Alicia, Lock the Shared Captain

I followed Tomato from Miyoushe. I really like this kind of imaginary world, a world without collapse, and I can experience the emotions of the characters that I didn't expect. But why, Mr. Luo, is the update of Miyushe so slow? ! !

What The Land of the Past recorded is such a simple story. The heroes and warriors were just ordinary people with complex emotions and flaws. Just like every human being at that time, they had their own selfish motives, and most of them could not talk about great love. However, they would also be moved or whim to do some impulsive and remarkable things. Well, they were never perfect heroes, just because they were the ones who appeared there at that time. Because of this, this is beautiful eternity. You are destined to be unable to read all my stories, or even appreciate a corner of the whole picture. The whole life of thirteen people is such a complicated but wonderful thing. ——The Paradise of the Past "Hengkai III" Comments: It's actually quite good. It would be nice if the characters' personalities were more consistent with the original (original game). The second is that I didn't expect to add the captain. In fact, personally speaking, on the basis of the CP set in Honkai Impact 3, it would be better to remove other CPs (personal suggestion doge) (personal suggestion, after all, everyone sees it from a different perspective)) The rest is still very good in my opinion (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Come on

There are not many Honkai books in this style, and the ones written by the author are okay. Just seeing the behavior of Alicia and the captain, I feel like I want to chop the captain into pieces.

As a derivative novel of the game Honkai Impact 3, or a derivative novel of Zhuhuo 13 Yingjie, it is actually very good (mainly because no one on the market writes this style, and they only write plots in the game, so novelty accounts for a large part), and the plot has Long Aotian's attributes are only reduced in concentration, and some jokes and self-creations are added to make the whole article less vulgar and not too profound (to be honest, I really can't understand what the author wrote, why didn't I see it when I was playing the plot) )) is within an acceptable range for me, and the writing style is also good. Although there are too many emojis and it's a bit tiring, but overall, it's 5 stars. (Another: c, it's too short and not enough to read. You'll lose interest in reading this kind of article after a while...)

There are too many "beautiful things" in the main plot, so it feels very warm to watch this daily life [laughs] and then the author rushes to update it [learned]

A very heart-warming daily article, the writing is good, the thirteen-year-old is very charming, it really pokes fun at me! Recommend! And the updates are very stable [smile] except for one or two updates a day which are a little bit appetizing [roll eyes]

Although the language in this book is not very gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and real emotions. It is fascinating and enjoyable to read. The article is full of "passion" and makes people "bloody". Each character is vivid and distinctive, creating a warm and beautiful daily life for the heroes and heroines. Although it is a casual daily article, the author's views on society are revealed between the lines. The details in the article are the finishing touch, and you can't help but be amazed when you look back and reread it. In particular, the captain created by the author has the feeling of a dragon king's son-in-law, which vividly displays the scumbag image of the protagonist. However, in addition to the scumbag image, the protagonist also has another side such as gentleness, caring and responsibility, which also shows that people are multi-faceted. Of course, the excitement of this book is far more than that. The articles come from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable.

A very warm daily article, especially engaging. I hope Lao Luo will update it soon [Blow kiss]

It's beautiful. It expresses what I want in my heart. There is no collapse, only warmth and daily life. I like it so much! [Smile][smile][smile]

It looks good, but I feel a little stuck when I go to Eden. But it's still very beautiful, but I'm short of words and can't say anything good. Anyway, it looks good. There are a lot of cheche [smile] [smile] [smile]

It's a very happy daily article. The author's writing style is very good. There are some sentences that I really want people to copy. But even though it was such a happy daily life, I actually shed tears while watching it. I wondered if they would be like what was written in the book if they hadn't collapsed. Although life has its ups and downs, ups and downs, at least Eden will not come out of the shelter and die with the old era, at least Su will not self-exile alone, at least Shangxian will not guard China alone for five thousand years, only to end up with the tragic end of being stabbed in the back by his disciples, at least this time they are facing an unsatisfactory life, rather than an end that makes people feel desperate...

After reading it, it's very healing. The ordinary lives of heroes and warriors...

It's very well written, it's best to keep writing. Author, you wrote this ambiguously. Look at us like this. Didn't you mean that Alicia is the single heroine? Let's change the angle and let Alicia open a harem. If you write this way, you will be happy, the readers will be happy, and Ellie will be happy too.

Okay, it's a great book, but I don't know if it's a single heroine or a harem, but I'd feel sick to my stomach if I had a single heroine, you know what I mean, the author [laughs evilly]

First of all, it's not ordinary. Although it is true that there is no Honkai, there are existences with similar superpowers that are not inferior to Honkai, as well as organizations and forces. "I" am not an ordinary person, so the plot has been separated from daily life from the middle stage (or even earlier), with fighting and killing, overt and covert fighting, and there is daily life ≠ it is all daily life, daily life is just an adjustment before the next battle, but I just want to watch daily life. Critical review of the plot: Like the urban novel ten years ago, the protagonist, the special soldier Dragon King, returned and slapped him in the face. Later, when the plot couldn't progress, he forcibly started cultivating immortals, loading new maps and new settings. The characterization is okay, but the author didn't mention multiple female protagonists.

One thing to say, I really like this book by Lao Luo. Aili's portrayal is very good, with both a cute side and a smart side. But personally, I think the part about A Mo's relationship with Destobia is my favorite! OMG! This is my emotional journey towards Ellie! I was also deeply attracted to the plot between the captain and other characters! Lao Luo, we love you!

Super Invincible is a very good-looking book. Really, after reading this book. I can't find any Bengsandong humanities that can surpass it. It's wonderful, wonderful, and exquisite. I simply can't find a better word. In short, it's worth watching [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I feel like it can be ranked in the top three among Bengsan fan novels. This is the best novella I've ever read, but that's mainly because Luo ended the novel before he finished it. It's a bit confusing, and it's one of the few fanfics that can be read with your brain.

This book is great. Alicia's character is very well drawn. I didn't see much of it at the beginning. I thought she was an optimistic, ordinary and lucky girl. Later, I started to gradually improve the character and carve out her core concept - love. The daily life of everyone is also very good. The captain is a scumbag. This is very true. There are many small details in the book. Finally, we are the thirteen heroic dogs chasing fire! Hey, no, we seem to be cats.

I gave it a good review after reading Chapter 8. A daily sweet article, eight chapters in total. The heroine Aili, the hero himself. The main character's name is a bit abstract but that's not a big problem. The writing is clean and crisp, and the author is at work in Candy House.

Teacher Luo's book "Chasing Tomatoes from Mishe" has a delicate writing style, distinct characters, a coherent and logical plot, and strong foreshadowing. Definitely the best work among Honkai Impact fans

I have been watching it since the update started. I have been too lazy to log in before. This time due to some reasons, I immediately commented after logging in. It is really, really good to watch! I just feel like I haven't read enough yet; I'm currently reading Fufu's article, and when will the Bengtie article be updated again?

I give it five stars. It's very well written. I've read so much Honkai Impact, so while reading it I also felt very... Emm... Similar to the vicissitudes of life [thinking], but after all I can't stay in this kind of writing for a long time. After all, I still have the same kind of psychology, so after giving it five stars, I'll say goodbye [full]

The writing is very good, the ups and downs of the plot, the missions, and the characters are the same as before. Lao Luo's writing is still good, but I am very curious about what happened when the male protagonist drank Eden and dated him. Can Lao Luo make a side story with Eden [Thinking]

This book adopts some characters from the game, but most of them are original. The plot written by the author is quite good, but some foreshadowings, such as in the supermarket, can only be said to be a bit abrupt. Everything else is pretty good. The captain is not the one doing the splits in the air. He is pitiful, hateful and scumbag. He is more realistic. Overall, the endings for each character should be perfect.

I have seen too many storylines about saving Ying Jie, and it is really refreshing to watch this kind of daily story without collapse. Moreover, Luo Dada's writing style is also guaranteed, but the development of some plots is not handled well. Overall, it is still great. I love it [laughs]

It feels like reading a diary. It is not as sloppy and absurd as what you wrote. The real inner activities and descriptions of the characters allow people to fully use their imagination. It is not too far away from reality. It is just the simple truth in the middle, which makes people feel the reality deeply (Ps: harem)

It's really good to watch. I've been watching the updates since I was in the car. The plot and character descriptions are also quite full, and it has a "single" heroine with Lao Luo's characteristics. When I saw the last short paragraph, I was really touched. Come on Lao Luo, I look forward to your next book [Blow Kiss]

Daily writing, although it is a fan of Mi Huyou, but it does not have those ancestral knives, but it can be seen that the author's writing style is still good, the writing is very warm, and it is very comfortable to read (also urge for more updates!)

As long as you ignore the background setting of the protagonist who may have been written by the author when he was suffering from chuunibyou, this book is actually quite good. The author's writing skills are good, and he has a good grasp of the psychological distance of the characters. It does not give people a sense of deja vu that as long as the protagonist comes into contact with a woman, the woman will be forcibly reduced to becoming the protagonist's harem. In addition, due to personal reasons, I love Sanbengzi and this subject. So five-star praise. [Sending Hearts] I've been waiting for it for a long time and am ready to read Chapter 200 in one go. I hope I won't die (worry) [Thinking] Normally, I'm fine, but why is the description of the protagonist's grandma so average? (Annoyed) It feels like the pace has suddenly become faster, and there are too many descriptions of the characters' inner feelings, which makes it feel artificial. Writing once can highlight the character's personality, writing twice can highlight the character's characteristics, but writing too much is too much. If you no longer have any ideas, you can stop for a while. I will continue to wait and see. I hope I can write better and better.