Doomsday: I Stockpiled a Trillion in Supplies to Build a Super Shelter

The scale is a little too high. You don't have to save people, you can still kill those who pose a threat, but what's the difference between simply killing and killing animals?

After reading Chapter 10, if the protagonist doesn't like little girls, then don't write about it in the book, and replace it with the old aunt's 30-60! It was boring to watch, so I slipped away.

The more I write, the worse it becomes. Why is it that the novel is so beautiful at the beginning, but the more I write, the more rubbish it becomes?

Then can your book be written like this? You torture and kill children at the beginning. I have read so many doomsday books. This book of yours is definitely not the Holy Mother.

It feels like being reborn and beating everything at full level within a year 🤦 🤦