Zhu Xian: Flying on a Sword Is a Little Scary When You're Afraid of Heights

I wonder if the author can see why he doesn't let the protagonist create new sword techniques, such as Ten Thousand Swords Technique, Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Sect, One Sword to Separate the World, Sky-Destroying Drawing Sword Technique, and Ten Thousand Swords Return to One

Don't always think about apostasy

Give it three stars, writing a book is not easy. The plot follows the original plot. To put it bluntly, the protagonist Zhang Xiaofan is replaced by Shen Yu, and Zhang Xiaofan becomes a supporting role. The original Zhang Xiaofan looks like a classic, but if it is written like this, it will be boring to watch. In the final analysis, this book lacks originality, independent thinking, and creativity. The author did not jump out of the original version and look down on the plot.

This protagonist is so awesome, his understanding is so high, and his qualifications are so good. Why does he have to write it so that he can't stop thinking about betrayal? Are all the powerful protagonists' attack releases self-created? You need to betray your master to learn the kung fu

I can only say that the author is a bitch. Why not kill Baguio with one sword? I've been betrayed several times.

Don't look at it, it's extremely poisonous, just forget it's disgusting for people who traveled through time, licking Zhang Xiaofan and Baguio, Baguio is against the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is still smiling, and has never thought about revenge, and they are still friends? The key is to force others to win over each other, which is disgusting.

The writing technique is okay, but the character of the protagonist is ruined, his character is bad, and his morals have no bottom line. His wife teaches Mo Xue, his master practices elixirs, and Xiaofan regards him as his brother. The protagonist wants to rebel every day and cheats Xiaofan to steal his opportunity. I wonder if everyone can read this thing called the Book of Heaven together? Will he die if he shows it to Lao Tian?

The protagonist's character is not good. When you are the sixth person, you let others know. You are also made to look like you are awesome. Who would be so famous? Others are following the protagonist secretly to seize opportunities and trick the protagonist. The main character has no IQ and even looks like I care about you and treats you well. Like a gangster

It's not good-looking. The main character's outlook is not correct. It's not as good-looking as the Jade Sword Fairy book!

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