The Strongest Dad Asks for Protection [Online Game]

Overall, I feel it's okay, the characters all have their own characteristics, and there's no virginity or excessive entanglement (referring to the male protagonist treating others). It's just that the ending is unfinished (because the ending is very sudden, probably because the author couldn't continue writing or something). I feel that I should finish the last bit, and write two or three more chapters before the ending is so low. It's a HE cookie, and there's almost no abuse (I don't think it's abuse at all). If you like the setting, you can give it a try.

After reading it, I think the ending is biased toward oe. Liuchuan may let go of the past and start a new chapter. Yubao and Brother Xu will overcome the hurdle of the Ning family and stay together. Han Bao and Brother Qiu will also stay together. Langlang and Xiaohei... Generally speaking, the characters are well created. Some people say that the ending is a bit hasty, but I think it's okay. It gives people unlimited imagination, and I don't think it's finished. It mainly talks about things in real life. After all, this is an online game-type novel (please don't criticize your personal opinions≧≦)

This is currently the most interesting drama novel I have read in 🍅, but in the end, the author didn't consider giving a happy ending [crying] Give me a five-star review, can the author write another side story? QAQ [crying]

I love every character's personality! The story is also very interesting to me! It would have been better if the writing was more detailed. The ending shouldn't be like that. It sucked. It's a pity, a pity! ! There is nothing I can do. I hope Xu Yu will be fine for once! Goodbye Some plots are better detailed, and the ending comes very suddenly. I heard that the finished story cannot be changed. It's really a pity. I really like to read online game and e-sports stories. Woohoo, it's gone.

I really like the online game articles. I like the game introduction, real-life meeting, and character setting. But the ending is so rushed [crying] has Rukawa put it down? Will Yimijiu and Sangha get together? [Staring] There is also the ring ring of Yuzai's father. The ring ring! ! ! ! ! And a wedding! ! ! ! Have you received the certificate? [Crying] And has the love token given by Yuzai's mother been repaired? [Crying] And has Ning left the Ning family? Will he set up a big company to raise Yuzai? [I'm about to cry] Wowoooooooooooooooo ending [I'm about to cry]

My first online game article is the pinnacle in my mind. I have never been exposed to online games, but this book put all the analysis of online games in front of me, which aroused my great interest in online games, so I also played a little bit, but the degree of freedom is not as high as in the article. This book has the charm that makes me read. I am very fascinated by the detailed description of the characters and the ups and downs of the charm. However, the biggest flaw of this article is the ending. It is too sloppy. The author's writing style must not be unable to write the ending. As a reader, I don't think much about it, and I am not even qualified to explore. If the author can add extra chapters in the future, it will push this article to a new height. That's all. I will add more when I think of it in the future.

I think this book deserves this score. After reading Tomato for so long, it is easy to become short of books. It is even harder to find one that suits your appetite. This book is really super good. A friend of mine once said that you can't read ratings when reading books in Tomato. That's right. Don't miss out on this treasure just because of the rating. Overall, the plot is very smooth, and all the foreshadowing and pitfalls are filled in. The ending is a bit sudden but also a bit natural. Young people should be wanton and free-spirited, and there is nothing wrong with seeking a way out for their own future. If your family has always been just a chain that binds you and treats you as a merchant of goods, then I think you can let go of this relationship and start over, and your life will be better. People often say that family is a safe haven, but in Master Ling's eyes, family members are like snakes and scorpions. Without love, they will only bite you when you are helpless. For Mr. Ling, fish are the only light in his life, just like the twinkling stars in the dark night. And that star is flying towards him. He is not a little pitiful person who is not loved by others. He is also protected by others. Some people stand up for him, some shed tears for him, and some people ignore the worldly vision and are not afraid of the confusion in the future. I wish them a bright future, a smooth road ahead, and a life of health and happiness.

It's a very interesting online game novel. To be honest, the ending part is a bit cool, but I was caught off guard and the main text ended. Many things have not yet been explained, such as letting the dad escape from the shackles of the family, the wedding of the two (in real life and in the game), and the story of Chuan Hesang, the 190 ancient style beauty, Han He's black name... I hope I can see the extras in my lifetime. The author's personal interface seems to be different🤔It won't run away💔

When I first watched it, it was only about 8:00, so I didn't have high hopes. But the early part was really well written. Unfortunately, the ending was too hasty and ended inexplicably. But overall, it was pretty good. I give it four stars.

Super invincible and beautiful! We have almost watched the finale, and I really want to know how bad it is. But everything is going well so far, and it is very, very good-looking. I feel that the sub-CP is very good ~ Qiu Ye 99 ~ (Chi v Chi) The plot is also very good. Except for a certain river that is difficult to comment on, I think the rest are very, very good! ! But I still wonder whether Yu Zai has feelings for this Rukawa? Is it because I said before that Yu Zai asked Rukawa to wait? Then if Rukawa had waited, they wouldn't have been successful, right? And I feel like what Yu Zai does to Rukawa is really ambiguous. . . It's hard to comment on the emotional dispute between the two of them (⋟⋞), but in the end, they ended up with 99 ducks⊙∀⊙!

It looks good and the author also writes it well, but the ending is a bit rushed. I feel that their story is not finished here and can be continued later. He is his god, his god has caught him, and he has caught his god... The rest of their lives have a long way to go. They can break through all difficulties and feel the life they long for without being bound by anything. Finally, I wish them eternal happiness, and also wish CP eternal happiness. @Shangguantaxin

I really like online game novels. The daily relationship between the two protagonists is also very sweet and comfortable. The secondary CP is as annoying as the main CP. The ending is a bit rushed, but it is indeed biased. I really like wwwwww Yuyu is really cute wwww

I really enjoyed this book after reading it in one go. I was attracted by the online game. The more I read, the more addicted I became. I have been reading from 6 o'clock to now. I am also very confused when I saw the ending. This book should not have been finished at this time. The previous holes were dug and not fixed. The ending seems to be open-ended, but to be honest, it is a bit unfinished. [I'm about to cry] I haven't seen them get married. It's such a pity. Author, I kneel down and beg you if you can write a sequel.

Ah! ! Knock on what you like! I haven't finished it yet but it's so sweet! ! I like it so much! ! I love you so much! ! ! I kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss! Why 🍅 can't I express my love for you in a voice or text? (Ah! Scream like crazy!) The ending is a bit unsatisfying. It makes me feel itchy to watch it. I still want to watch it [Sending my heart]

It's really good. I'll go, but I suddenly saw the ending. I was so angry. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Why, so suddenly, there's not even an extra episode. Sister, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please sister, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm covered in ants. I'm shaking. I can't breathe. Please, sister, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, sister, really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. Sister, are you okay? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It's so beautiful, why don't you finish it? [Crying] What happened next? Did you escape capture? Has Ning ever left that home? Are they married? I want to see the complete ending [crying] [crying] [crying] Even if the fish daddy seizes on the Ning family company and bankrupts it, then Ning can get married with Yu Yu [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

The online game part was well written, but it ended so suddenly. I feel like there should be a second part.

It's very interesting, but the sudden ending is a bit confusing. I really want the author to make more updates... I think this story should be over for us, but then I think about it, not for them, their story will continue to develop. Whether Brother Chuan has let go of his last obsession, whether Xiaoyu and Brother Xu can escape Ning's father and be together, it is similar to an open ending, but I hope it is good, and there must be a good ending! ! Finally, it's really beautiful, highly recommended! !

I thought about reading the comment section only after I was halfway through it. Everyone in the comment section said it was a mess. I really thought the first part was so good that I didn't give up. I'll give it a try after reading it. In fact, it's not a bad ending. I think the ending is okay. It has a sense of oe that it ended abruptly. The author probably couldn't think of how to deal with the bad things at home and didn't know how to solve them, but he said he was willing. The only fly in the ointment is that many details and foreshadowing are not explained. I am still looking forward to the follow-up of Little Alpaca and the live broadcast.

It's really beautiful, everyone should come and see it! ! ! It's really beautiful, but why is it so bad? ! You can't live with ten or twenty articles! ! [Crying] Wait for the author to open a new article and continue to update! ! ! !

Super pretty! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] But the ending is a little rushed. Wish them happiness! [Sending Hearts]

I really like this kind of writing. Things are ups and downs. Although it was written in 22 years, I still felt it was very novel when I read it in 26 years. I liked it very much. This article is almost controlled, but I really like Yuyu and Xu Xu and there are many people in the article. Although the ending is a bit rushed and makes me feel a little empty, I still want to say it is a fairy tale! I like it so much!

It looks good, although some parts are not finished, which is a pity, but the overall writing is good, and some people have changed their views on e-sports writing.

Four points One point for writing. One point for character. One point for plot. One point for emotion. One point is deducted because there is no extra story and there is no complete explanation at the end. But online games are great, and I will always love keyboard online games.

The reason for the low rating is because it's poorly finished, but the author's writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities, each named character has his or her own personality, the plot is reasonable, and the story flows smoothly. It just ended too hastily, maybe the author had something to do... I read too many articles and am very picky about the writing style. This is the first article I have reviewed for a book, which is a pity. I hope the author can fill it in when he is free in the future.

It's beautiful. That's why it suddenly turned into more than 2,000 when it was over 3,000. I wonder where you went at the end? I beg you to give me a good look at it. I really want to see it. Oh, it seems to be stuck, but the ending is the same. I want to watch the extra, please.

Recommended. It is a rare and good-looking online game article. It contains game content and real-life stories. Unfortunately, it feels like there is still a lot of content that has not been completed, so it ended in a hurry. The current rating is indeed low.

This book is really good! At first, I couldn't tell the difference between Yu Zai and Xu Ge, because I always thought that Xu Ge was cute, so did Yu Zai! I personally think that my taste in reading is very picky, but this book made me read it in one sitting! The deputy CP is also very sweet. When they showed up, I burst out laughing! The teammates are also very cute! I'm doing a side story, I really want to see Brother Xu leave the Ning family and cut in the door qwq

This book is really, super good-looking, no need to say more. I don't know why it is not popular. Wu Nao Chong, who likes to read online game articles [Like] [Like] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] The author, I want to read the extras... I originally thought that the deputy cp might have opened a single book and could still read it, but unexpectedly it was gone? ! ! ! Please, I still want to see it [crying]

I was initially dissuaded by the name and the copy, so I read it out of boredom. I stayed up late to finish reading it, and it made me laugh out loud in the middle of the night. It was very interesting and a very good article.