After transmigrating to the cultivation world, he awakened the [Super Invincible Supreme System for Laying Low Until You Become Invincible]
He immediately hid in the remote mountains and forests, planning to stay there until he was invincible before emerging!
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“Why are you running? We’ve been together for years!” Li Xiao said with a smile, looking at the System in his hand after becoming invincible.
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“I thought I was already invincible.”
“Until I realized…”
“I can’t even create a rock that I can’t lift!”
[New novel: “Didn’t Awaken? Then I’ll Cultivate Immortality!”]
[While everyone else is still struggling with the limits of a single supernatural ability, Lin Feng is fretting over which spell to use]
There is no one there, so let me give you some encouragement. The author performed very well as a new reader. He did an excellent job in shaping the character and mentality of the protagonist. The supporting characters are also eye-catching. The plot is relatively smooth and the writing is relatively excellent. Even the ending is so philosophical (laughs). Overall, this article can be said to be excellent, with a smooth plot and a unique style. There are no obvious shortcomings except for the short length and the abrupt ending. After all, if you want to give some encouragement to new authors, the evaluation should be more relaxed [note]
Only those who can travel back and forth are truly invincible. You cannot be someone who wants to go back but cannot.
6. Does the author still want to make the characters in the book transcend reality to change his real life situation? [Sneaky smile]
This Chapter 0 is wonderfully written. In fact, Li Xiao can also make a guest appearance in another book.
Not bad, give the author a five-star review
First give me a five-star review. It's so chic in the true sense. There's no heroine, no ambiguity, no virgin, and no worries. Your article is short and concise. I like it.
The writing is really good. I can't comment on the plot, but the writing is really good.
Not bad, just too short.
It's good, very creative, but it ends a bit quickly and abruptly.