The Red Mansion: the Development of a Daughter-In-Law

It's okay, keep working hard and don't let your level drop. I'm optimistic about you. What is the subject of the new book?

Cool article. The scene unfolds, the characters appear, and because of their strength, everything happens when they arrive. The interaction between the characters is very thin, the scenery and characters are not much to look at, and there is nothing of nature. The emotions are mainly small love charms, more like a person who cannot tell a story telling a more exciting event.

Everything else is okay, but the first-person perspective doesn't look very good, and I almost forgot the name of the protagonist. It seems that the author has a lot of confidence in writing a first-person novel when the third-person perspective dominates the world of novels.

The writing is average, but it's really cool. It's much better than expected.

One of the best red mansions in terms of outline, it's just too mythical

Man, he's a bit handsome

It's very well written. The author keeps writing according to his own ideas. Come on [laughing]

Very good, but we just don't have enough sons [laughing evilly]

Super beautiful, come on, come on, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

A very novel Red Mansion fanfic

It's wonderful, why are there so few comments?

It's very nice, but there are not many women in it?

The idea is good, but the protagonist has great abilities and does little to benefit the country and the people. It can be said to be a cool story among the time-travel novels of Dream of Red Mansions. It basically involves the key characters. Except for the evil ones, almost all of them have a happy ending.

Wonderful presentation, come on, don't be a eunuch

Very good, keep it up. I don't know why the rating is low. Someone can improve it? ? [Laughing awkwardly]

How to say it? Author, keep up the good work

It starts from a perspective other than the Jia family, which is very interesting.