Transform into a Stunning Disaster

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who do you look down on in this chapter?

I'm an old fan. I've been following you all the way from the goddess. I support you. Come on, little rabbit. Xiaotu has published a new book, Transformation: Playing the Empress at the Beginning, Amazing the World. This book is different from the previous one. The car is going very fast, and you can't get off when you get in. Support it.

Although it is very heroic, there are a few points that I think can be corrected appropriately. 1. The heroine's memories of the past life are too long and too long. Three pages are enough. Writing so many will make people tired and even irritable. 2. I don't understand the change in the heroine's mentality. Is the author trying to write the protagonist with a boy's mentality or a girl's mentality? If it's a boy's mentality, don't exaggerate the beauty. I've read 66 chapters, and 50% of them are describing how beautiful the protagonist is, and pushing the limits. The plot moves very slowly. If it is written about the psychology of a girl, then she has to adapt to her appearance, her identity, and the system has raised her temperament to the fullest. She should not act like a petty person, which is quite unreasonable. The otaku in her previous life was also 25 years old. Doesn't she have the adaptability of an adult? 3. People around the protagonist should not write so silly and sweet things. Although it is a novel, we can be more fantasy, but not to the point of magic. I don't mean to give the author any advice in the comment area, but as an old bookworm, I just mentioned that I have finished reading it. I didn't read one or two words about this novel and take it out of context. I finished reading it, so the author took a look at it. I also hope that this novel will get better and better. Regarding the issues I wrote, I hope the author can better shape the characters in the novel. [Makes face]

Fast pace, no hiding of identities, no pretending🐷, versatile talents and good looks🌸Isn't this the kind of story I dream of? [Adoration]

This can be regarded as the top white and rich beauty in the transformation novel! Very good! But there are still some flaws. [Thinking] It would be perfect if the protagonist's name didn't change. The author should remember to change it! ! !

There are no big problems so far. It's nice to take a look when there's nothing wrong.

I hope it is beautiful alone, if it is Bian Married and Lily, it will be one star!

It's so good. I hope the author won't stop updating it like the other novels you wrote, and stop updating it halfway through. I give you five stars [sending my heart]

The writing is still okay, how come the score is so low? The heroine is really powerful, with 101 points of beauty, 100 points of temperament, and a wonderful voice. She needs to be beautiful and beautiful, and she needs money and money. She can still fight even if she says she can, it's really amazing!

Very interesting novel

I like it very much, but I think the author and your result are a bit sloppy, the ending is rushed, and I feel it is a bit unreadable, but I like the overall content very much! Great author, I hope you can publish another book! (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Evaluation: This is a pretty good, brainless and cool novel. The cool writing is not the focus, the point is the lack of brains. You can experience it for yourself (for example: the heroine was originally an ordinary person who was good-looking and did not know how to dress up, but she suddenly became a very good-looking and super-rich person who also knew how to dress up. No one doubts this.) Anyone who questions the heroine will not let me add the word "brainless" in the evaluation.

Are all the beauties in this world wholesale? [Laughing and crying] Is it mainly because there is someone who is more beautiful than the heroine? [Grieved] Let's add a little more beauty! I feel like the heroine is like a supporting character compared to the first goddess [what]

Emmmm. . . . . Hahaha. How should I put it? If there is no reality, just write a novel. Everything you want in reality is found in the novels you write. This is perfect for obscenity. . . . The author is so knowledgeable.

Author, I want to send you some specialties from my hometown. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I think this book is the best of all the Bai Fumei scripts I have read. I changed my mind. I have nothing to say. I just changed my mind.

The new book Transformation: Acting as the Empress at the beginning, stunning the world. I have signed a contract. Please support me.

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Really, this book is beautiful. Highly recommended to me.

The content of this book is really good. Among all the articles I have read about men wearing clothes and women becoming fairer and more beautiful, this book is the best in my opinion! ! ! This book was really interesting when I first read it, but maybe it was my own fault. I couldn't stand the plot of this book more and more. It just felt awkward and the author was forcing the plot, so I will put it on my bookshelf and won't delete it. But I probably won't read it anymore. I won't change the rating. I just treat it as an explanation to myself who liked this book very much at the time. It's still a pity to post this comment after abandoning the book (just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Come on, author, it's finished. I'll read the next one.

Good or bad, will you be alone in the end, or will you be Lily?

Very good, but the content is a bit slow!

This book is mainly about a woman who works overtime and travels through time with the system. However, the system does not have a high sense of existence. This is a drawback. I hope the author can write it better [Comparison]

It's good-looking. It's not about changing marriages. If you don't like changing marriages, you can rest assured.

I finally found a good book about the God of Transformation.

The plot is very good, and the character of the heroine is also perfect. The author uses a lot of vocabulary to fully reflect the advantages of each character in the book. The book is very interesting. I highly recommend it to friends who like female videos/single heroines + Bai Fumei [top post]

I want to become a beautiful girl I want to become a beautiful girl

I want to ask if this is a hundred or marriage?