One Piece: Keep Training and Become Invincible

Not bad, but there are too many typos, and sometimes I don't even know when I say them.

Goldfinger and the opening are both good, but the protagonist is not very bright. Luffy Ace's route of jokingly being called a pirate but actually being an adventurer is because of his background. The other pirates are villains who will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. If the protagonist wants to become stronger, why doesn't he join the navy? If he joins the navy and trains hard, he will become stronger. Isn't it nice to be a pirate and become an admiral before being sentenced to become a pirate? It's really funny to conquer the world in the East China Sea. Goldfinger doesn't just become stronger as his power grows stronger.

What a typo! I even doubt whether you wrote it yourself!

Remember to change your name back

It's not much different from the original work. The lines are the same. The difference is that the protagonist is not named Luffy. This book won't be popular. Let's wait and see.

Rubbish

Generally speaking, it's just a matter of walking and flying.

There are too many typos, which greatly affects the viewing [smile]

The front part is okay, but the back part is unreadable. I just want to ask, do you know the author of this typo? Write that big traditional Chinese character

Has your account been hacked? There are a lot of typos at the back. Please correct them.