Detective Conan: The Rules-Based Horror House That Scares the School Beauty Unconscious

I like this novel very much, but there are too many women around the protagonist. I think this is the point where readers should be put off. But after looking over it, I found it was nothing. There is no relationship, but there is still a feeling of a harem group, which will make readers dissuade them. Big cheers for the author!

Good. It's just that the author's writing style needs to be improved. Some places are not smooth. For example, some places can clearly make the readers more comfortable. For example, in Chapter 19, there is a fragment about the emotion of fear, which he is not very afraid of. Of course, if he exceeds that threshold, he will still be afraid. I don't understand why the comma needs to be changed. As for the emotion of fear, although it sounds okay, it makes me feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. Maybe it's because I haven't read novels for too long and I'm not used to it. Maybe it's because I've been picked on by those who have written more than a dozen books and big boss books. There are other things that I won't go into. I really hope that the author can improve his writing style. This subject matter is quite new, and there are relatively few fan fictions like Conan. I really hope that the author can improve his writing style.

Could you please let me make some suggestions for authors who are so handsome that they are considered celebrities? Just like "Broken Heart" Error: 1. This village is the safest village. Although there have been several murders, it is still the safest village in Japan. 2. There are patches of flowers under the icon in the church, which are rose bushes. They are safe, but don't bring your village's red invitation card there. 3. The third floor of our hotel is the safest. Going to the wedding hall is the best place to hide from some dangerous creatures in our village. 4. In the Lake of Love in our village, the water turns red at dusk. (That's due to geographical reasons, it's very safe) 5. There will be a performance at the hotel in our village at 20 o'clock. You can go and listen to it, but you cannot bring red invitation tickets. 6. Our villagers are friendly and the employees will help you. Correct: 1. Our hotel will send red invitation coupons, please make sure they are with you. 2. The villagers in our village are dangerous, and the employees are safe except for the employees in black. 3. Some black figures appear in our village at midnight. Sometimes they appear in the mirror, sometimes in the wedding hall... But they are all dangerous. 4. There will be blood stains on the streets in our hotel. That is normal. But if you spot a blood-red wedding dress, don't come near it. 5. Don't be near the wedding hall, you will be discovered by those dangerous creatures. Activation conditions: Trigger five cases of killing for love, or accumulate 57,98 points in the store. Staff: paper figures, doll sisters, etc. Props: blood-stained ring, black rose, letter of love from the deceased, blood-stained black severed hand. I really, really hope you accept that I am a paranormal explorer and I really like Conan and the Rules of Ghost Stories.

It looks great. Can you add some protagonists and the protagonists from Conan to solve weird things?

Five-star praise, please support the author. There is a surprise in my review. According to the author, it seems that there is no heroine because there is no emotional drama. So I am cheering for no heroine, cheers, cheers.

To be honest, this book is well written, at least it is the type I like. I read it to the end in one go. The author should work harder and update it!

I give this book five stars for reading.

Sigh... I'm really sorry for you, the author, I have been keeping this book for so long...

Great author, come on (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ

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