Is My Good-For-Nothing Brother the Strongest Magical Girl? !

Reading it always reminds me of one of my favorite novels, "I'm Not a Magical Girl" by the author of "Eat Earth". I never tire of reading it several times. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit clumsy and leaves many pitfalls unanswered. I feel like I could continue writing. The two books are really similar, especially the team members and superpowers. I hope this book can be written more perfectly.

I have read the first few chapters so far, and my evaluation is very good. It makes me feel that this book is free (although the word count is still a bit short), especially the character creation. Everyone has their own characteristics and can not seem inconsistent. There are also some details that surprise me, such as the giant iron tombstones in the cemetery, but I can't find two names. Such details are amazing [like] I hope the follow-up plot can bring me more surprises (also, has the author considered posting on Lolita)? Really, the details in some dialogues are so amazing that I'm tired of saying them. I've read a lot of books before, and either the characters don't change much in the words and multiple characters always feel similar, or the characters' characteristics are deliberately constructed, causing the characters to feel different in EQ and IQ every time they speak, but, but! This book really makes every character have their own distinct characteristics without being overwhelming! It's really amazing (Additional comment: The characters in some books are very carefully created, but those characters are too stereotyped. They are only written around a few characteristics from beginning to end, giving people the feeling of game NPCs, but this book is different. The characters in this book really seem to exist in a complete world, amazing)

The author's level of thought in this book exceeds most of the books I have read. For example, Lao Hei's behavior always has one thing in common: careful and rigorous thinking about things. In addition, there are many details in the book that can also show the author's unique insights into society and human nature (it feels like he is from an old society at first glance, and some places are really full of sadness)

It gives me the aesthetic feeling of a college student who has only been in society for a few years, but it should be more like a feeling similar to watching a TV show. But if you really follow the logic of reality, you will always feel that something is strange. Because the plot is not a relatively smooth connection, the occasional explosive points are like a sudden highlight of a character in an abstract series, and then it becomes abstract again. I finally understood what was wrong. Some of the plots and characters' personalities were particularly awkward, and quite a few of them were unnecessary. The most important thing was that they didn't fit together well at all. The protagonist has been escaping, he has to keep lying to himself, and the protagonist's psychology is also very problematic. It makes me feel like a dead otaku, and he is not honest at all. It can be said that I personally pointed out the worst line. Another point is, are the protagonist's previous experiences all fake? If you understand the problem from the beginning, why do you still have illusions? The contradictions between the protagonist himself and the contradiction between the protagonist and the outside world are not handled well. Are there only extremists in the government? If they are leaders at the middle and lower levels, they will still behave the same way, but basically no one at the top is working hard. It won't be a catastrophe, and everyone at the top will be served in one pot, right?

2 Points are for the plot of the first 140 chapters. If you ask me about the plot, it is sometimes inexplicable. It is one-sided and one-sided, and there are many ambiguous plots inserted in the middle (it is not a group favorite, to be honest, it feels like it is forced in). 3 Is divided into 140 chapters and is much better than the previous one.

Judging from the current plot, this novel has many highlights, especially for a newbie like me, it is really amazing, especially the following points: ..1. The growth process of the protagonist Bai Yu is intriguing, and the strength of his character and the fragility of his heart are fascinating. What seems to be a contradiction is actually complex and changeable. ....2. There are many flesh-and-blood characters in the story, each of whom has different ideals and pursuits. ...3. There may be some flaws in the plot, but the overall connection is very close and it is worth calming down and reading. ........ The above only represents my personal views (with modifications). Finally, I wish the author and book friends a happy life and all the best!

The settings suit my taste. The writing is good, above average. However, some of the plot connections are too abrupt, and the story has no complete clues, making it uncomfortable to read (it means that I only went to school for a few chapters and then went on a mission and then went abroad again... Well... It feels like you can tell at a glance that this lazy author didn't write an outline and just wrote whatever he thought of). Then why is there something wrong with this sf smell? Where's Lily? Where's Tie Tie? Don't you understand what we bts like to watch? [Turns lips] The final update speed is so slow that I can't even think about it enough. Ahhhh! ! ! (Sudden illness) So four ❤️ is not too much, right? I haven't watched it for a few months, and the results told me that this was the update?! [Laughing awkwardly]

It's very interesting. I hope I can see the main character exposed to his sister soon.

I was pleasantly surprised. The characterization of the characters was unexpectedly good, especially in the extras. Even a "little character" was given a complete story. It allowed readers to truly see the light of ordinary characters in the apocalypse. The portrayal of the main characters did not disappoint. While reading the novel, I could clearly feel that the characters were doing every action in front of me. The images of these characters made me truly feel that the novel is a world

Very engaging story, especially with the main character traveling through time? Later, when faced with the opportunity to change events, I thought I had seized it, but I did not expect that it would develop into a closed loop with future events. Later, when the protagonist dueled with Huo Kui, the scene was very strong and the atmosphere was created.

It's very good-looking. I really hope that the protagonist and Liu Xinrou will achieve success. Neither of them knows that the other party likes them. Liu Xinrou's song gave the frustrated protagonist strength, and the protagonist rescued Liu Xinrou due to an accident, and in the few days he spent with the protagonist, he developed sympathy and affection for the protagonist who was looking for his sister. I don't actually dislike my sister Bai Yuela, but the protagonist and Liu Xinrou are more at odds with each other. Very much looking forward to future developments. Now that the plot has reached its climax, it is really urgent, so urgent! I want the author [please update]

It's a coincidence that I started reading this book just as the author was finishing it, and I had a great experience reading it in one sitting. The writing is good and the pacing is well controlled. Although it is a bit toxic, it has little impact. It's just... I always feel a little awkward after watching the ending. I don't like the ending. Restarting alone always feels like a betrayal. I'm not saying that the protagonist Bai Yu can't be selfish, but I just feel that this kind of retrospection that belongs to her is a bit unfair to others. If everything starts over without leaving a trace, then in the future that has been experienced, should everything that others have paid and felt be meaningless? Not to mention what kind of future must happen in the ending setting, but this ending is still too sloppy. Even before looking back, there are still many things that have not been explained. I can also understand that the author made such an ending. Such an open ending, on the basis of a happy reunion, has strong plasticity for the subsequent plot. There is no need to be too constrained by the main line setting in the creation of subsequent extras and epilogues. All in all, this is a very good transformation story. In this foreign persimmon gold mining environment, it is considered a piece of gold with good quality.

Suddenly I realized that I haven't rated this book yet. What should I say? This is one of the few books that I can finish reading. Most of the books can't be read after reading dozens of chapters. They are very good-looking. Although the update speed is a bit slow, it is still acceptable. Also, how many more times does Bai Yu have to expose his identity in front of his sister?

The writing is very good, the logic is very strong, the emotions and the psychological changes of the characters are very delicate, and it is very comfortable to watch, and the extra chapters are especially delicate (so great!). The boss is suffering from the pressure of work and can only take four days off, which makes some transitions a bit rough, but overall it is still very good. (White feather is so cute~)

I have always felt that before reviewing the book, I must first state that this book is super beautiful. I started reading it when I had almost 100 books. School is about to start. I think this book is very good. It doesn't have any major shortcomings. I will leave some thoughts and don't want to talk about it. Let the new readers read it by themselves, and the old readers can recall it by themselves. I just came here to check it out. Then tell yourself. Happy back to school! [Laughing and crying] I found a problem, that is, I haven't read it for a long time, and I can't understand it.

It's a very good transformation novel. I've read a lot of transformation novels. Before SF, I didn't read much of it before L11 expired and dropped to 10. As far as the beginning of this novel is concerned, it's no worse than those so-called paid novels, and the quality is better. SF has too many short stories, and this one can be said to be a high-quality one in SF. I hope the author will continue to share his stories in the future.

The worldview is very complicated, probably because most of it is hinted at and most of it has not been written yet, and I read a book called "Why I Met a Brother After I Transformed in the End of the World!" ? The same is true. The author writes really well, but the big world view can easily go wrong in a small world. A fantasy novel with a bit of suspense is really nice.

The writing is very good, the plot is very interesting, and the character settings and descriptions are also great, but there are so few emotional scenes [crying] [crying] [crying]. The anticipated identity exposure and the complete irreversibility of the plot are so bland, I just brushed it off [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] ] I feel like it keeps pushing the plot, and it becomes more and more serious as it goes on (I want to read the training [shy]). I feel that the first volume is my favorite, especially Bai Yu's various expressions and actions after becoming a woman, and there is no sense of separation when switching between men and women. It's a good book [please update]

Beautiful, a rare high-quality Tomato Transformed into Mahou Soju

Uh... I haven't watched the previous work, so I can't understand many parts... But! There is no denying that this book is really beautiful! During daily activities, the little thoughts of the brothers and sisters are very sweet [laughing], and when it comes to swordsmanship, you, the author, are also real swordsmen [angry] Author, I don't ask you to let Bai Yu reveal the truth to Bai Yue as soon as possible, but I really hope that Bai Yu and the people around him will end up Living in this world, a beautiful and happy ending [almost crying][crying][crying] Is it ok? Author(´;;`)ಥ_ಥ

The plot is not bad, it has its own ideas, and it is considered above average in Tomato. However, I feel that the dialogue about China in Chapter 39 is somewhat problematic, and I don't quite understand it. Well, as for that, there seems to be no problem with the rest so far.

The protagonist is one of the top dragon-level combatants with a salary of 3/4k [laughing][laughing] In the first 150 chapters, the heroine didn't know who she was dating, but there was quite a lot of male interaction, to the point where she was acting as someone else's fake girlfriend. Not really married? ? ?

I watched 70% of it on both tablet and mobile phones. It was amazing in the early stage, but there was no obvious emotional line type. It started to get a bit boring in the middle, but the description was still good. The biggest problem is that I still don't know whether it is a hundred or a single. I don't know if it will be confirmed later. I feel that it is better to have a final conclusion on this kind of thing as soon as possible.

I haven't followed it for a few months, but now that I read it, I feel a lot of emotion. It can be regarded as a story that I have followed for a while, and I forgot to give it a star. In fact, I still like the story of the protagonist getting along with his teammates in a more daily life, and the interspersed extra stories that slowly reveal the past of the protagonist and supporting characters, so that I leave the earth behind the protagonist, right? (I haven't read it for so long that I forgot about it). The plot felt a bit boring, and I gradually forgot to put it on the bookshelf to gather dust. In short, just for the author's perseverance, Tomato Break Eunuch's novel is worthy of a 5-star review. Cheers to the author.

Overall, the early stage of the movie looked okay, but War With You gave me a feeling of highs and lows. It was a bit foggy, but overall it was okay. There were plenty of emotional scenes, and very rich inner scenes. It was okay to be a little dessert.

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Updates are too slow koso, the author of Qiuqiu should write Baiyu for the rest of his life, there are always people who can do everything😭😭😭😭😭

The subject matter is novel and the dialogue between the characters is very detailed. Anyway, I won't use a lot of words to learn about some strange places. The writing style is concise, the plot is compact and not sloppy, and there will be no shortage of words. The quality is very high, and it is estimated that many people will read it for a fee [laughs]

It's very good, but the author often stops updating. In terms of plot, the protagonist's combat power is good. There is a person named Huobei in the body who is the protagonist's previous life, which can also be understood as a second personality. The protagonist is normally male and uses the power of a female. The protagonist is too girly and may be uncomfortable for some people. There are many extras, which can be skipped, but it is best to read if you are familiar with the plot. The memory part is too fragmented and requires good understanding. The early plot will be borrowed from other books. Apart from these, there are some problems, but it is still a good book. A－

Make up for the rating. There are a lot of poisonous points in the front. I don't recommend it if you want to read a refreshing article. I believe many people are a little uncomfortable with the character of the protagonist and the things he encounters. He has strong power but is too frustrated. But after I got the CPU, I also figured it out. The protagonist's power is limited, so it's okay. The last sentence is posted by Saigao