If You Become a Heavenly Master at the Beginning, How Can You Be Allowed to Travel to the West?

Come, the author reads with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

Damn it, you are so awesome, brother, come on, let me give you a suggestion, 100 chapters updated every day, this is enough for anyone to read.

It's very interesting. This is the first time I see Journey to the West from a mortal perspective.

The score should not be so low. According to the current quality, it should be nine points. Of course, it is based on the tomato score, which is already very good. Secondly, I hope that the 81st disaster on the journey to the west will be as fast-paced as possible. Some important disasters can be chosen to foreshadow or set the pace. After all, it would be meaningless to follow the 81st disaster. According to the Guanyin Temple, the pace is still very fast. There is also a battle power setting, which is not clear. Although it is written that Guanyin is careless, it is too much to be able to burn Guanyin to death. And judging from the description of the protagonist's IQ, it should not be difficult to see that the author set the anchor point of Journey to the West. Since cutting down a country can destroy all subsequent anchor points, it is better to let the protagonist follow the army to kill it, to show the military power, and to strengthen Li Shimin's strength. After all, according to this writing, Li Shimin must also be the emperor, and the stronger the emperor, the more unified the imperial power will be. A few tips for the author

Journey to the West fanfiction/prehistoric times The fate of the human race, the rise of the human race, changing fate against the will of heaven The first disciple of the human Taoism (Human Taoism is different from the immortal Taoism), the first disciple Wu Zhao, the second disciple Yang Chan (the third sister of Yang Jian), the third disciple Wukong (Hongmeng Purple Qi, the source of this setting), the four Ao*xin, the five eight precepts, the sixth enlightenment, and the seventh enlightenment color (White Bone Essence). The second batch of Shence troops were buried in Tang San. The plot of the Buddhas and Heavenly Courts in the West setting up dangers and constantly changing their fate against the will of heaven The plot feels a bit like the Chinese comic "Wolf Demon Wukong", and it also has a passing feel.

The plot structure of the book is good. It does not stick to the stereotypes and completely follows the character settings of the previous prehistoric novels. It adds a lot of new character settings. It is very exciting, but there are a lot of typos and the update is too slow [smile]

Alas, there is absolutely no need to have a system, and there is no need to write that mortals cannot cultivate immortals. It's just very difficult. You can definitely be a cultivator, but the protagonist has a very strong identity. That would be very nice. But after you add the system, it feels like an invincible text. Also, your introduction says that the Buddha will not be destroyed even if it is destroyed. It also says that there is no need to destroy the Buddha in Journey to the West, but your system relies on luck and you can completely eliminate all those who hinder the development of the Tang Dynasty or Taoism.

"Let the world completely forget me" We all perch under the tree of wisdom and try to read the world Read from the soil, read from the rain Then he transformed into a white bird and climbed up the branch. Finally caught the crucial leaf ever I am the only individual in the world who can dream in my dream Everyone falls asleep after dark Strange thoughts float in people's minds Some rolled to the ground, some floated to the sky It connects everything into a dazzling network Among the three thousand worlds, there is a small world All destiny is boiling here I gradually understand These indescribable and ever-changing things It's the most profound thing in the world only them Only then can we completely drive away the madness Only dream Only in this way can consciousness be awakened from the deepest darkness. I am a person who makes propositions, and I am also a person who seeks solutions. Save the world with the world's dreams Was my answer Now You also found your own answer I will return all dreams to the world People of Sumeru, farewell May you have sweet dreams tonight

It's so crazy, it was actually the Taoist leader who personally led the team on the journey to the west [laughing and crying]

What to say! The writing is really good, but there is a sense of fearless courage! When there is no self or form, one sees the Tathagata. The definition of immortals and gods is not in the mortal dimension, but in the article the immortals and gods are pulled into the mortal dimension. It is refreshing, but I just can't think about it in detail. Of course, it is unfair to say this. After all, Fengshenyan also brings gods to the dimension of mortals. If you think about it carefully, you will feel a sense of absurdity that shakes the sky. Of course, this is just my personal perception and does not involve objectivity.

Such good-looking books are really rare on Tomato. The author should hurry up and read more.

It is very rare for an author to have such a unique and profound understanding of Journey to the West. The writing and plot are excellent. I also like his personal explanation of the world of Journey to the West very much. The author implements the spirit of self-improvement into the soul of human race, and points out the merits and demerits of right and wrong very penetratingly. Except for the stable update, the author has no major outbursts, and other parts are very good. Come on, author, and happy New Year.

It's just entertainment, don't take it too seriously, there are thousands of people, just have fun!

It's good-looking. It has changed the origin of the classic protagonist in the past. It is no longer someone who has existed since the beginning of Pangu or Sanqing or something like that and has an awesome identity at the beginning. The plot is novel and is no longer fixed to the common plot. I hope the author will follow up soon and publish more good-looking books! ! ! !

Okay, okay, it feels really good, especially the game between the parties is really exciting, the logic and writing are also good, and it doesn't deviate or change much from the prehistoric times we are familiar with, it's good, good. There are some minor poisons, which are innocuous. It's just that there are a little more places where all parties spit, which makes it a little more exciting. The finale feels a bit rushed, not so perfect, and the foreshadowing is not so detailed. Overall, good.

The story is very interesting. The themes of Journey to the West, Fengshen, and Ancient Times cannot be said to be novel, but the details are well controlled. It can give people a sense of satisfaction, but it is not as cliche as ordinary refreshing novels. It makes people look forward to the update (it would be better if it can be updated more frequently). It sucks, the ending is so unexpected

MVP of this article: Poof, all the gods and Buddhas sprayed [face covering]

The fate of human beings, the conspiracy of Buddhism, and the Taoist leader's journey to the west are pretty good themes. There are a few typos. Ninety chapters were updated in fifteen months from mid-February last year to mid-May this year. There is a shortage of books to read, and updates are not guaranteed. It's finished, a bit rushed

This book looks interesting. I give it five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. I hope the next update will be as interesting as the previous one.

It's a rare good book that can be read. Occasionally there are typos, so I'll figure it out by myself.

It has a very interesting setting, and the plot description is also very interesting. It is compact and well-written, and it is not a simple and mindless story. It's half behind the scenes, I'm looking forward to the disasters that will follow, and the female goose country [laughs][laughs][laughs] The prehistoric type likes to watch it all at once [I'm about to cry] Please give me more support from the author.

It's a very interesting book that cleans up Laozi and Nuwa. But doesn't this show the kindness and gratitude in the hearts of the descendants of Yan and Huang? I don't want to believe that the mother who founded the human race in mythology would give up her own children. I don't believe that the teacher who taught me is an immoral person.

By the way, the writing is pretty good, but seeing your updated status makes me feel like I won't survive until you finish the book.

Be unique and interesting,

OK, average. Can be seen. The Little Prehistoric World Version of Journey to the West (I want to give it 3 and a half stars, but I can't)

Very innovative, innovation is king.

See Chapter 263. It's a very logical and creative version of Journey to the West. I really like it. It smacks of anti-Buddhism and theocracy. Wave the flag and cheer! Generate electricity and comment, read and return cause and effect🤐

A different journey to the west. A different scenery. One, an extraordinary Tang Dynasty.

The background is very good and novel, and the story content is very interesting. It is far superior to the popular novels about Journey to the West. (Don't read his introduction. The author should have changed the previous chapters and it has nothing to do with the introduction)

A different kind of prehistoric novel, quite imaginative and very exciting