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Give yourself a try~ I often conceive a world myself, and then imagine the lives of the characters in it. This is the motivation for me to start writing novels. I had conceived many themes before, and because I really liked HP, I started to actually write novels and publish them. Write down what I think about, think about it slowly, and miss it slowly

Cedric White Moonlight! The love written by the author is so sweet! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

This book is really great, the author writes very well! The emotional line is obvious, the heroine has a good personality, and all the characters have their own obvious characteristics. It is different from the routines of other novels. I give this novel full marks. Big cheers for the author＾0＾~ The author is great, it's not enough. Your dear little reader has nothing to read now. I know it's hard for you, so is it okay to have ten chapters a day? [I'm about to cry]

It looks great, I will keep updating it! Keep up the good work, author! Kiss, kiss

The author largely followed the original plan. Don't let those outsiders interfere. The male protagonist was originally Draco. The titles of the books are all Draco, and everyone can read them clearly. If you agree to a spin-off, she\they will go even further and want to change the male protagonist midway. Whoever touches Draco, I will be in a hurry [angry]

@Author, the book is really good. I have read so many chapters and I am looking forward to the following content. But I have many questions. I hope you can help me answer them. 1: When the heroine graduated, Xiaolong was only in the fifth grade. How did Xiaolong get along with the heroine after that? Did the heroine stay in school and become a professor (this is my assumption). If not, how did the heroine develop a relationship with Xiaolong? 2: If Sai died in the Triwizard Tournament, the heroine who was his fiancée at that time would be so sad that it would be difficult to come out. Then what plot would be arranged for the heroine to come out? Because the author said that Xiaolong and the heroine should have been together after the war. And I have a few ideas After the heroine graduated, she was too good at alchemy and was hired as an alchemist or potions professor at Hogwarts (because the author has always written that the heroine was very good at potions and even the teachers praised him) and he filled the vacancy of a personal tutor. As for the relationship between Xiaolong and the heroine, I think hanging on by a thread or almost parting ways during the battle is the best way to make the heroine realize her feelings for Xiaolong. (Personal idea) @

I still like Cedric. If the male protagonist were not him, it would be the same as sadomasochism [crying][crying][crying][crying] (Personal suggestion, there is no insult to Draco, it's just that he didn't show it, and the female protagonist has low emotional intelligence)

Woohoo, can you draw Seid to life? It's so gentle. I don't want him to die [cry][cry][cry]

I've read a little bit so far, and it's quite good, but there are a few people who have read it. I hope more people can see it. The main reason is that the author has checked some information. There may be some places where he doesn't understand it well, and there may be mistakes, but at least some details should be written very well. I'm really looking forward to the following content٩(๑^o^๑)۶ It's really detailed, the logic is smooth, and the writing is really good! ! ! My God, the description of my first love with Cedric is really like, wow, it's not a loss to invest in a stock. Oh my God, the corners of my mouth keep turning up, it's such a sweet love! Ahhhhhhhhhh [admiration]

The author's writing is wonderful, describing Aphra's sadness at losing her lover. Cedric's love for Aphra expressed at the last moment is beautiful. He 𣎴 wanted her to be trapped in his vortex.

I really like the hostess design! Draco's tsundere is so cute, and Cedric is so heartwarming! The author will update faster! Any author who doesn't update thousands of times a day is not a good author.

The author is awesome [blowing kiss] why is it still not popular [crazy]

The writing is very good, but isn't the male protagonist Draco? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I came to watch it for Draco, but it turned out that all the sweet scenes between the heroine and Ced were [almost crying] Although Ced is very good, I want to watch Draco [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Ah ah ah, what kind of fairy sibling love is this? I love it. [Adoration] [Admiration]

Very well written, I like it very much.

Not! ! ! Can't live without it! Ced! ! ! Gaia! ! ! ! My sed!

Cedric White Moonlight really smells good

It's really good-looking, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I really can't get over it. The author should work hard to write a different ending between the heroine and Seid. Please please 🙏 I rarely comment on books before, and I have never written any long comments. But this book is really good.

It should be there in half an hour [thinking]

It's great to watch, but I'm really sorry for Cedric's passing [crying] [like]

It's so beautiful, but Cedric is too sharp ಥ_ಥ

Great writing [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on and update (ง •̀_•́)ง

Please, this book is super nice! (This is my first book review)

I have always preferred reading Harry Potter fan fiction. This book is the best I have ever read. The author is great. Please keep updating.

I feel so pitiful for Draco

It's a good read, thank you to the author✊! 😘

Not bad, so did Seid survive? Damn it seems like I just skipped to the last chapter to see the ending.

When will they get together? Draco and Furla

It's super cool, thank you to the author! ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و