Doraemon's Beast! My Spirit Beast Has Technology!

Chen Chen: Beast Master (×) [almost crying] Tinker Bell: The Master (√) [Cool]

I saw the latest chapter. How should I put it? The ideas are novel, the thinking is clear, the outline is clear, and the writing is also smooth. There are just two problems First, your division of strength is a bit vague. The protagonist's strength is not mentioned, and he himself does not know how strong it is. I feel that the graduation ceremony battle written below can highlight the protagonist's strength and arrange for him to test the data. You are also describing the division of strength (the above are all my own rubbish, please like it if it is useful, and if you have any questions, please criticize it lightly. I am not saying that the author's writing is not good, after all, I can't write it) Second, your update speed must be fast. Even the donkeys in the production team would not dare to take a break like this [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Please give me a five-star review. I have read everyone's comments. Thank you for your support. I will continue to work hard to write novels that satisfy everyone!

The subject matter is very new and interesting, but I hope it can strengthen the daily interaction between Tinkerbell and the protagonist's family, so that Tinkerbell's personality can be reflected.

It's very interesting and the content is pretty good. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

I hope the author will continue to work hard on the code. I am optimistic about you. Come on, Ollie [laughter][laughter]

It's nice and nice. I've never seen anything like this before. So the author can update it as soon as possible.

Although there are no exciting scenes, the smooth reading is not bad. I hope there will be more exciting stories later.

To be honest, I only watched it because of the synopsis. The last sentence of the synopsis made me laugh, so I watched it. I didn't expect it to be a treasure. It's really good-looking. Super awesome [eating melon]

It's rare to find another unsystematic article on animal control. It's quite interesting. I just hope it can be updated soon! ! ! I'm so anxious

This book is a blast, the plot is very good, it doesn't drag on, and the progress of the protagonist is visible! Unlike other cool novels, this one has a very good protagonist. He doesn't fall in love or have a harem. The main point is that there is Doraemon!

It's very beautiful, I like it very much (ฅฅ*)♡ It's really great✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺ Come on＾0＾~

After reading it, there are quite a lot of bad reviews, but I still hope that the author will work hard and not delay the update. Most people emphasize and pay attention to some setting issues in the book. After reading the comments for a few minutes, most of them are like this. To be honest, although I haven't read much on Tomato, I have read the novel for seven or eight years. This book does have some problems as mentioned in the reviews. I think it's great that the author can read it and make suggestions and make appropriate changes. However, I did not see so many problems when I read it. I believe that some other books I have read have more problems than this one, but its popularity is much higher than this one. I really hope that the author will not stop updating. Everyone's taste in reading and even the emphasis they focus on when reading are different. The issues mentioned in the comment area have not affected my personal reading. Writing a book itself creates a lot of controversy, which some people love and others hate. Naturally, there are people like most people in the comment area who have a lot of opinions about this book. The problems they say are real and they can't stand it, so they can only click "Delete this book". There will also be people like me who don't focus on these when reading and won't think so much. I really like this book, and I really hope the author doesn't stop updating it or make it unfinished. If you are a writing novice and this is your first book, and you want to write it well, you must continue to persevere and hone yourself in every book. If it's just a hobby and a way to generate electricity for love, then you don't need to care too much about bad reviews. Ps: I saw this book on the homepage recommendation. I hope the author really doesn't stop updating it and doesn't finish it. Here's what I want to say to netizens who don't quite agree with this comment: Don't argue, if you argue, I'm right. Just because I like this book does not mean that all the books I have read are the same in terms of genre, writing style, story logic, etc. All I can say is that everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. I am not refuting the problems you think this book has. My point of view is not to express that this book has no flaws and is very suitable for everyone to read. Naturally, some people will love this book, whether they are netizens who have just started reading online articles or have been reading them for a long time, I believe there are all.

It's pretty good, overall it's very good. I haven't seen it before. It's quite novel. The author can update it. But there is one thing that I find very strange (probably for personal reasons). The male protagonist attaches great importance to Tinker Bell and has a strong desire to protect him. It feels like a boss protecting his little wife. If there is danger or not, he will first put a protective shield for Tinkerbell. He is also very persistent in telling others that Tinker Bell is his friend. Not a pet, (it feels like this is my woman, not my lover). There is even a sentence in it, similar to that he can only accept the intimate contact of Tinkerbell, not two good friends (the male protagonist is only not allergic to the female protagonist's kiss). This is outrageous. This is not a proper quote from the boss. From the indications so far, it doesn't seem like there will be a female protagonist. The character of the male protagonist is the way for the boss to become stronger. It is neither a double male protagonist nor a romance. Why should the love line take the sweet pet route? ? ? Every move the male protagonist makes tells me that this is my little sweet wife. The male protagonist has an inexplicable love for Tinker Bell that is hard for me to understand. Every time I see the sentence "I habitually put a protective shield on little Doraemon" before a fight, it really makes me feel uncomfortable for a long time. I know you want to write about revolutionary friendship. The male protagonist wants to protect the life of little Doraemon, but there is no need to write a picture of protecting the little charming wife. The article explains that it's because of friends. Who would do this to a friend? Moreover, the male protagonist had a very good relationship with his childhood friend, but after time travel, things suddenly became not as good as before. Brother, do you know how strong the relationship between two low-school students and childhood friends can be, and they are two high school teenagers who have just passed their second year of middle school. There is also a comment section saying that Tinkerbell is not from Doraemon. I have read a version of Doraemon where the translation is called Tinker Bell, and the author also wrote about Doraemon. Who else but Doraemon would have no ears? Moreover, their breed is called a cat-shaped parenting robot, and each robot has a different name.

I read it in one go and it was very interesting. The subject matter is very novel and interesting. I personally look forward to Tinker Bell coming up with a variety of interesting props later on. Tinker Bell's props are the biggest highlight of this article. I hope the author can come up with more interesting ones, but forget about the ones that are too buggy and prone to collapse. Come on, author, I hope you won't be a eunuch.

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One for one, I will give you a five-star review, and you will give me the code [please update] [blowing kiss]

Not bad, but too short. The author has to stick to it and just update it every day.

Five-star praise, just because the protagonist does not lick dogs, and does not compete with others for women. I hope he will not get together with that woman in the future [Like] The back part looks a bit bland and not interesting. Slipping away

I think the plot setting is still okay! It may be the author's first time writing a book, but I personally think some of the plots and depictions of Tinkerbell are a little too deep. Overall, I felt like I just couldn't stand it anymore!

This book is so good, but it's too short and only has 100 chapters. Don't read it now. You must be fatter before reading it, especially for someone with a three-point fever like me. I'm like a cat scratching my head. I feel so uncomfortable. I really regret reading it now. [Crying] If I had known I had raised one to two or three hundred pictures before reading. (I would like to add here that I usually only read a book once and never catch up on it, because I usually lose interest in the book after reading it for two or three days. If I wait for the book to be finished and read it a second time, it usually stops after the second chapter. I always feel that I have already read it and know the plot after that, so I don't have the patience to read it. Then I forget about the previous plot, so I just gave up. If you have the patience to catch up on the book, I didn't tell you, because it is really good.)

I finally finished reading a book completely. Some others didn't want to read it halfway through, but this book was quite good in the end. A person can only have one spiritual beast from the beginning to the end. It's just that the ending feels a bit rushed. Well, it may need to be polished a little more. A lot of the content in the middle, I think, could be written a lot more if it were extended outwards. The rhythm of the entire article is also well controlled, with some dull parts and some exciting and fast-paced parts. Although I didn't have that kind of flow feeling after reading the whole book, the best thing is that there are no knives in this book, which is quite good.

Very beautiful. I mainly talk about some special places. The author is actually able to write Ketone Lily so beautifully, it's not like CP's sour love at all. As for driving from time to time, it's just right. (Not much but impressive) The early stage is boring, the early stage is boring, the early stage is boring Say important things three times [smile]

It's okay, but the people in the violent world are friendly to Tinker Bell, and the spiritual world treats Tinker Bell as a monster, which feels bad for Tinker Bell. In the end, a new parallel world is prepared for the people in the violent world, which is too easy for them. The ending of those people who hurt the people in the spiritual world is so good. In the end, the violent world no longer has those violent natives. The Qi world is still destroyed, and it will not be so convenient for the protagonist to upgrade. In fact, there are no aborigines in the violent Qi world that can be used as a secret training ground. Without those people who keep opening the space cracks, there will only be animals in it, even if there is a tide of beasts. Anyway, there is no one in that world, and the humans there have entered the parallel world created by the male protagonist, with aura but no violence.

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For the points given to Fatty Blue, from the very beginning, you can guess that the buggy props called phone booths were used in the end. Fatty Blue didn't have that many scenes, which didn't feel very interesting, and he didn't use a few props.

Originally, I had already rejected these proud books. (I pushed other books to more than 120, but I also returned them.) But this book is one of the few that can be read. But a book like this can be read. The plot is wonderful. Support the author. Come on Looking forward to the future

Generally speaking, the writing style of this book is okay, not unreadable, but it is still slightly lacking. There is still no problem between 8.0 And 9.0, But it lacks some funny elements. It is okay in the short term, but not long-term. I personally hope that the author will develop more funny. If surpassing 9.0 Is just through consuming childhood feelings or updating faster, it is not a long-term solution. I hope the author will continue to work hard and change the style to make this book better.

See Chapter 450. When I saw the title of the novel, I thought it would be childish, but after reading the content of the novel, I thought it was okay. The storyline is coherent and there are no major mistakes. The only flaw is that the protagonist is still too smooth, too deliberately made to be omnipotent, which makes people feel embarrassed that they have to leave three rooms and one living room. The protagonist is still a bit of a virgin. Don't be a rogue when reading, just follow and comment. Come on [currently in progress] In the end, he was still a eunuch. He is a little expert at digging holes, and he is responsible for killing and not burying them. So sorry!

Hey, the subject matter is very novel, but the writing is a bit soft. It is obvious that it is written by a girl. Then the pace is very slow in the early stage, but I don't think there are many chapters in general. That is, the early stage is delayed and the later stage is rushed. Then the author seems to create a scene of pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger and getting slapped in the face, but the writing is not very good, and it is uncomfortable to watch, but I still give it four stars. The subject matter is really good