My Angel, Her Hero

Reading it always reminds me of one of my favorite novels, "I'm Not a Magical Girl" by the author of "Eat Earth". I never tire of reading it several times. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit clumsy and leaves many pitfalls unanswered. I feel like I could continue writing. The two books are really similar, especially the team members and superpowers. I hope this book can be written more perfectly.

I have read the first few chapters so far, and my evaluation is very good. It makes me feel that this book is free (although the word count is still a bit short), especially the character creation. Everyone has their own characteristics and can not seem inconsistent. There are also some details that surprise me, such as the giant iron tombstones in the cemetery, but I can't find two names. Such details are amazing 👍 I hope the follow-up plot can bring me more surprises (also, has the author considered posting on Lolita)? Really, the details in some dialogues are so amazing that I'm tired of saying them. I've read a lot of books before, and either the characters don't change much in the words and multiple characters always feel similar, or the characters' characteristics are deliberately constructed, causing the characters to feel different in EQ and IQ every time they speak, but, but! This book really makes every character have their own distinct characteristics without being overwhelming! It's really amazing (Additional comment: The characters in some books are very carefully created, but those characters are too stereotyped. They are only written around a few characteristics from beginning to end, giving people the feeling of game NPCs, but this book is different. The characters in this book really seem to exist in a complete world, amazing)

The author's level of thought in this book exceeds most of the books I have read. For example, Lao Hei's behavior always has one thing in common: careful and rigorous thinking about things. In addition, there are many details in the book that can also show the author's unique insights into society and human nature (it feels like he is from an old society at first glance, and some places are really full of sadness)

It gives me the aesthetic feeling of a college student who has only been in society for a few years, but it should be more like a feeling similar to watching a TV show. But if you really follow the logic of reality, you will always feel that something is strange. Because the plot is not a relatively smooth connection, the occasional explosive points are like a sudden highlight of a character in an abstract series, and then it becomes abstract again. I finally understood what was wrong. Some of the plots and characters' personalities were particularly awkward, and quite a few of them were unnecessary. The most important thing was that they didn't fit together well at all. The protagonist has been escaping, he has to keep lying to himself, and the protagonist's psychology is also very problematic. It makes me feel like a dead otaku, and he is not honest at all. It can be said that I personally pointed out the worst line. Another point is, are the protagonist's previous experiences all fake? If you understand the problem from the beginning, why do you still have illusions? The contradictions between the protagonist himself and the contradiction between the protagonist and the outside world are not handled well. Are there only extremists in the government? If they are leaders at the middle and lower levels, they will still behave the same way, but basically no one at the top is working hard. It won't be a catastrophe, and everyone at the top will be served in one pot, right?

2 Points are for the plot of the first 140 chapters. If you ask me about the plot, it is sometimes inexplicable. It is one-sided and one-sided, and there are many ambiguous plots inserted in the middle (it is not a group favorite, to be honest, it feels like it is forced in). 3 Is divided into 140 chapters and is much better than the previous one.

Judging from the current plot, this novel has many highlights, especially for a newbie like me, it is really amazing, especially the following points: ..1. The growth process of the protagonist Bai Yu is intriguing, and the strength of his character and the fragility of his heart are fascinating. What seems to be a contradiction is actually complex and changeable. …2. There are many flesh-and-blood characters in the story, each of whom has different ideals and pursuits. ...3. There may be some flaws in the plot, but the overall connection is very close and it is worth calming down and reading. … The above only represents my personal views (with modifications). Finally, I wish the author and book friends a happy life and all the best!

The settings suit my taste. The writing is good, above average. However, some of the plot connections are too abrupt, and the story has no complete clues, making it uncomfortable to read (it means that I only went to school for a few chapters and then went on a mission and then went abroad again... Well... It feels like you can tell at a glance that this lazy author didn't write an outline and just wrote whatever he thought of). Then why is there something wrong with this sf smell? Where's Lily? Where's Tie Tie? Don't you understand what we bts like to watch? [Turns lips] The final update speed is so slow that I can't even think about it enough. Ahhhh!!! (Sudden illness) So four ❤️ is not too much, right? I haven't watched it for a few months, and the results told me that this was the update?! 😅

It's very interesting. I hope I can see the main character exposed to his sister soon.

Very engaging story, especially with the main character traveling through time? Later, when faced with the opportunity to change events, I thought I had seized it, but I did not expect that it would develop into a closed loop with future events. Later, when the protagonist dueled with Huo Kui, the scene was very strong and the atmosphere was created.

I was pleasantly surprised. The characterization of the characters was unexpectedly good, especially in the extras. Even a "little character" was given a complete story. It allowed readers to truly see the light of ordinary characters in the apocalypse. The portrayal of the main characters did not disappoint. While reading the novel, I could clearly feel that the characters were doing every action in front of me. The images of these characters made me truly feel that the novel is a world