At the Beginning, Rocks Asked Me to Be a Cadre

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It's very good. This is one of the better One Piece fanfics I've read. However, I feel that the main body of the book is a bit off in general. I don't mean that, but it's just that it's not so attractive after reading it. Take personal opinions

Yes, this is one of the few novels that I can read and update in one go. Although the author feels a little perfunctory as you go to the end, the plot is coherent and makes you want to read more. I hope the author can add me. Author, I urge you to add more. I liked it for so long and re-read it. I'm almost finished again. Don't force me to send you a razor blade.

Personally, I think it's very good. The strength in the early stage is quickly improved in a pirate style, unlike forcibly weakening it for the sake of balance. There is the kind of person who is truly integrated into that world, with friends, lovers, and relatives. Personally I think it's very good. While listening to the book, I originally wanted to complain about some parts. The protagonist is very good, but this is the second dimension. If you are not a good boy, it is a waste! When I looked at it again, I suddenly thought it was great.

It's so good that I finished it in one sitting. It's very addicting and makes me want to watch the next plot. Although the male protagonist is quite a stud, he is not described in detail, which is acceptable. I feel that my ambition will increase again after the founding of the People's Republic of China.

I have to say that this book stands out from the rest of the Tomato Pirates fanfics. The subject matter is novel and unique, and the combat power values ​​are clear and clear, unlike some Pirates fanfics, which are vague! Support ⬆️ reminder for updates! ! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It is very appetizing, and the plot is very good. Most harem books are not good to read, but this book ranks among the best and very good to read. The protagonists of other harem books made me sick, but the character and style of the protagonist in this book are very suitable for my appetite. Doing whatever you want without being pretentious is not hypocritical at all. My previous books were boring after reading 200 chapters, but I have never found this book to be very interesting, with less nonsense, or the writing style is interesting. Even if there are some mistakes, I am not disgusted at all [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] The writing about the wife and maid is not good,

It's very good. What I want is the kind of character who suddenly appears, rather than becoming a supporting character in other fanfics. That would change the image of this character in my mind and make me disgusted. This book is very good. It does not become a character in the original work, but a new character appears to influence other characters instead of changing the original work.

It's very interesting. The content is real and rich. I think the harem is very good.

It's a pretty good Pirates fanfic, but the pacing isn't very good. The beginning is good. In the middle and later stages, the main character's strength is deliberately suppressed. But it makes sense. Pirates have an upper limit. It's really hard to break through without a golden finger. I'm tired of reading novels about punching Im and kicking Yonko. This one is pretty good. If not, just finish the book as soon as possible. The writing at the end is too watery.

How should I put it? It's not as good-looking as you think, nor as bad as you think. It depends on the person, I prefer light-hearted writing.

I love watching it! It's just a little watery sometimes, but it's acceptable In fact, I don't think it is necessary to follow the ingredients in the original work. You can create your own devil fruit, such as an animal-type bird fruit, a fantasy beast type, a three-legged golden crow form, etc. [Thinking] There is too much water in the back, and there is no end of water. There is no land in sight, and I have no desire to continue watching [laughs awkwardly]. I'm convinced. Fellow pirate, you are going to build a country, and then there are a lot of auctions. I won't mention anything else. Are the people under your command an army? They are pirates. How much more can you do if you let them become pirates? Later on, I became more and more outrageous and separated from Pirates. Anyway, I couldn't stand it any longer and gave up [Shocked]

Very good. The protagonist's strength goes from being weak to standing at the top of the world step by step. Unlike many fan fictions nowadays, one system provides various resources and allows you to grow without any pressure, instead of playing pigs and eating tigers.

The arrangement and plot in the book are pretty good. However, the personal will of the characters in the original work was more seriously affected, and it felt like the author was bewitched by Charlotte. There is no direct clear change of position, but the details are indeed a bit uncomfortable, such as Garp and Sora. Also, the interpersonal descriptions and fighting scenes seem to be lumped together. Although it is very enjoyable to watch at first, it will become boring after a long time. I really hope to change this. I am definitely not saying this because I want to watch a romantic drama/doge. There are so many advantages. So many characters can be taken care of and it's really super interesting. I hope it doesn't collapse. Finally, it would be best if the author is inspired by what he has seen, just don't go under the knife because of me, you are awesome now [Sending my heart]

I am a fan of One Piece. I have read more than 200 chapters. Some people say that some of the characters are awkward to laugh at, and some of the characters have different personalities. Personally, I think those things would be awkward and bad in normal novels, but in One Piece fanfiction, it's very visual, because that's what anime looks like when I watch it.

I haven't read the One Piece fic in the family form, it's a good read.

This book is good. The protagonist is either invincible at the beginning or has relatively high talents. He gradually develops and collects various fruits for his children to eat. Moreover, the protagonist brings his own descendants to the pirate group, so there is no betrayal at all, and there is also a harem [laughing] [like] [like] [like] It is...…………………………………………………………………………………… The author will update a lot, please hurry up [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

This book is great and worth recommending. The description of the fighting is great, and the plot structure is also great. It makes me feel like I am watching a story from the era of Rocks to the Age of Navigation. It has the same visual feel as watching the anime One Piece. MD stayed up until after 4 o'clock for 3 days in a row, and it seemed endless. I won't comment on the specific content, just read it. If the complete One Piece manga is used as the framework of this book, combined with the author's book, I think it will be a highly rated book. After I finish watching it, I will watch the second episode later, and then add various characters' laughter as a follow-up review. The highest frequency sentence in this book: The sky is split open. [Like][Like][Like]

If you are a fan of One Piece, you can read chapter 888 in one go!

It's pretty good. So far, I personally feel that there are a few problems with the ones written in Sea City and Red Earl. (My personal suggestion is to skip them quickly.) Others are pretty good. Come on┗┃ ■ ┃┛

All I can say is that the author is great! Keep it up, I will never accept finishing it by scratching the surface, the content of the novel is super good [like] I spent all my change from reading the novel every day [asking for updates], I only hope that the author can work hard to add chapters to the book [currently in progress] It's so good that I cried [crying]. I squat for two chapters every morning, day after day. I beg the author to update one more chapter every day. [Please update]

I think this book is well written. At least it's much better than other fanfics. Other fanfics either use a system to fill in the gaps, increase the number of words for the options, are empty or do not mention the original events and characters of One Piece at all, and what is even more disgusting are interspersed with settings and power systems from other Japanese comics (it is simply polluting my spiritual world with the excrement of One Piece fanfics). Although this book is well written, some details are still not handled well enough. For example, some disputes about combat power, descriptions of character details, etc. Of course, part of the reason is also because the One Piece manga has not been updated to the finale, and some of the foreshadowings are revealed later than when the author portrayed the characters (such as Bear, Bucky), but overall it is much better than other fanfics and deserves 4 stars.

Very few comments, but it's really good. I've read a lot of Pirates fanfics. This is the only one that doesn't have all the characters magically modified. The protagonist is just brought into the world and becomes the emperor. There are no magical modifications or changes in the plot of the major events in One Piece. It's entered from another angle. Although some characters and personalities have been magically modified, they are still within the acceptable range. Overall, it is a very good pirate fanfic. Although it has flaws, it is acceptable. I hope that the text will become richer and richer, and the characters in it will become more and more obvious. One Piece is popular in the world because of the unique and rich characters. I hope the author can see it. I hope that the character characteristics of One Piece can be substituted as much as possible. One more thing, a very serious problem, the update is too slow. . . . . . . . . .

It still needs to be evaluated. For a protagonist from the Rocks era to modern times, the group portrait writing is still good, and every character is well written. After all, this is a Tomato novel, and it is free. The author's novel has not become popular and cannot make much money. It is barely enough to survive. The author has been insisting on updating not only so that our readers who like to watch it can finish watching Tai Chao, but also because the author also likes this animation of passionate youth. If you don't like it, please leave it

The author should write more about the plot between Hilud and Sweifa! At least it's a combination of an angel, a demon, a fantasy beast + an overlord, and at least the emperor's mate. I don't want to see Robert and Deidara. Let's write more about the plot of these two little girls! Good reviews are sent [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

In the early stage, the Five Old Pirates were pretty good to watch. Dad's Pirates (Whitebeard) Mom Pirates (Big Mom) Dad's Pirates (Rockefeller) The Old Pirates Group (Shi Ji) Brother Pirates (Roger)

The writing is very smooth, not brainless, very good

Feeling okay about myself. The previous plot was pretty good too. Well, the protagonist is also quite unique. I haven't watched too much of One Piece either. But I still think it looks pretty good. Give it a five-star support.

It's good to watch. Come on, I've been fighting for so long, and now it's written around the third generation. I guess Luffy will go to the new world to cause trouble again, but I don't know how to write the game that involves the world government.

It's so good. It's the best one among the Pirates fics (personal opinion). The timeline, the description of the protagonist, and the story of the whole book are all perfect. I don't understand why the rating can't go up to nine.