are very attractive to me. The heroine has a very upright outlook on life and can clearly see grudges. Especially when the heroine's master used the illusion to investigate, he could clearly distinguish the difference between the heroine and the previous heroine. When the novel evolved into reality, the darkness of the original heroine that was unknown to the audience was exposed. Each person's character is very distinct. The following past and present life shocked me even more. After reading the whole article, I have a sense of logic and no loopholes. But when I saw it later, there were almost no comments. Why aren't there many people for such a good deed?

From the way the heroine conducts herself, it can be seen that she has an attitude of not offending others unless she offends me. The heroine has a good personality and does not overflow with the mother's heart. This is the type that I prefer. And judging from the type of novel, I have never read the barrage system of cultivating immortals. It is very attractive. I have been reading the latest chapter and I think it is quite interesting. I recommend everyone to read it. I hope this book is a big hit and the author is a big fan🔥, come on≯∪≮! [Love][Please update]

Highly recommended, the subject matter is great, the writing is sophisticated, the heroine has a good personality, she is never disturbed by external things, and she takes action when it's time to take action. The original heroine looks good at the moment, but I don't know how it will develop in the future. The author will give it a thumbs up [Top post][Top post]

I have read Chapter 152 so far, no CP, the new heroine's character is independent and self-reliant, her IQ and EQ are online~ It's worth falling into trouble~ [Like]

Woohoo [almost crying], it's so beautiful. Jin Shu's careful, strong, and hard-working character is simply amazing. Jin Mu's character of loving his parents and sister, studying hard, and not being afraid of hardship really struck a chord with me. Master Wan Changsheng loves his disciples like sons and protects the younger ones. Rice Ball (Supervisor) is cute, straightforward and can protect his friends. Meng Zhang, Ling Guang, Master Xiang... There are so many harmonious, amiable and interesting characters. They have different experiences and different ideas, but they all work together for the same goal of resisting the demons [Love] In fact, overall there are still some shortcomings, but as the first book written by Xingxing Mili, this is already very good. I hope that Xingxing Mili will continue to work hard and write better works [Love]

I haven't had this feeling of reading it all in one go for a long time! ! ! Thank you for this book (it is short) with a very clear and attractive plot. The heroine is also very decisive in all aspects. The experience of getting stronger step by step will not make people bored. I really like the brother who has a sister-controlling brother! ! ! ! Give me a dozen! ! (Although I am a boy, my younger brother is also very good? [Eating melon])

Great support, author. This is my first time to write a book review because it is really good. I saw you replying to netizens before and said that many people scolded it, which made me a little unconfident (it's been a while, so I can't remember clearly). In fact, everyone has different tastes in reading books. Don't take it too seriously if you read bad reviews. There are many lovely readers who support you. Also, a small suggestion. If the author stops updating frequently, readers will run away, which is not conducive to increasing reader stickiness. Even if he updates one or two chapters a day, it is good. Let's talk about the book itself. The heroine is very smart, the character is very good, and the relationship between the brother and sister is very attractive. In short, the author has great faith in himself and this book will definitely get better and better. Come on [sending heartfelt wishes]

The heroine has very upright views. This is the only thing I remember deeply. Although she doesn't deal with people very much, it is also a way to protect herself. She also needs a backer during the integration period, so there is no need to please anyone. The only thing is to brush up attribute points. I read the comments before and said that the heroine is pretentious. If she doesn't contract, Fantuan will be snatched away by the original heroine. In fact, I think the character of the heroine, as long as Fantuan is willing to leave, she will most likely not stop it, let alone If you feel that this is yours, you should keep it close to you. The heroine has a Buddhist-like personality and is quiet, which is also the personality of many girls in reality. Quiet people generally don't want to deal with relationships. If they are good to me, they will be good to others. If they are not good to me, I don't care. As long as the bottom line is not touched, the heroine will not pay attention to it. Generally speaking, the three views really poked at me. I followed it a few days ago, but now that I have finished watching it, I suddenly feel that I can't read the rest.

Overall [thinking], this novel is currently on my radar for reading. I don't know what the plot will be like in the future, but the content I've watched so far is very good. The image of the original heroine is a bit flawed in the text, but not much. The cohesion is very strong [like], if you don't read it one by one, you will not understand some parts. There will be character issues, but if you look at them one by one, you will find that the writing is very good and there are no problems. When I see some foreshadowing, I will be very excited [to send my heart]. Combining some of the foreshadowing seen above, I can guess the general content. After I saw a foreshadowing and guessed the content of a section, and then saw the content of the section below, I was very excited when I guessed a little bit correctly [sent my heart]. All in all, take your time and look at it, the more you look at it, the better it will look. [Like][Like][Like]

Generally speaking, it's okay. The female videos are pretty good. However, the characters in female videos have one big thing in common, that is, the supporting characters are all too lacking in love. As long as the protagonist exudes a little kindness or helps, he will start to be devoted to the protagonist. This is This kind of character design is too childish, and male channels do better in this regard. Every character is both good and evil, which makes people hate it and like it. But female channels are all written like this, so it doesn't matter. Female channels write about the world of dreams, while male channels write about the real world. Another point is that this book is not an orthodox version of Cultivation of Immortals. When I wrote more than 200 chapters, the protagonist progressed so fast that I was worried that the protagonist's foundation was not solid when I read it. So I didn't want to read it. I felt that it started to become boring after more than 200 chapters. But it is undeniable that this book is actually quite good, so I still give it five stars, but for me it is not the best one yet. However, this is the author's first book, and maybe there will be improvement in the next book. I will read the next one.

Super pretty! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a logical and determined heroine who practices fairy tales. Goldfinger also added barrage content that is very fresh and eight mistakes. The author also has a little humor in the text, and it is occasionally very cheerful and funny. The villain is not always evil to the end, and seems to be decent but has hidden secrets. It depends on the individual's choice. The author is so good at writing!

It's not bad. It's a solid and enjoyable story. The heroine is just an ordinary person with a firm mind. She's not too saintly or too ruthless, but there isn't any highlight character. I only read it after reading the reviews that said there were group portraits. The result was average, but group portraits are really difficult to write. It can be seen that the author is a master of emotional dramas. The description of emotions is really a bit confusing, and the rhythm is also cliché and a bit anxious. The ending is a bit boring. There is a lot of jabbering in the front to foreshadow how awesome this is and how awesome that is, but in the end, the one who died with a slap in the face was dead in love. Is it a bit boring? The writing is ok, the flow of the plot is ok, and the settings are ok. It's a pity that this emotional drama is so lame. In order to show that the heroine is self-taught, the master-disciple relationship has become a companionship where you occasionally help me and I occasionally help you, and the master and apprentice have to get along day and night! The relationship between brother and sister has turned into an inexplicable one where I can sacrifice myself for you and dote on my sister for no reason. If you want to write about it, just write that the brother brought back a gift that the sister likes. The sister avoids the gift and directly throws herself into the arms of her brother! If you want to write, just write that my brother feels that his parents love his sister, but he feels a slight difference but is cured by his sister! As if there is nothing else but sacrifice and giving, the brothers and sisters have to fight! There's going to be a quarrel! To misunderstand! Need an explanation! They also need to complement each other! My brother always felt guilty for not being able to help, and then occasionally helped a few times, without any highlights. . When writing about brothers and sisters, you should write about complementing each other! What does it mean for a mythical beast to change gender for love? If you want to write about it, just write that mythical beasts have no gender. Since they are gods, they have no gender. The love of gods means not caring about everything, pure soul blending! In fact, I don't really care about the details of the emotional scenes. But for the first time, I was a little disappointed when I saw that every emotion was stingy. It can be done better. Overall good, but has shortcomings. . .

It's a pretty good book. After all, the author is a newbie, so many parts are understandable. For example, the plot may be a bit cliche, and the villain's hatred is completely understandable. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book is very interesting (⑉°з°)-♡ I wonder why the score is so low Coming from a novel, it really gets better and better the more I read it, the heroine's character is so perfect. Act decisively and be calm in situations. Not only beauties but also curls. Hehe, my ideal heroine. Come on, author, the writing is very good! ! !

I like it very much 💕, I hope there is no cp, I feel that adding cp to the heroine is a bit redundant, wow, my brother is very good, very good, no need for a male protagonist, ahhhh, no, ahhhh, the author, please come on, ohhhh, my cp is zero! ! !

The writing is super good. It breaks the previous prejudice against demons in the world of immortality. The two have different paths and do not conspire with each other. Instead, they are evil cultivators who can be punished because their cultivation methods are extremely cruel and usually require human lives as sacrifices, so they are hunted and killed. The heroine is also not indecisive, adhering to the attitude that I will not offend others unless they offend me, but if someone offends me, I will punish them. People who are kind to themselves will not show affection to others at first, but they will repay others. Later, they will gradually become affectionate to each other, and they will have great trust in each other. And for one's own enemies or enemies that will threaten one's life in the future, they will also eradicate them without giving the other party a chance to develop. I really love this kind of heroine [admiration] I hope the author will update more, come on [blowing kiss]