(This is a work of practicing writing. I think it is a bit naive from some angles. Writing a sequel now has to pay for the frivolousness at that time... Or in other words, it is a bit funny to me. It is not invincible, not systematic, the pace is slow, the author's mental state is not good, and the writing is a bit messy. ) Even if the endless darkness comes again, the darkness before dawn cannot block the dawn of dawn, and extinction is just the last gasp before failure. This sacred and inviolable land will bury all invaders and their ambitions! Old and new grudges will be put to rest.
The road ahead will be long... But the future may be filled with bright stars... I hope that one day, people can take control of their own destiny and find the star of destiny. The starry sky may be on the other side. Even if there are all dangers, there will be success.
Reader comments
Although it can be seen that this is similar to a first draft, the writing style is indeed there. Moreover, the author's own setting is also very good and relatively self-consistent. However, a personal opinion, why does the power of Nirvana always have the upper hand, for example, it suddenly dissipates immediately after the attack, but it is always difficult to be killed directly. Long's side can only passively fight. Including the will, which is often easily eroded or affected for no apparent reason. It just feels a bit weird, giving people the illusion that the dragon clan doesn't seem to be able to correctly deal with the power of annihilation, and it feels slightly powerless. But overall, I think the worldview constructed by the author is quite novel, and the content is attractive enough. Although there are various imperfections, I encourage you and I look forward to the author's subsequent works!
Although it can be seen that this is similar to a first draft, the writing style is indeed there. Moreover, the author's own setting is also very good and relatively self-consistent. However, a personal opinion, why does the power of Nirvana always have the upper hand, for example, it suddenly dissipates immediately after the attack, but it is always difficult to be killed directly. Long's side can only passively fight. Including the will, which is often easily eroded or affected for no apparent reason. It just feels a bit weird, giving people the illusion that the dragon clan doesn't seem to be able to correctly deal with the power of annihilation, and it feels slightly powerless. But overall, I think the worldview constructed by the author is quite novel, and the content is attractive enough. Although there are various imperfections, I encourage you and I look forward to the author's subsequent works!