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Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! Chasing for updates every day is so cool, haha ​​[Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Shan'er is different from other female protagonists in the female channel, she really has no love between men and women for the male protagonist. Hahaha [Blowing Kiss] [Sending Hearts] I like this. The male protagonist loves her so much, but the female protagonist doesn't care at all anyway. Although Shan'er is not strong yet, it's really cool to see that the male protagonist is already attracted and Shan'er is at least a bit sympathetic to him. Looking forward to the heroine becoming stronger and updating quickly [Punch Out]

I really like it. The heroine is indeed not a perfect character. Most of her actions are consistent with the identity of an ordinary modern person who has traveled to a strange world. It is quite logical and the language is beautiful, especially the description of ancient costumes, which is very graphic. At present, it seems that the heroine is a growth-oriented heroine. As a reader who doesn't like to read mindless novels and golden finger halo, this novel is worth recommending. Why did the rating become so low? [Shocked][Shocked][Shocked] It's obviously very good-looking

I really like the author Da Da's articles. I followed the last one every day. I finished it. I have been waiting for the new article. I didn't wait until I was busy with work. But when I came up yesterday and saw the new article, I was like, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It's well written, interesting, and very immersive. The perspective is unique. The heroine is childish and stupid, heartless, and loves to act coquettish and pretend to be cute. She looks irritating and pitiful. She wants to kick the stupid ones but at the same time, she is sympathetic. I wonder how the author later transformed Cuscuta into a strong man of cultivation, and then trampled under his feet the master who had been tolerant of her?

I think this book is very delicately written. There is no perfect person in life, regardless of his advantages or disadvantages. His perspective brings me a different world. He just wants to live, and he does not have any righteousness, so I think this book is really great!

WC, the male and female protagonists of this book are particularly novel. I have read quite a lot of articles on cultivating immortals, but they never deviate from the same sect. Most of them have a very orthodox feeling of group orientation. But this one gave me a completely different feeling. 013 Is actually quite charming. As for the male protagonist, if you put him in the environment in which he grew up, he is quite good (of course, sometimes he is not). Sometimes I'm quite annoyed with them. But their identities, experiences and current trends. I think it is unlikely that they will be HE. The male protagonist is in a very conflicting mood. I feel that he likes the heroine a little bit, but not like us in the orthodox sense now, with a sense of charity. He asked the heroine to make some sacrifices that he thought were acceptable (he had no choice, he was always in this living environment.) But in fact, he was also quite selfish. Everyone is selfish, there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe because I read too many sweet pet novels, I thought I wouldn't be able to accept it. Actually it's okay. There is a kind of sadness that people shaped by different environments in an era cannot come together. There is a feeling of chicken and duck talking together.

I almost thought I was going to write a story about abuse. There are a lot of controversies in this book. The character of the heroine, the character of the hero, the behavior of the hero, and his class status. It is reasonable and realistic. The content is exciting. It is quite interesting to read.

The heroine has a distinct personality: Compared with the perfect heroines in other novels, she has her own shortcomings, but her character is also a realistic portrayal! I hope I don't kill the male protagonist as the name suggests [laughing] I look forward to practicing and spreading sugar soon [laughing]

It's so beautiful, the plot is so delicate, I love it so much. The author will update it soon. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Is the author a male? After reading your book, I see your gender and I really want to marry you, hahahahaha

Beautiful and beautiful, this is the most realistic heroine I have ever seen. I feel jealous, some emotions are very real

The reviews are mixed, and the characters are interesting and complex. Everyone will encounter a favorite book. I like it and have high expectations. I hope that the story can be shown as the author intended and depict a gorgeous story. The heroine is indeed lazy, she is just an ordinary person and has no golden fingers. The male protagonist is in a feudal society and has a desire to control the female protagonist, but not to the extent that she is the joy of life for him and relieves loneliness. As it is now, he still has complaints and desires for the female protagonist. He is very down-to-earth, and his appearance is not shocking. Looking forward to the end I may have to keep this book of mine

I have finished reading the existing chapters in the past few days and I really like the writing style of this novel. This style of novel is rare. The heroine's writing is very realistic. She comes to the world of cultivation as a mortal, and does not have so many magical powers. It is normal to run into obstacles. When the seven-person team is doing tasks, you can still see that the heroine is quite smart and has a flexible mind. The male protagonist is not like other novels. He has a very good identity at the beginning. Since meeting the female protagonist, the iceberg has turned to warm water. From then on, he has revolved around the female protagonist regardless of gain or loss. Wu Ming is very real, and his emotions gradually progress very well. From hating the approach of women to the indulgence and pampering now, it is very comfortable to watch. There is no awkward feeling like kissing and instantly falling in love. I laughed all the time while reading this novel. I really liked the scene where Shan'er flirted with the male protagonist. It was very sweet. It was so annoying for these hypocritical immortals. I was always looking forward to the next chapter where they would get their lunch boxes, hahaha. Finally, I'm looking forward to the following plot. If I keep updating, I can write about my cultivation reaching the point of going to the upper world and traveling in the upper world. I can also enter the Mirror of Time to travel to modern times and travel to other worlds. If I hadn't been busy catching up on my winter vacation homework recently (I still have 9 sketches to draw), I would have wanted to spend an afternoon drawing the characters in the novel. Many characters are written with flesh and blood and full of emotions. It's great, I watch it every day or two.

Coming to this book from another book by the author, the male and female protagonists of the two books have one thing in common, that is, the male protagonist is very strong and strong, while the female protagonist is weak and arrogant, and is so weak that she cannot live without the male protagonist. No matter how hard she tries to become self-reliant, it is useless, any way out will be blocked, and it is difficult to move forward without relying on the male protagonist. Both books are the same. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist and worries about gains and losses. Then the female protagonist initially seems to have no heart and only cares about her own little calculations. In the end, she loves the male protagonist so much. The same path, just changing a different background environment. What is worth following is that the author's writing style is very good, the writing is very interesting, and the human nature is very real. However, after reading the book for a long time, it is inevitable that the relationship and personality of the characters in the two books overlap.

I like it so much. I think it is very real. The heroine is well designed. Modern people travel to ancient times, and even in the world of cultivation, there will be differences in three views and class concepts. The heroine's constant efforts and little struggles really touched me. There is no routine in ordinary novels. Some people say that the heroine is the heroine. I will say this, if 013 had not had this character, Mo Wuming would not like her at all. Don't say why 013 does not like Mo Wuming, because from the beginning, Mo Wuming just regarded her as a possession and a pet, just like a dog at home. You like her very much and dote on her, but you will not equate her to a human being in a low position. 013 No matter in the mortal world or There is no dignity at all in the world of immortality. Others despise her and only regard her as a maid of the male protagonist. She is just like an object that can be summoned and taken away. She has no control over her own life. She has been desperately trying to prove herself and get rid of these shackles. Therefore, the female protagonist is not a love brain, she just wants to become strong. There is no doubt that she is not in love with Mary Sue [Love]

This book is really good-looking. Its rating in Tomato is low. Many 9-point books in Tomato are not very good. However, the writing style of this book is good, the psychological description is delicate, the characters are unique, the plot is counter-conventional, the characters are well established, and the personalities of other characters are also very distinct. I feel that the world of immortality described by the author depicts the thrills of monks and God taking life away and the danger of people's hearts. The rating is really too low. Maybe it is because the theme of immortality is relatively niche. I passionately wrote a 600-word book review at 2:30 in the middle of the night. I quit and checked something and it was gone. My heart couldn't bear it anymore and I continued to write it again without passion. It really made me more heartbroken than not saving the thesis. After all, the thesis was a piece of rubbish cobbled together without passion or emotion.

You can watch it, yes, but if you want to read cool articles, don't expect it. It was very frustrating to watch. The female protagonist was bullied from the beginning to the end, but she still relied on the male protagonist's talents. There are really all evil people in this world, but the ones I like the most are the snake mother and the two little monsters. They are the only ones who are really kind to the heroine, and they don't do it because of demands.

I really hope that the heroine can have the strength to protect herself, instead of being ambitious and unable to practice. It is a very realistic novel, not bad.

The work produced by this author must be excellent. But he is so good at telling stories and his writing is so good. Look for this author. The plot of the story develops unexpectedly.

The writing is very good. Although the heroine is an imperfect character, selfish, does whatever it takes to achieve her goals, and engages in petty theft, she is an invincible little strong person who has the spirit of cultivating despite repeated failures, which makes me want to continue watching. The male protagonist is relatively unlikable. I am the heroine of the novel, and it really hurts me to see the heroine being beaten and scolded by the male protagonist earlier. Finally, I suddenly realized that I had read another book by the author, Lin Yiyi, and it was good. No matter he or be, I hope to torture the male protagonist more, please, please.

The secret plot in the middle is very funny, the whole text flows smoothly and the writing is good. However, the ending feels a bit fast and could be improved. There is a sudden he feeling at the end, but it is still good to watch. Recommended

The whole article is very real and novel. It is a very realistic world of immortality. 013 Has a very good character. She has never believed in fate and has been working hard to change. It's just that at the end, some of the progress was too fast, and in the end, I still relied on the male protagonist, and I wanted to see 013 frighten himself. An ordinary person who travels through time has basically no golden fingers except for the beauty in cultivating immortals. There are many crises. 013 Is very strong, very strong. So many people use her to deceive her, and she has never met a good person.

It looks good. When I first read it, I felt that the character of the heroine was not like other characters. I wanted to give up on the novel. But after reading it for a long time, I realized that the writing is very realistic. However, the heroine should be one of the most miserable heroines [Laughing and crying] I hope the heroine will become stronger soon.

When I read Chapter 194, I liked the first part very much. The heroine is in the world of immortal cultivation, and she really has no spiritual roots and cannot practice. It is very interesting to see her working hard to survive! The heroine's character is also very special; The reason why I decided to abandon the story was that I felt that the heroine was still very weak halfway through, and that the entire world of immortality was an open and honest system of the weak and the strong, bullying the weak. I want to see the female protagonist rise up and be on an equal footing with the male protagonist, and see the male protagonist change his mind. I also want to be willing to believe that the whole world is on the whole for the better. There can be conspiracies and schemes behind the scenes, but on the surface it must be fair and just.

Damn, it's so beautiful. Why is the rating so low? And what I've been following recently are all serials. I don't like to read cool articles. I think this article is really realistic. In fairy tales, you have to be bullied even if you don't have the strength to be good-looking. Moreover, the characters and images of the male and female protagonists are very distinctive, especially the male protagonist. Alas, the God with always poisonous tongue is recommended for the whole life of Tsundere. Come on, author, write quickly I am really picky about reading books. I throw away some books after reading them halfway. The male protagonist is good, and the plot seems to be good so far. I don't hate the female protagonist at all, and I can even understand why the male protagonist can have feelings for her (I want a male or female protagonist, I like "waste" beauties). The author should not be affected by readers' comments, stick to his own outline and characters. I also wish you good health and more articles [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is unconventional, every character stands up, and people are not nice to each other for no reason. Looking forward to the following plot٩(๑^o^๑)۶The author's writing style is also very good, come on~

I have read all three of the author's books. I still like Cousin Zhao the most. The love in this book is full of selfishness, deception, prejudice and mutual suspicion. The only hopeful ending of this book is be, where the male protagonist rises to his level of immortality, and the female protagonist returns to modern times through the realm of time and returns to the embrace of her family. Why

Four stars for now, mainly because I feel a little confused about the daily life of the male and female protagonists, hahaha, maybe it's just weird, and hiss, the setting of the female protagonist is a bit different from what I imagined, and the male supervisor has a lot of feelings. I've always been obsessed with the female protagonist, she's not good at this or that, I'm just a little obsessed with it, let's see what happens later, I'll leave this comment first [face covering]

Tomato has recommended this book to me several times. I usually read more fantasy and ancient Chinese novels, but I haven't clicked on this book's title several times. I didn't expect it to be quite special. I've read so many fantasy novels. I can't even remember the female protagonists. Their personalities are either cold and dull or ghostly girls. However, the more popular female fantasy videos on Tomato are mostly non-brained novels, which are not good-looking. They have a little bit of logic, but brainy novels are not necessarily more popular than brainless novels. This article is very good-looking, and the language is also very fluent. The market for fantasy novels is huge. Authors, please don't give up fantasy novels completely. Fantasy female counterattack novels are most popular here. As long as you master a few plots, many of them are not as good as the author. They are all very popular. Last week, I saw a novel about fairy cultivation that was as childish as a child. The plot seems to go on and on without stopping, but it is childish and irrational everywhere. There is no logic. A lot of people say it is good, and hundreds of thousands of people have read it. I hope to see another fantasy-themed work by the author, which is at least logical. The ability to create characters and grasp the full text is better than most authors [send heart]

It's really good. Every character is real and vivid, and there is no absolute good or evil. There is no other fairy tale that makes you look like a master or a junior sister, and you are so loved. Although that kind of writing is very exciting, it is also fake. This one feels like a real character. I hope that the heroine will get what she wants in the future and can decide her own destiny. What we are saying is that it looks good. Can you add some meat? You can also hang it on other platforms.

A very special truth. Ordinary people are cultivating immortal literature. I really like 013. I have a bad hand and no golden finger. Every time I finally get the demon elixir, my hope of cultivation will be crushed by others. But 013 is always looking for opportunities and ways out. The more I look at the energy in him, the more I feel sad and admired. The author's character portrayal is very good. Everyone has their own thoughts and purposes. The road to immortality is full of conspiracies and calculations, and people's hearts are sinister. It is not just a cool story about facial expressions. It was a bit disappointing to see the male and female protagonists together in the end, but according to the rules they could not get married, and their children could only be recognized as doormen. Even gods have their rules, and in the end they are always within the rules. It is a very profound article!