Trillions of sentient beings all hear my way, and all the heavens and spirits respect me!
There are countless strong people in the world, how can the weak survive?
If you cannot be ordinary, then control the heavens.
Above all things!
[Invincible Astronomy][Fast plot]
Reader comments
Not bad! But it looks messy
It's quite a double standard. You are a man who is running for 30 years old, and you go to hug a 134-year-old man and talk about anti-inflammatory and disgusting. Although his approach is a bit disgusting, you are not the same.
Not good, I looked a little confused and slipped away
Very pretty
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Some areas still need to be improved.
But fan fiction is all about developing the author's imagination!
Five stars, keep up the hard work!
It's quite good to read. It's very similar to a book I liked to read before. Men will definitely like to read it, but there aren't too many details.
[Praise]
[Like][Love]
Can
Good looking, come on￣￣)σ
It's okay, I just hope it doesn't suck later. [Thinking][thinking]
I feel that the character of the protagonist in your fanfic is not as good as the villain. You are not a villain, and you are not good at being a righteous protagonist.
Why doesn't the protagonist first deceive the ring and get everything from the group of opportunities first? Also, it takes so long for a high-level repairman to defeat a low-level one. Isn't it just one move in seconds?
The writing is really messy and I can't understand the timeline.
The division of character strength is not clear. Earlier it was said that there was only Dou Zun, but later on, Half Saint and Dou Saint appeared, and it was very difficult for a Dou Saint to fight against Emperor. 6
You can still write this, keep it up [Like][Like][Like][Like]💪💪💪💪💪💪
Not bad, but it's too short. There are only 30 pictures. Where can I see enough?
Not bad! But it looks messy
It's quite a double standard. You are a man who is running for 30 years old, and you go to hug a 134-year-old man and talk about anti-inflammatory and disgusting. Although his approach is a bit disgusting, you are not the same.
Not good, I looked a little confused and slipped away
Very pretty
▓
Some areas still need to be improved. But fan fiction is all about developing the author's imagination! Five stars, keep up the hard work!
It's quite good to read. It's very similar to a book I liked to read before. Men will definitely like to read it, but there aren't too many details.
[Praise]
[Like][Love]
Can
Good looking, come on￣￣)σ
It's okay, I just hope it doesn't suck later. [Thinking][thinking]
I feel that the character of the protagonist in your fanfic is not as good as the villain. You are not a villain, and you are not good at being a righteous protagonist.
Why doesn't the protagonist first deceive the ring and get everything from the group of opportunities first? Also, it takes so long for a high-level repairman to defeat a low-level one. Isn't it just one move in seconds?
The writing is really messy and I can't understand the timeline.
The division of character strength is not clear. Earlier it was said that there was only Dou Zun, but later on, Half Saint and Dou Saint appeared, and it was very difficult for a Dou Saint to fight against Emperor. 6
You can still write this, keep it up [Like][Like][Like][Like]💪💪💪💪💪💪
Not bad, but it's too short. There are only 30 pictures. Where can I see enough?
Didn't the boss write it? Add a friend.