National Fortune: as the King of Rolls, I'm Sorry

₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑The author's book is very interesting and very relaxing. There are no messy emotional lines. The story is interesting and the plot is coherent.

It is recommended that the author change the protagonist in the book from the second person to the third person. Otherwise, he would be the protagonist one moment, and then he would be me again, which would be a huge contrast. [Understood]

The writing style needs to be improved, and the listening effect is not very good. There is a female protagonist, but there are not many emotional lines. The author prefers to play jokes. Keep away from thunder

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

. . . . The rating is how you feel about your book. Well

Just average. There were too many that I thought were bad jokes. I felt a little uncomfortable watching them, so I quit.

…………Looking very confused

Not bad, come on

Generally

Why is it sometimes referred to in the third person and then in the first person? It always makes me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, me, mine.

The article is novel and awkward, but I think it's quite interesting. Come on ٩( •㉨• )و get!

You are an h country. Every time I read it, it is Korea. You can change it to hx or other homophones.