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This is the most detailed and responsible author I have ever seen, because he will revise the article and read the comments. Most authors are like that. Moreover, this author is really rigorous. This is the biggest advantage of fanfics. The plot is also very good. I can't say it is good, but at least he is not lazy. Good book, at the same time beep quietly, Momonosuke is dead.

It is a rare good book, not boring, and the pace is very steady. Reading those junk books with ink stains is really poisonous. Reading this book relieves the poison! Give it five stars!

Very good-looking, Brother Ming, he is destined to be a very cool person, so when you write, you must write in a cool way. Come on. Those people who give low ratings are just black people. They can't stand looking at other people's good grades. Black people are really everywhere.

It is a good book among the One Piece fanfics. I personally like Doflamingo in the original work, but I left a lot of regrets because of the plot. Doflamingo has a brain in this book, and it is not a novice novel. If you like One Piece articles, I recommend reading it. Although the score is low, it is really good I suggest the author add pictures to the names of some characters. I haven't read it for a long time and I can't remember some of the characters. Thank you.

Good. Among all the pirate novels in Tomato, except for the one about Dark Sky, this one is the most comfortable one I have ever read. Just a little short Not enough! Not enough!

The plot progresses steadily, and Ming Ge is a good villain with a true temperament. It reflects the true and cruel side of pirates very well! Some people say that there is no ink (good news, Momonosuke). My favorite piece of One Piece I've ever read [Love]

At present, it seems relatively comfortable, decisive in killing, dark, systematic, but not against the will of heaven. The author will continue to maintain it. [Please update]

It can be seen as the original Doflamingo swallowing the soul of the time traveler. It can almost be said that he is Ming Ge who read the script. However, the development of the thread fruit is too taken for granted. The benevolent has his own opinion. Accept it and it will look good. Don't use too much brain. Also, the dialogue and wording are a bit weird, but many people like it, but I don't like it that much. It's always weird. The most important thing is that it's over! ! This is great! ! ! Overall I quite like it, four stars is a fair and high rating.

Basically, I am building infrastructure and creating my own country. The fun part is that it has a bit of bad taste (I like to record people breaking down and being beaten). I personally find it quite interesting. Anyway, the protagonist can be regarded as a equal push along the way (there is also a conspiracy). Killing Kirby and Taozi can be used as a follow-up. The climax (not written yet) can be considered a slow-burning article. The writing and plot are okay. Otohime's similar experiences and sex are really BT. Many of them have been washed into the shape of Dover, and they are the Yonko. Also, Zefa Aokiji is in the hands of the dead protagonist, but will Luffy do something about it later? Both killing and washing are quite interesting. [Please update] No, I forgot that I have killed Momoko, but the sister is still there. Anyway, she will help Yamato to kidnap Rayleigh's daughter. Compared with the pure overlord novel, there is also a harem stallion setting, but there are pirates, aunts, etc. These are trivial matters. I have a biological son who fights Ace (adopted son) every day. The update speed is okay, Luo has become a fan of Dover, and Saint Rosinand has gone to join the revolutionary army. I think this book can be ranked in the top five pirate novels I have read.

There are few good-looking pirate fanfics. The protagonist has already eaten the offline fruit after his soul passed through Doflamingo, so in terms of fruit ability, it is not too strong. In the later stage, he relies on the lighthouse system to strengthen himself little by little, and the protagonist is decisive in killing. He will beep when he needs to beep, and he will kill immediately when he doesn't. The concept of controlling the timeline or the fate line was not realized until the end of the extra chapter to attack the alien empire. However, the taste of this article was really strong in the later period. Some wives were attracted to it, but even Crocodile was too harsh. Then the author didn't say anything about Shirahoshi's situation after marrying Otohime. It's a pity that the author didn't say anything about it later. But overall, this pirate fanfic is still very good. Give the author a five-star support.

The writing style and IQ are both online. Don't be a eunuch. Brother Ming's writing is basically useless. Come on.

Currently seeing Fishman Island. After filtering out the first few chapters of Xiaogan Tiandi, it can be regarded as a normal pirate design. It expresses very well that this is what pirates should do. Keep your identity in mind and there is no brainwashing. It's fun to kill, it's fun to harvest, and it's fun to develop. It's a good masterpiece among pirates. I finished reading it intermittently and refreshed the duration. Overall it was pretty good.

The writing is good, the plot is compact, and it reflects Dover's perversion and the darkness of the world government. The most important thing is that the author's Dover crushed Momonosuke's head with his own hands, and his brains flew everywhere. This is very cool and deserves five stars.

The writing is good. I have been developing my power and cultivating my subordinates. It feels like reading a farming article. The general abilities described in the fighting are a hodgepodge of demonic forms. The system is vague and appears. After reading about 100 chapters in the early stage, it is not that interesting, so I will stop here.

I have read 100 chapters so far, and I feel that the writing is good, except for some minor flaws in the beginning. Although the depth of the plot and characterization are not as good as those of top authors, it can still be regarded as a T1-level fan novel, and each character is relatively restored to the original work.

One Piece is a very good novel. The author's writing is good and his understanding of One Piece is very thorough. The protagonist of this book, Doflamingo, is almost as if he was brought to life. When reading other novels, those awkward and sterile dialogues seem to be scrawled by the author as if he has no brain. But this book is really different. The dialogues are very comfortable to watch and clear, and the personality of each character is not broken. But what surprised me the most was that the combat power of this book did not collapse, and there were no scenes of pretending to be a slap in the face, and there was also a plot where the subordinates got married. This is my favorite. I am often depressed. At the end of a book, the protagonist always has a group of wives and concubines and a harem of three thousand, but all of the subordinates who followed him from the beginning are single. It's unfair and boring. Overall, this is a very good One Piece fanfic, with many detailed battle scenes and a lot of daily life plots. I like it.

So far, I feel pretty good. This is the second pirate novel I can read. I think the point of deducting points is the lucky fruit. The author's setting is that the higher the social status, the higher the luck. I think this should be luck rather than luck. The success of big people does not rely on luck, but on strength. Under the premise of fairness and openness, when big shots and common people draw lots, the former may not necessarily win.

This book is really good, well written and thoughtful Of course there are some shortcomings, but they can't be regarded as shortcomings. 1. Neptune Shirahoshi seems to have no role 2. I personally feel that Crocodile has too few scenes. The rest is pretty good For example, in terms of personality, many readers say that he does not look like a time traveler, but the author said that this is the fusion of Doflamingo's original soul and the soul of a time traveler. In addition, the setting of the Devil Fruit in this book is very reasonable and perfectly follows Oda's "Devil Fruit comes from people's wishes." And in the end, he also satirized Oda's "rubber fruit turned into Nika fruit" and "thread fruit turned into Tenyasha fruit" At the same time, Goldfinger doesn't have many roles. Apart from helping out at the beginning, he is basically not used in the middle. It's also good that Goldfinger doesn't control the protagonist. In addition, there is also a timeline of the One Piece world in the middle, which is also very helpful to many fan authors. Personally, I think it can be ranked at least in the top three among the books I have read. Mainly because I remember a few books that were very well written but forgot their names. If I can't remember them all and only count the books I read recently, they would be the first. In summary, I highly recommend this book. If you are a Haimi, I suggest you read it. However, if you only want to read the generation of the protagonist group, it is not recommended because there are not many people from the generation of the protagonist group. There are only Robin and Franky, and almost all of them are from the generation of Ming Ge and Lao Sha. If you see it, would you like to give it a like? (I hope the author can see it)

2024.7.31.22:44 It was so perverted that Doflamingo Arimoto was also turned into a woman and became Doflamingo.

Clearly organized and well written. The combat power setting is very good, you wrote it carefully. Good reviews

I have seen the most consistent pirate character, he is extremely domineering [punch attack], but it is a pity that the extra character is missing a bit [heartfelt]

Everyone who has read it should think it is a good product. Many of the low ratings are due to Blackbeard's physique and the choices that cannot be understood. However, this does not affect the success of the character creation from the perspective of pirates and kings. Most of the choices are traceable, and the subsequent system basically does not appear. There is no feeling of being manipulated. After reading it in one go, I think it deserves this rating.

I have read the entire text. As a bookworm of ten years, this is an excellent One Piece fan novel. The protagonist's IQ online character and personality are basically consistent with the original work, and the plot structure is also designed reasonably. It is a harem dark system hegemony novel, but the content is not just about the harem. The main content is based on the struggle for hegemony and kingship.

So cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The people watching are really making excuses! ! ! ! It doesn't follow the plot too hard, it has its own ideas, and the progress is not delayed. The description of the fights is also good. Overall, it's great. I'm sure it will receive rave reviews~ It's steaming!

It's very interesting to watch, with a complete plot and many unique innovations. It's very enjoyable to watch. When others were killing people, he chose to raise him. But the ending felt a bit rushed and there was no complete ending. (Only personal opinion)

Doflamingo's character and behavior are very well shaped, and the rise of an underground king is also very exciting.

I have finished reading this book, and I will give it full marks. This is probably the first book I have written. It has a little bit of white text at the beginning, which gets better and better the more you read it. The author's writing style is constantly improving, and it becomes more exciting as it goes on. There is a lot of life in starting low and moving high. Come on, author, I suggest you change the previous part to retain more readers.

Better looking than other Doflamingos.

The best pirate novel I have seen so far, a real hero. Unlike some pirate novels, what is a righteous pirate? In addition, I would like to recommend the best naval novel I have ever read, the one about "I Feed Nika the Lava" These two are the best one-black-one-white pirate fanfics I have read so far.

The rating doesn't mean anything, it's a very good book