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It's very interesting, it's my favorite genre, and the subject matter is the first time I've read it. It's more in line with my taste. The only drawback is that it's too short and there are few updates. I would like to give the author a flower to encourage him.

It is a novel worth reading. Because it is a daily theme, the plot is relatively bland. The interaction between the characters and plot characters is reasonable, logical and designed. It is a rare good book on Tomato. When I read more than 60 chapters, it was really boring to be bored. It was really boring to force a girl to arrange a lot of inner drama.

The book was written on Tomato. It is very novel and good. What is the author's group number? [Thoughts]

To be honest, it's very good, comparable to most books. Unfortunately, the cover and title are not good. Just change the title and cover of the book. Because the popularity of Dragon Ball is not as high as it used to be, and the first impression many people have of Dragon Ball is a fighting anime. So I usually don't click into this novel. I accidentally clicked in and read a little bit before I thought it was very good [please update][please update] So cool! Forced recommendation [full] [full]

It's one of the best comics I've ever read. One word: good. Two words: very good. Three words: very good.

It's pretty good-looking, except that Pullu is a little weird and a little bit poisonous, but he's not that outrageous. In short, I feel that if it weren't for the cat named Purlu, the rating would have gone up. @Rotten life

Really beautiful, highly recommended! One of the few well-written comics on Tomato. The Saiyan setting is also well integrated with the daily world. Highly recommended!

This kind of relationship with Kaioshin is similar to the relationship with the system, but this is not the kind of protagonist who relies on the system and the abilities he was given to succeed. It is not like he obviously relies on the system, and then gets a lot of abilities and good things, and then is still there; standing on the commanding heights, commenting and criticizing i. This kind of greed is like a snake swallowing an elephant, and in fact, it has no actual ability or talent. It feels like crap. To be honest, after being saved a life, I should not say I am grateful for saving my life, but I should repay him as I should! And then if you don't complete the mission, get rid of your life? As long as you don't constantly threaten him with death and ask him to do excessive, troublesome and impossible things, normal and natural communication is fine. The protagonist has a distinct personality and has goals in his actions and actions. There are no inexplicable or embarrassing things or words. There are specific events and growth trajectories. Love and emotions are also very interesting.

It's well written, but it's a pity that the protagonist's combat power is a bit weak. To be honest, when I saw the title, I thought it was based on Invincible. The more I watched it, the more uninteresting it became, especially the part about the Seven Star Dragon. Although the plot of the teacher did not meet my interests, the writing was still online. If there were 9 points, I would give it, but it's a pity it's a five-star rating.

The author writes really well. Completely everyday romance novels are very boring. Some extraordinary elements are mixed in to spice up the novel without overpowering it. Almost every chapter is sweet, and each person's role in it is also very distinct. It is more like a group drama. It can be said that it is one of the few Tomato novels that brings the comprehensive comic novel to life.

It's a pretty good daily manga, but I didn't like Tuanzi, and the author seemed to have said that Qianhua wasn't the heroine either. You will still feel a little uncomfortable. I really like this kind of daily comprehensive comics. I have read several million-dollar books from Chengzi on the platform next door. Are there any other books of this kind that you can recommend to me? Thank you.

This is a very ordinary book. Well, even if it is a daily book, it is not about love? What's the harem, what's the technique, what's the battle. This is a very ordinary book, well, it's just about daily life. It's pretty good. [Smile] Really good

I encourage you to give 5 stars for the comprehensive comic category. The pace is a bit slow. Also, I don't like the setting of Saiyans very much. It is not as good as the proficiency panel or the reincarnated boss, but it is still 5 stars. After all, there are too few comprehensive comic novels. Oh, by the way, a big difficulty in comprehensive comics is that it is difficult for everyone to understand. For example, many characters are anime characters that readers have not seen, which will be a bit fragmented. It is recommended to post more pictures and explain the character settings, personalities, etc. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I've finished reading other comics, and there aren't many that I can read, so I picked this book up [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Overall it's okay I particularly like Dragon Ball (although I haven't read Dragon Ball Super), and I also like to read variety comics. Combining the two is indeed difficult to write. Many novels with battle series and daily series have difficulty in controlling the focus. This one is pretty good so far. I hope the author will write according to his own outline and not be led away from the outline by some "readers" when there are more people writing. Then the readers point out unreasonable things and hope that the author will correct them or explain them quickly (it's hard to find a Dragon Ball Plus that doesn't "die suddenly") Finally, the author pays attention to rest, and the body comes first (have you rested well? Update quickly [smile])

The plot is relatively novel, and basically has everything that should be there. Mainly, I feel that Tuanzi is a bit embarrassed. According to the character of the protagonist, he should not be interested in Tuanzi. But in fact, whether Tuanzi is a god or with Daishi, I think it is okay. However, I think Tuanzi and Daishi progress too fast. In the original work, Tuanzi is very gentle to everyone, and the same is true for Teacher Da, but it is mixed with some guilt, and he fell in love with Teacher Da after going through some things later.

This book is good and can be read quite a bit. This author respects the original work very much, and almost all of his character is written out. Although it is a harem novel, you can read it. The author's writing style is also good, not too cumbersome, and can be read. It's high quality

It's pretty good from what I've seen. It's great. I wish I could update it soon.

It's a very good book, although I haven't read many of it, but the results don't seem to be very good. It's a pity that such a good book is rare.

Not bad, not bad. I originally thought there would be a big difference in the style of painting, but the author's very cool operation is to add a setting of the first life, which makes the Saiyans and the love painting style related and there is almost no sense of inconsistency, and the characterization is also more delicate and reasonable. Please update more [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

There's not much to say, okay, okay, I won't go into details about the plots that should be skipped, such as the fat guy in the service department who writes novels, and each plot won't be too procrastinating. Sometimes when I get tired, I will look at the table of contents and think about skipping it, but I will find that there are not many plot chapters, and then I will patiently finish reading it, mainly because the rhythm is so good! ! 666666

Needless to say, this is the best one among all the comic books I have read. I have had a few novels that fit my taste, but the author stopped updating them, so this book is really good. I hope the author will not stop updating them all of a sudden.

This novel ranks among the top three comic novels I have read. Others are either discontinued or unfinished. Come on, author, I will support you💪

As long as it keeps being updated, it doesn't suck, and it doesn't become toxic, I can keep reading this book. It's very good so far, five stars for you. [Please update]

Very good book, I think highly of you as the author

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it's discontinued. This book should be worth reading by more people. Maybe it's because the title of the book doesn't attract people?

To be honest, this book is one of the best comics I have ever read. It's a pity that it has been discontinued.

After reading it for so long, based on the characters of each heroine, I infer that the author's XP is... Contrast cuteness! [Sinister smile]

From various aspects, this book is also quite explosive in the comics industry.

Compared with most of the comprehensive comics on male channels nowadays, this one is definitely above the standard. The author writes very well. I can only say that if I can't write it to death, I will write it to death.

The high rating is not unreasonable. The writing style makes me very comfortable to read. I haven't seen a book like this on Tomato for a long time [Like][Like][Like]