From the Start, I Became a Celestial Master. How Could I Let You Roam the Journey to the West?

Come, the author reads with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

Damn it, you are so awesome, brother, come on, let me give you a suggestion, 100 chapters updated every day, this is enough for anyone to read.

It's very interesting. This is the first time I see Journey to the West from a mortal perspective.

The score should not be so low. According to the current quality, it should be nine points. Of course, it is based on the tomato score, which is already very good. Secondly, I hope that the 81st disaster on the journey to the west will be as fast-paced as possible. Some important disasters can be chosen to foreshadow or set the pace. After all, it would be meaningless to follow the 81st disaster. According to the Guanyin Temple, the pace is still very fast. There is also a battle power setting, which is not clear. Although it is written that Guanyin is careless, it is too much to be able to burn Guanyin to death. And judging from the description of the protagonist's IQ, it should not be difficult to see that the author set the anchor point of Journey to the West. Since cutting down a country can destroy all subsequent anchor points, it is better to let the protagonist follow the army to kill it, to show the military power, and to strengthen Li Shimin's strength. After all, according to this writing, Li Shimin must also be the emperor, and the stronger the emperor, the more unified the imperial power will be. A few tips for the author

Journey to the West fanfiction/prehistoric times The fate of the human race, the rise of the human race, changing fate against the will of heaven The first disciple of the human Taoism (Human Taoism is different from the immortal Taoism), the first disciple Wu Zhao, the second disciple Yang Chan (the third sister of Yang Jian), the third disciple Wukong (Hongmeng Purple Qi, the source of this setting), the four Ao*xin, the five eight precepts, the sixth enlightenment, and the seventh enlightenment color (White Bone Essence). The second batch of Shence troops were buried in Tang San. The plot of the Buddhas and Heavenly Courts in the West setting up dangers and constantly changing their fate against the will of heaven The plot feels a bit like the Chinese comic "Wolf Demon Wukong", and it also has a passing feel.

The plot structure of the book is good. It does not stick to the stereotypes and completely follows the character settings of the previous prehistoric novels. It adds a lot of new character settings. It is very exciting, but there are a lot of typos and the update is too slow [smile]

"Let the world completely forget me" We all perch under the tree of wisdom and try to read the world Read from the soil, read from the rain Then he transformed into a white bird and climbed up the branch. Finally caught the crucial leaf ever I am the only individual in the world who can dream in my dream Everyone falls asleep after dark Strange thoughts float in people's minds Some rolled to the ground, some floated to the sky It connects everything into a dazzling network Among the three thousand worlds, there is a small world All destiny is boiling here I gradually understand These indescribable and ever-changing things It's the most profound thing in the world only them Only then can we completely drive away the madness Only dream Only in this way can consciousness be awakened from the deepest darkness. I am a person who makes propositions, and I am also a person who seeks solutions. Save the world with the world's dreams Was my answer Now You also found your own answer I will return all dreams to the world People of Sumeru, farewell May you have sweet dreams tonight

Alas, there is absolutely no need to have a system, and there is no need to write that mortals cannot cultivate immortals. It's just very difficult. You can definitely be a cultivator, but the protagonist has a very strong identity. That would be very nice. But after you add the system, it feels like an invincible text. Also, your introduction says that the Buddha will not be destroyed even if it is destroyed. It also says that there is no need to destroy the Buddha in Journey to the West, but your system relies on luck and you can completely eliminate all those who hinder the development of the Tang Dynasty or Taoism.

It's so crazy, it was actually the Taoist leader who personally led the team on the journey to the west [laughing and crying]

What to say! The writing is really good, but there is a sense of fearless courage! When there is no self or form, one sees the Tathagata. The definition of immortals and gods is not in the mortal dimension, but in the article the immortals and gods are pulled into the mortal dimension. It is refreshing, but I just can't think about it in detail. Of course, it is unfair to say this. After all, Fengshenyan also brings gods to the dimension of mortals. If you think about it carefully, you will feel a sense of absurdity that shakes the sky. Of course, this is just my personal perception and does not involve objectivity.