Gu Dao*****

So far, there are no poisonous points. The author has written something like a real person. He uses trivial daily life and farming to show the customs and customs of the Gu world. It is really amazing. The character of the protagonist is also good. Although it is not as indestructible as the model worker's heart of no regrets, it is decisive and tender.

It's so good. The author has read the original work. It's different from the original fan fiction. Every fan fiction almost follows the trajectory of the circle. Only this one is different. It's not that fan fiction can only be written in a dark style. It has to be written differently to make it look good.

Very nice (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, I hope I can update it ten times a day

I came from the bar and took a look. There is nothing wrong with it. Maybe the protagonist will take the shadow sect route in the future? In my humble opinion, if you want to take this route, it would be better to arrange soul path Gu than dream path Gu. After all, Dream Dao is too precious at this time. One is that it will be very troublesome after being exposed, and the other is that you are not a demon lord's split soul. It is more reasonable for the ghost to give Soul Dao Gu. The others are too few now to be seen. Gu fanfics are inherently difficult to write, and even if they are well written, it will be difficult to become popular. I just hope that the author will not give up!

Awesome! A masterpiece! Real person g was with me during my high school years. Fang Yuan's story gave me motivation and courage, and also gave me the belief to go to college. Now that I am a senior and about to graduate, I hope the author can make a dream come true for those who like real person g and Fang Yuan. The road ahead is long, and only the goal in your heart can keep going! Come on author! Come on Fang Yuan!

Okay, it's been a while since I've seen a real person fanfic. [What] [What] are you waiting for the update? Why hasn't there been a new chapter yet?

Magnificent, I love Immortal Lord, a different and wonderful story. Keep up the good work, author, it's hard to have a hard time waiting for updates every day. Waiting for Wuhu to take off...

Overall it's pretty good, but I feel like I can't keep up with the model workers as I write it this way. It's a bit difficult without a golden finger. It's a pity. The main reason is that the combat power of the blessed land collapsed. The upgrade was too fast. Without previous life experience, it is unreasonable to go directly from the 4th level to the 7th level of combat power. Okay, this is even better than Ma Hongyun 13

You may not know what it means to win against Fang Yuan alone. We usually only use two words to describe this kind of person: Mr. Long! I often say that back then, Qi Jue Neng and Wuji were so inseparable that it was not a problem for me, Mr. Long, to defeat Fang Yuan alone. If you ambush him, this voodoo cannot be used, if this voodoo does not need to be sealed, he will be dead. Give him a Chaos Dragon Fist with his backhand, and he will make a fortune silently. He uses Five Finger Sword Heart? But don't be afraid, he can't beat me. Dragon Gate, Dragon Royal Guest, Dragon Son and Dragon Grandson, the three qi have returned, this Gu is awesome, if this fate Gu is completely repaired, I will kill it this time, but it has not been repaired yet. Cang Xuanzi alone would be stupid and drive away Wannian Dou. Let him stand up against her. Ziwei, hurry up, Ziwei, Ziwei, don't you even want the Luoxing Stick? Ziwei, hurry up! Ziwei, don't dawdle. Long Yu is a distinguished guest. I made a mistake and should have returned with three breaths. Let Ziwei be a hero among people. Let Ziwei add a hero among people. Add a hero to Ziwei! Start your intellectual show and deceive him! Scam him. Pretty! Can you beat me just by being arrogant? Can you kill me instantly? ! You were able to defeat Mr. Long today with just your arrogance, me! When! Field! Just eat this fairy tomb. Fang Yuan has been reborn many times. In his first life, he was moved by God's will. God sent him to be reborn five hundred years ago with the help of the Spring and Autumn Cicada. However, the great era is coming, and demons are on the rise. If the protagonist Fang Yuan wants to thoroughly implement love and justice, he must fight against the heroes of the world. When he was in Gu Yue Village, he and the fifth-level evil demon Gu Yue died in a battle, but God was moved by his brave wisdom and helped him to be reborn. Later, in the Three Kings inheritance place, in order to help the Oogway Spirit fulfill his last wish, he did not hesitate to make enemies of the heroes of the Southern Territory. In the end, he was betrayed by the evil Bai Ningbing and died. Fortunately, God helped him at the last moment to use the Spring Autumn Cicada to reborn and successfully come back. Many sages in history were impressed by Fang Yuan's kindness and love. Among them, the Ghost Demon Lord contributed his ninth-turn supreme immortal fetus, and several immortals such as Honglian, Thieving Heaven, and Yuan Yuan contributed many true inheritances. Finally, in the Fateful War, Fang Yuan returned Fate Gu for the people of the world, completely liberating the world. People were grateful. In the past two days, the aliens surrendered to Fang Yuan's clone, Wu Shuai, and formed an alien alliance, while the immortals in the East China Sea sincerely worshiped Fang Yuan's clone, Qihai Ancestor, as the leader of the Righteous Alliance. But Fang Yuan is still worried. He senses an extremely evil aura. The evil lords in history are being resurrected. For the stability of the world, Fang Yuan is still working hard to stop the spread of evil. Of course, he is not alone. God will always be by his side to train him and give him the most dangerous situations so that he can grow into a being that can compete with the evil lords.

From the bar, it's the best piece of fan fiction. It looks pretty good so far, it just depends on whether the author can stick to it. Everyone knows how the original book is. It's normal to have low popularity. 8U can only make a few contributions a week. Again, stick to it

A very good Gu Dao fanfic. It can also be regarded as another story in the original setting. There is nothing poisonous about it. I like it very much.

It's very good. Keep it up, author. It's rare to see books about model workers.

The writing is very good and the taste is quite upright. How many times does the author update it a day? Can there be more?

It is a rare Gu* fan work that not only adheres to the original work, but also goes its own way. The only shortcoming is that the update is too slow.

It's okay. I personally recommend this book that I found by accident. As long as you can endure the first part, the second part will be better. [Chigua]

I finished reading it in less than a day, and it's pretty good so far. It's worth a read if you like Gu. The author is a very nice person, interacts a lot, and accepts good advice. It would be nice to write more exciting plots and create and combine various strange killing moves and Gu worms. After all, this is the essence of the original work.

One of the rare excellent real-person fanfics, I hope the author can persevere [almost crying]

I haven't read the original work of Da Ai Xian Zun, and I can't find it now. It would be great to have a well-written fanfic. ... It's better to read the original work. That Xiong Jiang is really a failure... It's bland and tasteless. In addition to calculations, the original work also occasionally has blood. You're just like Boruto. Moreover, your battles are all about two immortal killing moves that are gone after being thrown at the opponent, without any description...

There has never been an Immortal Gu in Gut Gu, or it is possible that you can fill this gap. Come on, I am optimistic about you. By the way, can our cute and charming Gu Gubai be written as the heroine? In fact, I have long wanted to see Xiao Bai get gouged [laughter]

There are very few novels about Gu, and even fewer are good ones. It's rare that this book is well written. I hope that while listening to readers' opinions, the author can retain his own opinions to a certain extent and not be overly influenced by readers.

By the way, those readers who haven't watched Gu Zhenren will not understand some of the Gu plots. This may cause some readers to stop reading. I haven't read it in depth yet. I'll find out first [Cool]

It stands to reason that the protagonist has read the original work and knows some inheritance, so he will not be unknown in Lao Mo's previous life. Lao Mo should not not know the protagonist

It is recommended to arrange an eighth-level cave for the protagonist, and then leave a refining true meaning to at least get a master. Otherwise, the success rate of refining the immortal Gu will not be high, and the resources will be difficult to keep up. Then find a time path inheritance to speed up the time flow of the immortal aperture, and at least get an eighth level in the fate battle.

The writing is good, almost like an immortal [laughing evilly]

The writing is very exciting, with different trajectories. Living your own wonderful life is the true meaning of life [laughs] There are not so many magical skills in the world. The question is that the sword technique of warding off evil is right in front of you. Do you practice it or not?

It's not bad, although it's not as good as the original work, but it's good for a newcomer to write like this. The protagonist is not as cold-blooded as Fang Yuan. If it were written like the original book, we would not be able to see it. Of course, as other comments said, there are some shortcomings. I hope the author can make more improvements, such as setting up more obstacles for the protagonist and making the battle scenes more exciting. Otherwise, it will be as ordinary as a running account.

It's pretty cool, but are the chapters out of order? As I read it, I found that the plot had already been written before.

I'll go, I have another fan, I hope I can write more about this

The author has thoroughly researched the plot of the original book. Some of the original plots and characters and the practice of Gu are very detailed. The author probably read the original work several times carefully before writing it. Although the characteristics of Daai Immortal are not fully highlighted, the overall story is still very good, there are no poisonous points, and the plot is good. Also, the author is very nice. He will answer questions for many readers in the comment area of ​​each chapter, and he often accepts better suggestions. Book lovers can feel free to enter the trap [face covering]

Personally, I think it's pretty good. I can listen to it while I'm at work and it can help me stay up longer.